private Fall into Insanity

[Demonic Soulz 483]

Equinox arrived in Invermare with his katana strapped to his back. "Maybe I can figure out about this stupid curse here...it seems like all my thought lead to nothing. "Equinox said as he passed by other ponies which stared at him for he was talking to himself.

[sunne 660]

((Have you told the others about the plot?))

 

 

Broken Cloud woke up in a daze. For a moment she wondered where she was. She finally remembered that she was in a cloud in the boring little town of Invermare. 

'Great. Another boring day in my new boring home.' she thought idly as she kicked a hole in the slightly gray cloud. As well as busting clouds, she had a knack for making burrows in clouds to sleep. She opened her wings and flapped, and the cloud basically dissipated. 

Broken's stomach growled, so she started looking for a restaurant from her view up in the air. Before she could find one, some random Pegasus((NPC)) whizzed by, clipping her. she started falling. She landed on somepony. It was a stallion((@,)) 

Broken Cloud stood up and cursed under her breath. She saw him flying closer, and she struggled to keep Fallen under control.

"Calm down, Broken... Just an accident..."

Angry as she may be, she had wanted a somewhat fresh start. She wasn't about to let Fallen take control on her third day here.

The Pegasus stallion landed and trotted over to her.

"Hey, sorry about that. Heh. My buddy and I were in a little competition on who could clear the clouds faster, and I didn't s-"

"Whatever."

"Huh?"

Broken mentally groaned and gritted her teeth. It was hard enough keeping Fallen at bay. It was giving her a headache to just listen to this imbecile. Her dark personality seemed to be especially strong today. 

"I don't care about your competition." Broken's head was throbbing. "Just. Get. Out. Of. My. Face."

The stallion looked offended, then his expression turned to anger.

"Hey, if anything, you brought it on yourself, you were in MY way."

With that, he turned around and walked away.

 

Just as Broken's yellow streaks in her mane and tail were about to go blue, just as her coat  and eyes started to get darker, she saw him fly away, and Fallen calmed down, for the most part, and her headache went away. She stared at her hooves, perplexed. What was going on? Her dark side never flared up or calmed down that fast.

 

((I know, long post, but all my intro posts are long.))

[Demonic Soulz 483]

((I probably should go and post the story so everyone can see it instead of having it on the first post))

 

Equinox left eye turned purple. "How about you be carful next time you b-" "Deranged please calm down" Equinox interrupted Deranged as he looked at the pegasus that fell on him. "Ummm...sorry I have anger issues that come close to getting out of hand" Equinox said. "So you lie and say you got anger problem when you know it me" Deranged said. "Deranged shut it" Equinox said before he looked at the pegasus. "Ummm...sorry if im acting strange"

[sunne 660]

@, 

Broken was ripped from her reverie as she heard the stallion she had landed on.

She just stared as he seemed to change his demeanor instantaneously. Unblinking, she gave him an emotionless gaze as she spoke.

"Yeah, you are acting weird, but it's familiar. Kind of like a second personality. Not my business, though. But So do I. About the anger issues, I mean. Nearly lost it on that idiot that made me fall on you."

Broken didn't know why she was telling him this, but she didn't much care. Ponies were going to find out anyway, especially after what happened just a few moments earlier, so why not start with telling somepony who had anger issues too? 

She turned fully twoards him and stood up.

"Name's Broken Cloud."

[Demonic Soulz 483]

"My name is Equinox Sin...but I got the nickname Deranged for a reason im not comfortable telling" Equinox said "Go ahead tell her it wont make her think any different" Deranged said as he took control of Equinox causing a noticable difference. "What he really is saying is that he has a second personality and that's me my name is Deranged and lets just say I love murder" Deranged said as he circled around Broken.

[sunne 660]

@, 

Broken almost smirked as Equinox changed. she continued to watch him emotionlessly as he circled around her. 

"Interesting. I figured you were like me."

'Okay Fallen, it's safe to come out.'

'Gladly.'

Fallen easily lashed out and took hold. Broken's once golden streaks became a piercing, electric ice blue. her coat became so dark it was almost black, as did her eyes, but they had an electric-ish tinge to them.

"Hello, Deranged. I'm Fallen." 

Fallen stared Deranged square in the eyes.

