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Thunder grunted, he fell to his knees coughing. He looked up " my daughter....that's why" he said as he looked at the ground. "Do you k ow how that feels....to watch...your little princess....disappear...gone....from my life" he said in tears "DO YOU KNOW HOW THAT FEELS.....SHE'S GONE...AND IT WAS ALL....my fault....I couldn't stop him...." He held his chest and put his other hoof on the ground and coughed through his tears.


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Thunder grunted, he fell to his knees coughing. He looked up " my daughter....that's why" he said as he looked at the ground. "Do you k ow how that feels....to watch...your little princess....disappear...gone....from my life" he said in tears "DO YOU KNOW HOW THAT FEELS.....SHE'S GONE...AND IT WAS ALL....my fault....I couldn't stop him...." He held his chest and put his other hoof on the ground and coughed through his tears.

sole once again found himself hesitant to attack. "No, I wouldn't know how that feels, I ant even remember if I have a family or not." He said sadly "but I found a family in crimson, tempest, blake, tobi... even you." He said quietly "but now thats all gone, you've turned my family against me, and killed my master. I can't just let that go!" He growled, as he summoned a black energy sword and got in a fighting stance. "Get up, we're finishing this!"

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Thunder tried to get up, but he fell. He then got up eventually and stood in a sloppy pose. "He killed my daughter, but you find no sympathy, you really are a monster..." He coughed, he only had so much longer to live now in his current state. "I might as well...finish you..." He said.


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Thunder tried to get up, but he fell. He then got up eventually and stood in a sloppy pose. "He killed my daughter, but you find no sympathy, you really are a monster..." He coughed, he only had so much longer to live now in his current state. "I might as well...finish you..." He said.

sole smiled sadly "that's right, I am a monster." He said quietly "I've had... horrible nightmares about my past. I know I'm evil, but I'm still trying." He said shakily "and I believe everyone deserves a second chance, even madara." His expression became serious, as he rushed forward and swung at his chest with the sword. "Let's finish this!" He growled. Edited by drocsid-soahc

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Thunder jumped back, and dodged the hits, he then felt a sharp pain in his chest. And then he was hit in the shoulder, the blade pierced his should, thunder took it out and jumped back. Then he looked at the sky. "In going to end it here." He said. He put his hoof up in pain. The clouds grew dark, and soon thunder and lightning could be heard. "This ends....now" he said. A dragon head made of lightning came down, the shape of it was a mile long in every direction. "Be gone with the thunder clap" soon as the dragon crashed into sole, the explosion of lightning sent the Field into a abnormal area. The force if the explosion made thunder get shot through the land. When he hit the ground he looked up at the sky...as blood came out of his mouth. He coughed. "Is it finally time...." He hoped.


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Thunder jumped back, and dodged the hits, he then felt a sharp pain in his chest. And then he was hit in the shoulder, the blade pierced his should, thunder took it out and jumped back. Then he looked at the sky. "In going to end it here." He said. He put his hoof up in pain. The clouds grew dark, and soon thunder and lightning could be heard. "This ends....now" he said. A dragon head made of lightning came down, the shape of it was a mile long in every direction. "Be gone with the thunder clap" soon as the dragon crashed into sole, the explosion of lightning sent the Field into a abnormal area. The force if the explosion made thunder get shot through the land. When he hit the ground he looked up at the sky...as blood came out of his mouth. He coughed. "Is it finally time...." He hoped.

sole screamed at the unbelievable pain, before dropping to the ground. "I-i'm not dying here..." he said angrily, as he stood from pure rage "I've lost everything because of you, I'm not gonna let you kill me!" He growled, as he coughed up a large amount of blood "and, I'm not going to let you die either, but I will get revenge." He mumbled weakly, as he summoned energy around his wings and stood over thunder. "I... win." He said weakly, barely able to stand.

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Crimson had noticed only too late that blake had ditched him and stayed behind to watch thunder and sole fight, crimson cursed and teleported to blake, but instead of seeing a forest of trees, he was in a huge crater, blake was nowhere to be found, but crimson sensed thunders aura was fading quickly, "NO! Where are you thunder!?" Asked crimson in a panic, "dammit! His energy is covering the entire area, there's no way I can sense thunder or sole in this shit!" Thought crimson, before he began searching for thunder and sole while shouting their names.

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Thunder laughed...but it turned to a wheeze, he shook his head "no...I win.... Tobi is gone...your...your back... At least away fro*cough* from...corruption....and n-now...I can be with my...little girl..." Said thunder coughing. He then smiled, and for once he was actually happy, and just to add to the moment. It started to rain. Thunder could hear crimsons voice.

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Tempest felt a massive surge of energy and started writhing on the ground in mental pain. "What the buck is going on!?" He yelled. The cyan pegesus could barely even move, due to the amount of pain he was in. Tempest then simply blacked out.

 

Aqua felt the surge of energy, but she didn't experience as much pain as Tempest.

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Thunder laughed...but it turned to a wheeze, he shook his head "no...I win.... Tobi is gone...your...your back... At least away fro*cough* from...corruption....and n-now...I can be with my...little girl..." Said thunder coughing. He then smiled, and for once he was actually happy, and just to add to the moment. It started to rain. Thunder could hear crimsons voice.

sole couldn't take it, he was crying uncontrollably "no..." he said quietly "no, no, no, no. You aren't gonna die, I won't let you!" He said shakily "its not your time, your little girl can wait!" He droped to the ground next to him "thunder, dont die on me, c'mon!" Through the rain, he could hear crimson calling out their names.

