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Fallen grabbed a colt, stabbed one of his hooves, and feigned a sympathetic look. Fake, but would have been believed if the terrified unicorn hadn't seen her kill his sister a moment ago, and she hadn't just stabbed him. The pony winced in pain.

"Do you suffer, child?"

Demented grin.

"Don't worry, little pony, it'll all be over very soon..."

She started killing him, slowly and painfully, with her blade. The helpless colt writhed and screeched in pain. Noticing a metal, pointed fence, she shot up into the air with him in her forelegs, and let him drop. Right onto the fence. She watched the spikes pierce his small body, watched the fence impale the back of his head, watched the blood ooze out, and shrieked in laughter.

She dove down and heard somepony ask somepony else what was going on, and state that it looked like fun, and as she soared right over their heads to slice a stallion's head off, she said,

"Yes, it is fun. The most fun I've had in years, in fact. And little Broken Cloud can't stop me!"

In the recesses of Fallen's mind, she heard a tiny voice.

"Fallen, let me out RIGHT BUCKING NOW! You need to STOP KILLING before you become even more of a lunatic!"

 

Fallen just ignored Broken.

"Dammit."

 

The mare entered a blacksmith's. He had several swords, and she killed him with a sword akin to Deranged's katana. she took it outside and started slicing ponies in half with it and stabbing them in their chests. after a while, it broke.

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"Die!? Who do you think you are!? YOU THINK YOU CAN KILL ME!?"

Comet suddenly became very tall, her eyes white and piercing, her mane coming alive like fire.

Two magic daggers materialised in her hooves.

"You can decrease the number of ponies who are gonna die by one."


Life is like an MMORPG, but with fewer fantasy weapons and more soul-crushing nihilistic despair that visits when you least need it.

Crummy OCs that I made years ago (thou hast been warned):

Main protagonist OC: Golden Typhoon
The professional assassin: Curse of Shadows

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(I honest to god feel like shit but I'm going to post anyway because I need something to give me purpose. I doubt this will help)

Shimmers walked along semi merrily though the town of invermare with his regular dissapointed look on his face. "Hmm. I cannot recall why I'm here again. Probabaly something important." He noticed an empty patch of land and began to observe it close. "Hmm. Fairly large land, not much to see. Tad loud... Hmm. Not worth the bits. A hotel here would not be the smartest of ideas." He shook his head and continued walking.


"You really are fond of chatting with me, aren't you? If I didn't know better, I'd think you had feelings for me!" Solaire of Astora.
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"Ah...so you're not normal...good" Deranged said as a random puny got in a choke hold. "Really...that gonna work on me....dumb pony" Deranged said as he stabbed the pony with both claws and held the pony above his head then stabbed him twice. He then cut of all of the ponies appendages and ripped him in half. "There's so much blood...how can you ponies even do such a thing" Equinox said to Deranged as he was ignored. "Also you're not very threatening nice dagger anyways" Deranged said in a serious tone as he was walking up to a mare that was begging for him to not kill her/


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"Not threatening, am I?"

As Astral said this, she stomped her hoof. 4 meteors rained down from the sky. The first 2 struck either side of Astral. The third struck the mare in front of Deranged, vapourising her. The fourth struck at Deranged's feet.

Astral telekinetically raised a dagger to Derand's throat.

"Say what you like. But don't insult me."


Life is like an MMORPG, but with fewer fantasy weapons and more soul-crushing nihilistic despair that visits when you least need it.

Crummy OCs that I made years ago (thou hast been warned):

Main protagonist OC: Golden Typhoon
The professional assassin: Curse of Shadows

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"Oh joy you put a dagger to my neck...listen i have been through worse and you are nothing" Deranged said appearing behind Astral. "Also...never take my kill that pisses me off" Deranged said not phased by anything. "Now my weapon...i can freeze you instantly either mentally or physically but you are like me...second personality and all...like I said though your weapon is nice what can it do" Deranged said


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"Nothing, am I?"

Astral teleported behind Deranged.

"I'll take take your kill whenever I like, and I don't give a damn if it pisses you, or anypony else, off."

She laughed maniacally.

"As for these quaint little things," she twirled them around as she said so, "I use them to drain the spiritual energy of my victims, taking their magic, disabling unicorns from using their horns, and pegasi walking on clouds or controlling weather. You can gaze in awe at them later."


Life is like an MMORPG, but with fewer fantasy weapons and more soul-crushing nihilistic despair that visits when you least need it.

Crummy OCs that I made years ago (thou hast been warned):

Main protagonist OC: Golden Typhoon
The professional assassin: Curse of Shadows

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"It's funny really...are you trying to scare me cause I dont need magic" Deranged said as he teleported above Astral. "If your gonna kill me then save your breath and open your eyes...Medusa" Deranged said as his katana glowed causing anyone to look at it have their mental status freeze and/or break. "Star into its eyes and be frozen in a mental state forever...now break insanity" Deranged said causing a pony hiding to scream and go insane.


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"No, you don't need magic because you're terrible with it."