"Hmm... Murder is such a wonderful thing, don't you think? I personally like to make it messy."

A wide, murderous, unhinged grin spread on Fallen's face.

Edited June 26, 2013 by Silent Dawn

[Demonic Soulz 483]

"The messy part is easy especially when you make others insane enough to kill others" Deranged said as he pulled out the katana. "This thing helps me out...with mayhem cause Mayhem is murder if you do it correctly but where the fun in doing stuff correct" Deranged said as he twirled the katana around

[Skye42 59]

((Sorry for posting late. Argh XP. Also, I keep my chainsaw in another dimension. She uses her choas magic to bring it to her. That makes sence, right? Dark blue text for Midnight Swirl & Pink text for Mind Trick.))

 

Midnight Swirl walked into the town. She didn't know which one, but she didn't care. All she wanted to do was get away from the voices. "Come on Midnight, let's play! Play like how we used to." Mind Trick whined. Midnight was in the middle of the street, and she didn't want any attention brought on herself, so she didn't respond. "Oh please, don't act like you can't hear me. It won't work again." Mind Trick said with acid dripping from her words. 

"Shut up, I'm not going to talk to you in puplic." Midnight said under her breath. 

"Aww, but that's no fun then. Talking in puplic is so much more fun. Come on, can't we play? Just a little?" 

"No, I'm not going to 'play' with you at all." Midnight said with a louder tone. Ponies around her started to notice Midnight talking to herself.

"Please? Just for a minute? I promise that I'll won't talk to you in public ever again. Pleeease?"

"For the last time, I'm NOT going to play with you! Now shut up, and go away!" Midnight yelled. All the ponies on the street looked at her with confusion. Some of the foals snickered at her. Midnight blushed and quickly galloped away from the scene. "I. Bucking. Hate. You." Mind Trick just laughed maniacally. She turned a corner to find two ponies, one with an almost black coat and lightning blue streaks in her mane, and another one with a grey coat and purple eyes. 

 

Midnight Swirl used her magic to summon her chainsaw. They had wepons, and they seem to be insane. "So would you like my help? Or do you still hate me?" Mind Trick asked. 

"Let me see who they are and what there doing here. Then I'll decide."

Midnight came into the veiw of the ponies, and was ready to rev up her chainsaw. She slightly hid behind her mane. "So, what are you fine ponies doing on this lovely day?" Midnight said while trying to sound imtimidating.

 

@~Dishonored Luna~

@Silent Dawn

Edited June 26, 2013 by Skye42

[sunne 660]

Fallen's grin grew wider as Deranged spoke.

"I see, I have this dagger, It's also quite useful. Easy to hide. No, there isn't any fun in doing things correctly. Even Broken Cloud finds it boring! Haha!" The grin was even wider, and Fallen let out a high-pitched laugh laced with insanity. She stopped laughing as a pony with a chainsaw came up to them.

"Oh, hello, little pony."

'Weak, useless little mare.Or is she? She seems to give off the same dark energy that Equinox did while he was still in control...'

"We were just having a conversation... About our weapons... You have a mighty fine weapon there... You may want to run before I steal it and kill you..."

Normally Fallen wouldn't tease, she'd just go for the kill, but she was feeling somehow calm, despite her earlier outrage. She was still her insane, murderous self, but calm, in a way. Besides, this mare may be the same as her and Broken Cloud.

[Demonic Soulz 483]

"Well you try and sound intimidating...but the chainsaw works better if you dont try but hey who am I to judge" Deranged said as he appeared behind the mare with the chainsaw. "But it pretty useless without reving it up Deranged said as another pony came up to them. "I'm sorry but pleae put a-" the pony was interrupted by derange cutting them in half and ripping out their spine.

 

 

 

((Did i mention it could get really graphic))

[sunne 660]

Fallen just grinned as she watched Deranged mangle a random passerby. the same unhinged grin as earlier. She let out a loud laugh,also laced with insanity. She took a step toward the pony with a chainsaw.

"He's right. But this one may be an asset to us. Let's not kill her... yet."