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Blake jumped into the clearing, he looked at thunder, and then sole. He remained quiet because he had no idea what to do. And he was awfully afraid he would do something wrong and mess up, so he just stood there in silence, feeling the emotion that was being given by sole.


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Blake jumped into the clearing, he looked at thunder, and then sole. He remained quiet because he had no idea what to do. And he was awfully afraid he would do something wrong and mess up, so he just stood there in silence, feeling the emotion that was being given by sole.

sole quickly looked up to find blake watching them quietly "blake..." he said quietly "please, go get help!" He had a pleading look in his eyes "c'mon blake hurry, he's dying!" He looked back down to thunder "your not gonna die thunder, your little girl wouldn't want that!" He said shakily, as he once again heard crimson yel again, closer this time. Edited by drocsid-soahc

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Blake hesitated, "o-o-ok ok" he said dashing off. In a couple minutes he came back with medical supplies. "No one would help. But I got these" he said dropping all the supplies and medicine. "Use these maybe they can help....besides the gaping hole in his chest" said Blake sighing.


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Blake hesitated, "o-o-ok ok" he said dashing off. In a couple minutes he came back with medical supplies. "No one would help. But I got these" he said dropping all the supplies and medicine. "Use these maybe they can help....besides the gaping hole in his chest" said Blake sighing.

sole sighed with frustration as he applied first aid "dammit!" He roared, as thunder lost more blood "t-this is all my fault..." he said quietly "thunder would be fine if it weren't for me..." he turned to blake "any ideas on how to help him?" He asked "maybe if we could get wonder here quickly enough, he could use his healing magic again." He suggested. "Just hang in there thunder, don't die on me!"

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Crimson gasped when he saw thunder, but before he walked over he heard what thunder had said about him dying to have the chance to see his daugher again, crimson gritted his teeth before running over to thunder and sole, "thunder you, stupid bastard! I don't care how much relief you feel in death, your not giving your life up that easily! I understand how you feel....how much pain and anger you feel at losing your daughter....after my sister was killed, I was exactly the same....all I wanted to do was kill the murderer and let myself die....but I never did kill the killer.....do you know why? Its becouse.....my father was the one who killed her! But after so many years of pain I never gave up, even knoeing who killed her! And niether are you!" Said crimson with tears in hid eyes before his horn began to glow, after a few moments crimson began to feed some of his energy to thunder in an attempt to keep him alive longer.

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Thunder soon grew unconscious, and he closed his eyes. His hole in his chest healed up, leaving no more than a scar. But he still had many cuts, scrapes and bruises, as well as broken bones. His head leaned to the side as his body was limb. But he his breathing was abnormal


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Thunder soon grew unconscious, and he closed his eyes. His hole in his chest healed up, leaving no more than a scar. But he still had many cuts, scrapes and bruises, as well as broken bones. His head leaned to the side as his body was limb. But he his breathing was abnormal

sole looked up at crimson and smiled "thanks hothead." He said quietly, as he looked at thunder "do you think he'll live blake?" He asked "cuz I've got no clue! At least that whole in his chest is gone..." he mumbled, as he stood up. "Alright" he said slowly, drying his tears "you guys take him back to the others." He said quietly.

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Wonder and Aqua finally reached the capital city of Ger-mane-y. He looked around t.oo see the incredibly familiar architectural design and structure. There always seemed to be somepony shouting at you to buy some strange type of meat. He found the palace easily, it being the tallest building in the city. "Alright, you need to be sure to show as much respect to the royalty as possible." He said, not entirely worried about this.

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Aqua nodded. "I already have a plan for that. I'll just let you do all the talking." She said, smiling slightly.

 

Tempest groaned as he woke up. He looked around the cabin and noticed that Nightfury and Ivy were still asleep and sighed. "Tobi really did a number on you two." He thought.

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Wonder smiled as he opened the main palace doors and stepped through them. "My lord and ladyship. We've come to seek counsel with you. I have great hopes to secure a treaty with Ger-mane-y and Equestria." He smirked as he presented him to the summons area. "I have a favor to call on."

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Aqua watched as Wonder and the dignitaries conversed. She wouldn't talk, unless somepony talked to her. "I just hope this plan works." She thought. The young unicorn didn't exactly trust the digniatries's advisor, but she kept that comment to herself.

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Blake shrugged looking at thunders condition. "I don't know, but he needs real Medical attention, and I ain't a doctor so I can't really do anything" said Blake shrugging his shoulders. He then melt down beside thunder. "But he's breathing weirdly" said blake


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Blake shrugged looking at thunders condition. "I don't know, but he needs real Medical attention, and I ain't a doctor so I can't really do anything" said Blake shrugging his shoulders. He then melt down beside thunder. "But he's breathing weirdly" said blake

sole nodded "just take him to the others, I'm sure they could help him better then us." He said quietly, as he turned to leave "I'll see you guys later, i want to be alone for a while... to think." He whisired. With that, he spread his wings and began to fly away.

((What now?))


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Crimson sighed with releaf as the large hole in thunders chest dissappeared, he then looked at blake and glared, "next time I say follow....THEN FOLLOW ME....."sigh" what did sole do to thunder? Hit him with bucking dragon!" Asked crimson in an annoyed tone before listening closely to thunders breathing, "but you are right, his breathing is abnormal, but we don't have a doctor......so there's not much we can do..." said crimson with a worried look.

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Blake sighed, "well....sole put his fist into thunders chest...and thunder made a lightning dragon...that was so big it was like a mile wide, and it crashed onto sole....which explains the giant power surge that came from it" said Blake. "Let's go to the ponyville hospital, they'll know what to do" he said.


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