Astral knocked the katana out of Deranged hands.

"Instead, you rely upon your weapons."

She made her own contructs disappear.

"Fight me without it. I dare you."

She quickly killed the screaming pony with a fireball.


Life is like an MMORPG, but with fewer fantasy weapons and more soul-crushing nihilistic despair that visits when you least need it.

Crummy OCs that I made years ago (thou hast been warned):

Main protagonist OC: Golden Typhoon
The professional assassin: Curse of Shadows

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"Terrible with magic...no im not I just dont need it" Deranged said before his left eye changed back to a crimson color. "Damn it not now...great he taking back control" Deranged said. "Thats right im getting my body back from you before you get it killed Deranged" Equinox said. "Equinox...your no fun anymore" Deranged said as he lost control and Equinox gained back control. "Great...back to normal...but not in time to stop everyone here from dying and the whole town being destroyed. "I hope this never happen again or..." Equinox noticed the pony and his katana away from him on the ground. "Great Deranged you managed to piss off a pony that now might kill me" Equinox said


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"Well, this was interesting... The whole dual-personality thing really sucks. By the way, why do you carry that katana around if you know Deranged can use it? For me it's different, not having a physical weapon - that's where being good at magic can really be a curse - but you have a choice."


Life is like an MMORPG, but with fewer fantasy weapons and more soul-crushing nihilistic despair that visits when you least need it.

Crummy OCs that I made years ago (thou hast been warned):

Main protagonist OC: Golden Typhoon
The professional assassin: Curse of Shadows

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"I dont have a choice cause after a while" Equinox was talking as the katana started floating towards him. "The katana come towards me...like that and I have no control over it" Equinox said as he went over to the body of the mare he killed before who was barely hanging on to life(not the one killed by the meteor). "Im so sorry this happened to you miss...i'll put you out of your misery" Equinox said as he cast a spell that killed the mare sympathetically. "I hate Deranged...but when he takes over I cant stop him till he uses the damn katana...who are you anyways" Equinox said


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"I'm comet fire... She's called Astral Storm. She always talks to me in my head, but sometimes when I'm angry, or sad, or just feeling mentally weak, she takes control completely. Sometimes I don't even notice, and then... by the time I've realised, I feel like I'm waking up from a dream."


Life is like an MMORPG, but with fewer fantasy weapons and more soul-crushing nihilistic despair that visits when you least need it.

Crummy OCs that I made years ago (thou hast been warned):

Main protagonist OC: Golden Typhoon
The professional assassin: Curse of Shadows

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Fallen grabbed a colt, stabbed one of his hooves, and feigned a sympathetic look. Fake, but would have been believed if the terrified unicorn hadn't seen her kill his sister a moment ago, and she hadn't just stabbed him. The pony winced in pain.

"Do you suffer, child?"

Demented grin.

"Don't worry, little pony, it'll all be over very soon..."

She started killing him, slowly and painfully, with her blade. The helpless colt writhed and screeched in pain. Noticing a metal, pointed fence, she shot up into the air with him in her forelegs, and let him drop. Right onto the fence. She watched the spikes pierce his small body, watched the fence impale the back of his head, watched the blood ooze out, and shrieked in laughter.

She dove down and heard somepony ask somepony else what was going on, and state that it looked like fun, and as she soared right over their heads to slice a stallion's head off, she said,

"Yes, it is fun. The most fun I've had in years, in fact. And little Broken Cloud can't stop me!"

In the recesses of Fallen's mind, she heard a tiny voice.

"Fallen, let me out RIGHT BUCKING NOW! You need to STOP KILLING before you become even more of a lunatic!"

 

Fallen just ignored Broken.

"Dammit."

 

The mare entered a blacksmith's. He had several swords, and she killed him with a sword akin to Deranged's katana. she took it outside and started slicing ponies in half with it and stabbing them in their chests. after a while, it broke.

After some more dull walking, Shimmers noticed somepony, a mare to be exact, walking around and slicing ponies in half. He pursed his lips at the site, and simply walked up to the mare, tapping on her shoudler.

"Excuse me maddam? You appear to be damaging allot of lives around this area. May I ask your purpose for this?"


"You really are fond of chatting with me, aren't you? If I didn't know better, I'd think you had feelings for me!" Solaire of Astora.
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((Damn it! I go to sleep and all this happens :<))

 

Midnight Swirl saw through Mind Trick's eyes with saddness. She could she the morbid things that Mind Trick was enjoying. But she couldn't gain control of her body anymore. And she wouldn't be able too, untill Mind Trick was done. Besides, she was my friend. No, she's still my friend. Just in a different form.

 

Mind Trick's shrill laugher made the young earth pony infront of her whimpered and beg to be spared. "What!? But then I won't be playing the game correctly. And I always follow the rules of a game." Mind Trick said before she stabed the pony in the face with her chainsaw. Her satanic grin grew wider with joy. Mind Trck noticed that Deranged wasn't attacking anymore. No, it wasn't Deranged, it was Equinox. She walked over to him. "Hey, what happened to Deranged? Bring him back, he was alot more fun."