Edited June 26, 2013 by Silent Dawn

[Demonic Soulz 483]

"I'm getting bored and I wanna kill" Deranged said as he looked at the pony with the chainsaw and Broken. "Anypony wanna join me" Deranged said grinning waiting for an answer form one of the mares. "Lets hurry before Equinox takes control and things get boring again"

[Skye42 59]

Midnight Swirl reved her Chainsaw up and glared at Deranged. "This better now?" She asked. Midnight thought a little about this. Could they be like me? Having voices in their heads? Making them do crazy things?

Mind Trick heard her thoughts and said, "What? Of course your not like them. You wanna know why? Cause your better. You've gotta chainsaw, chaos magic, and most importantly, me. So I'll ask again. Can I please come out and play?"

Midnight Swirl puffed some air out of her nose. "Fine, let's play a game."

 

After saying that, Midnight turned into Mind Trick. She swung her her chainsaw around and streached her limbs. "Been awhile snice I've been like this. It's quite wonderful, really."

"I'm getting bored and I wanna kill" Deranged said. "Anypony want to join me?"

Mind Trick laughed with excitement. "Sure, it will be great to kill again...haha." 

 

((So much colour needed X_X and when are the others joining?))

Edited June 26, 2013 by Skye42

[sunne 660]

Fallen beamed at Deranged's question Her grin was demented, as always. She grabbed her dagger, starting to hover in the air, a deadly glint in her nearly black eyes.

"Definitely. In fact, I wouldn't mind mutilating that imbecile that clipped me a while back. But anyone will do, really."

[Demonic Soulz 483]

((I dont know))

 

"I like her...shes awesome" Deranged said as he looked at Broken. "You coming also that's great more people means more mayhem" Deranged asked as he went out and started cutting random ponies up as the ran and scream. "Oh the wonderful blood shed it so beautiful...." Deranged said as he pulled out the spine of some of the ponies from the bodies that were partially alive causing them to die slowly

Edited June 26, 2013 by ~Dishonored Luna~

[sunne 660]

Fallen shot up into the air and quickly located the stallion from before. Her grin grew wider still. She flew right behind him, then under him, then jabbed the long dagger straight into where his heat was.   she grabbed him before he fell and started sawing off his appendages one by one. the smell of blood covered her hooves and she sucked in a large breath.

"What a wonderful smell, and sight... utterly beautiful."

She stabbed the stallion once more, let him drop, and flew to a dark alley, then came out and started killing random ponies on the street.

Edited June 26, 2013 by Silent Dawn

[Skye42 59]

Mind Trick hacked at several ponies and threw their courpses aside using her magic. When ever somepony tried to run away, so would instanly teleport infront of them and shove her chainsaw through thier bodies. Mind Trick cackled from all the blood flying in the air, and stained on her coat. Her satanic smile grew deeper. "My name is Mind Trick, by the way. My boring half calls herself Midnight Swirl." Mind Trick said to the others while using her magic to throw her chainsaw to impail a pony to the side of a building, and then teleported to retieve it. Only to then hack serval others. "What are your names?"

Edited June 26, 2013 by Skye42

[sunne 660]

Fallen's demented smile grew wider as she sliced her way through the worthless ponies. She looked at Mind Trick momentarily before tackling a filly and stabbing her. 

"I'm Fallen. Nice to meet you, Mind Trick."

She finished the filly off, watched the life disappear from her blue eyes, and laughed.

"I missed this so. Broken has been extremely boring lately."

((I won't be very active for a few days, except for maybe a bit tomorrow morning, sorry ))

[Demonic Soulz 483]

((okay))

 

"I'm Deranged the other side is Equinox Sin he's boring but interesting" Deranged said as he was in front of a pony "Well...time to show how I overkill others" Deranged said as he threw two ponies up into the air. "I'm gonna sish-kabob them" Deranged said as he sent the katana through both ponies and the fell and they wer still alive. "Now....should I kill you slow and brutally...or quick and painlessly" Deranged asked

[Skye42 59]

" I say that you should make their blood rain, Deranged." Mind Trick said to Deranged. She continued to hack away at the helpless ponies, letting their blood splatter on her grinning face. She found one of the earlier colts that laughed at Midnight before, and went to shoot a magic beam at the colt. When the colt was struck by the beam of energy, Mind Trick teleported near him to pick him up with a hoof "This is why you don't laugh at ponies." She said to the scared colt and threw him hard against the ground. Then shoved the chainsaw into his little body. "Hahaha, bull's-eye!" Mind Trick pulled the chainsaw out of the dead body, and it flicked off the rotating blades. "How about when we're all done here, we burn this place down to the ground, hm?"

