Sketchy Twilight

[Arcus (Silver Lining) Wind 982]

I don't know what I'm doing. I start to sketch a random pony and it's not till I'm almost done that I decide who it is. Have a random Twilight. Please leave a comment.

 

[HunterScars 505]

the wings are really good and so is the mane and tail but the hooves are a little but wide at the bottom  but otherwise it's really good 

[Lunas Husband 2,777]

I for one LOVE IT! its great I really hope you do more! If many, you should do a Luna I'm mean come on now you did twilight sooooo damn good I'm sure you could do a very sexier Luna!

[Danze 15]

I'm not sure I can offer any useful artistic critique, but it looks great! She does kind of have a bit more of a serious look here than the typical "adorkable" twilight, so I do think a similar drawing with Luna could work really well. Maybe it's something in her eyes that make her look more serious, I'm not exactly sure. 

[Silverwisp the Bard 2,353]

Cute style you got going on there, would love to see more of it.

-Hooves look doughy at the moment doe to squiggly outlines, you might wanna fix that

-The neck is a bit thick, slimming it down would also free up some room between wings and mane.

[Arcus (Silver Lining) Wind 982]

the wings are really good and so is the mane and tail but the hooves are a little but wide at the bottom  but otherwise it's really good 

Thanks. The wider legs are kind of a style I'm going for. Though, I think your right, it needs to taper more instead of being wide mostly at the hooves.

 

 

I for one LOVE IT! its great I really hope you do more! If many, you should do a Luna I'm mean come on now you did twilight sooooo damn good I'm sure you could do a very sexier Luna!

Perhaps I will.

 

 

I'm not sure I can offer any useful artistic critique, but it looks great! She does kind of have a bit more of a serious look here than the typical "adorkable" twilight, so I do think a similar drawing with Luna could work really well. Maybe it's something in her eyes that make her look more serious, I'm not exactly sure. 

Could be the eyes. Or that I didn't draw a mouth so it's hard to read her emotion.

 

 

Cute style you got going on there, would love to see more of it.

-Hooves look doughy at the moment doe to squiggly outlines, you might wanna fix that

-The neck is a bit thick, slimming it down would also free up some room between wings and mane.

Why thank you. I'm not sure what you mean by doughy legs. You're right about the neck. I've been told before that I made them to thin. Guess I'll have to try and find a middle thickness.

[SoarinBlue 202]

Her body seems really small and way out of proportion with her legs and neck, but other than that it looks very good. Nice work on the details especially

[Princess Periwinkle 3,774]

I really like it!

Only, her hooves are too big, and I don't think she has that little chip in her wing.

 

But on the whole, I think this is a great sketch.

[Arcus (Silver Lining) Wind 982]

I really like it!

 

Only, her hooves are too big, and I don't think she has that little chip in her wing.

 

But on the whole, I think this is a great sketch.

Thanks. I'm glad you like it. As for the clip in the wing and her hooves, those are just style chooses. Although I think I might change the legs a little bit.

[Dopey Hooves 90]

The drawing is good overall. But, I see one tiny mistake. Twilight's face is a little more longer, steeper and a tiny bit chubbier. I would give it a:

 

9/10

 

Twilight's face looks like this:

See the difference?

[HunterScars 505]

Thanks. The wider legs are kind of a style I'm going for. Though, I think your right, it needs to taper more instead of being wide mostly at the hooves.

 

 

well in that case you did a mighty fine job and how did you do the cutie mark i can never draw / vector that properly anyway keep up the good work 

[Arcus (Silver Lining) Wind 982]

The drawing is good overall. But, I see one tiny mistake. Twilight's face is a little more longer, steeper and a tiny bit chubbier. I would give it a:

 

9/10

 

Twilight's face looks like this:

See the difference?

Thank you for taking the time to comment.As for her face, it's mostly a style choice.I'm not going for show accurate. Not to mention this is just a quick doodle/sketch.