Edited June 26, 2013 by Skye42

[Demonic Soulz 483]

Deranged made all the ponied blood rain and grabbed a few can of gasoline with magic and dumped them everywhere then summoned a lighter. "You know I have so many catch phrases I wanna use....and I know the perfect one" Deranged said as he saw Mind Trick kill a colt. "Damn...that's awesome" Deranged said as he played with the lighter.

[sunne 660]

Fallen found another filly. The little Pegasus tried kicking and pushing her hooves, then running, but Fallen stamped down on her hind legs and broke them. She then went to break the other legs, then pulled the filly into the air and spoke.

"For that little attempt, you get to die slowly."

She continued to give the filly the same treatment as the first stallion, slowly sawing off all of her legs and both wings. the filly screamed in pain each time the dagger dug in, but the sound was magic to Fallen's ears. Surprisingly, the filly was still conscious enough to see the dagger going straight for her heart, but not for her neck right afterwards.

Fallen saw Deranged and picked up the pieces of the broken filly's body, then flew over and dumped them next to the gasoline.

"I see you're planning to send this place down in flames. I couldn't agree with the idea more. This little defiant imbecile should be the first to burn." She nodded toward the orange, bloody mess that was the mutilated filly.

[Pripyat Pony 2,608]

A unicorn mare came into view. She was dark blue in colour, with a mint and black mane. Her cutie mark was a yin yang symbol, but this wasn't visible due to the cloak she wore. The cloak was covered with what at first looked like patches with cutie marks on them, but if one looked closer, they'd see that the patches were actual cutie marks, ripped from ponies' bodies and sewn to the fabric. Jay didn't like the cloak much, but wore it due to the demands of her other self, Jinx. That was how she thought of Jinx, as a darker, more evil part of herself who had come to the fore back when she'd only been a filly.

 

Jay was painfully shy and had been bullied; one day, a gang of pegasus bullies had taken her to the top of the climbing frame in the playground and, ignoring her screams, had thrown her down. Jay had struck her head on the side of the climbing frame and had blacked out. She came round to see the bullies moaning in pain amidst the wreckage of the fence. Several had broken legs and wings. Then Jinx had spoken to her, inside her head.

 

"Those bullies," the voice had whispered. "No need to worry about them any more; they got what they deserved."

 

"What did you do?" Jay asked, fearfully.

 

The voice chuckled. "Oh, just picked them up in the air and threw them thru the fence. Those pegasi won't be flying again for a good while. Perhaps never."

 

"Who are you?"

 

"Call me Jinx. Your saviour... and your worst nightmare."

 

So Jay had walked away that day with another pony inside her head, but this one was evil. Jay feared Jinx, who liked to torture other ponies, tearing off their cutie marks one side of their flanks and saving them as a trophy after she was done tormenting them. Soon, Jay was shunned and driven out of her village as a result. She was afraid of one day ending up in the Canterlot Criminal Asylum, despite Jinx's assurances. Jay had eventually settled in Invermare, keeping herself to herself, til one day when she happened to come accross a few ponies attacking other ponies...

[Concord Discord 35]

((Sorry, everypony posted when I was asleep or at school. If this carries on with so many posts, I'm not going to be able to post as often as everypony else. BTW, dark blue for Comet Fire and red for Astral Storm.))

 

Comet watched as innocent ponies were tortured.

Isn't it beautiful?

You make me sick.

Why? Because I have a better taste in fun?

No, because you are evil and sadistic, and delight in killing.

What's wrong with killing? It's better than anything you ever did.

 

Comet remembered the fist time Astral Storm had spoken to her. She had started to go crazy, and her friends said they didn't want to be around her any more. In a rage, Astral had taken over Comet and killed all of them.

 

Just then, Comet saw another pony standing nearby.

"Do you have any idea about what's going on?" she asked the mare. " 'Cause it looks fun."

 

@@Pripyat Pony

[Demonic Soulz 483]

Deranged turned around to see two other ponies. "Oh look two more ponies that are gonna die" Deranged said as he grabbed a colt that was barely alive next to him and sent a claw through his chest pulling out his heart while the colt was alive then crushed it.