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Equinox turned to Mind Trick. "NO IM NOT RELEASING HIM AGAIN" Equinox said as he grabbed his katana. "Even though Deranged uses this I can use it my self and I will knock sense into you if I have to" Equinox said. "Well this will be interesting to watch" Deranged said as he didnt take control of Equinox. "Snap out of it...No more ponies have to die..." Equinox said as he pointed the katana at Mind Tric


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@,

The sword broke, and Fallen flung it at another colt.

she grabbed her dagger and went to stab him, when a hoof tapped on her shoulder. She turned and saw a stallion, speaking to her. The surprise alone was enough for Broken Cloud to lash out and start to regain control. Fallen growled furiously.

'Stay the hell out of this, Cloud! I want to stay here and kill, and you won't stop me. I won't let you. You're weak. Worthless. Broken, like your name says. Now just let go and leave me to kill who I want.' She yelled in her mind. Broken just kept her grip, not fazed by her dark side's words. She'd heard it nearly every day since Fallen showed up in her mind.

Fallen growled again and turned her attention to the stallion.

"You're very brave to come up to me like this. Brave and stupid. I kill because I want to. Because I love the smell and sight of blood. Crave it. If you were smart, you'd run now. Not that it would make a difference. I'll find you again."

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(wow, i forgot to follow this topic and now i'm 3 pages behind... anyway, i'll get in the story now. sorry for being late and all that so yeah, orange for repsol and lime for isaac)

 

repsol was shopping for groceries when suddenly the town became hell.

ponies where being torn apart right there in front of him. he kept his second personality away for a few weeks now. he finally had a normal life.

until he saw all the blood. "hey repsol, guess who's back?" 

"NO! how the fuck did you get back here? i was cured! they cured me!

 

"haha oh man, i love the way you say that. come on, lets get the show going eh?"

and with that, his RIG fully expanded, and his helmet came out over his head.

"wow i've been out for a while huh?" isaac said, taking out his plasma cutter before looking down the sights inspecting the weapon.

 

"guess i'm going to have to make up for lost time. hmm, that pony over there looks like a nice meatbag."

he aimed his plasma cutter and fired a shot of boiling plasma at the grey unicorn. (that's you @, )


 

My OC's: Roarke, Repsol and Crystal  

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@~Dishonored Luna~

 

"Haha.. You think I would waste time on you? I would think of you as a threat,but without Deranged controling you, I find you to be quite weak.." Mind Trick said to Equinox. She grinned yet again as she walked away from Equinox. Midnight was starting to get sick of this. 

"Hey Mind Trick, you had your fun, now let me back into my body." Midnight Swirl demaned. 

"Heh, and why would I do that? This is much more fun then being trapped in your head."

"Please? I don't want to watch anymore of this."

"Maybe I should ignore you for awhile, then maybe you will disappear." Mind Trick said with a smirk.

"Besides, you let me out. So why don't you wait your turn?"

"No! I'm NOT putting up with this ANYMORE!"

With that, Midnight Swirl and Mind Trick began a tug-o'-war over the control of Midnight's body.

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Equinox side stepped to avoid asomething but was grazed by the shot. "What the hell" Equinox said as his blade glowed. "DIE" Equinox fired a wave of dark energy at both Mind and Issac. "I may not be like Deranged but I can fight and kill...but not like a maniac" Equinox said


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Mind Trick and Midnight Swirl only noticed the dark energy when it was too late. Mind Trick tried to place a magic sheild, but was unable to make it fast enough. Mind Trick was knocked back and suffered several injuries. Midnight used this chance to regain control of her own self again. Her mane went back to being brown with gold highlights, and her pupils widened to it's normal size. Midnight could feel the burning pain of the magic attack. She tried to get up, using her chainsaw as support. "Wait... ugh.. Equinox, I'm fine now... Don't attack me.. please." Mindight said to Equinox with heavy breaths. "Mind Tricks.. gone.. for now."

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isaac took the hit of dark energy full into his chest, and was send flying backwards several feet.

after maybe 3 seconds, he got up again, laughing like a mad pony.

"hahaha! you can't cut through my armor with something as pathetic as a small dark energy blast!"

isaac stepped forward a bit, then went to sit on his hindquarters, grinning under his helmet.

"i guess you could say that other pony wasn't that lucky."

isaac stood back up and aligned the sights of the plasma cutter with the wounded pony.

"you know what they say..what can be broken, must be broken."

he grinned even wider as he pulled the trigger.


 

My OC's: Roarke, Repsol and Crystal  

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Midnight Swirl managed to create a barrier in time before the plasma cutter's blast hit her. There was some knock back, and she tumbled a bit. She was able to stand up again and reved up her chainsaw. "I really don't want to be fighting anypony..., but if I have to, I will." Midnight said to herself. "But it's different this time. I'm fighting for self defence perposes only."

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"No" Equinox rushed over to Issac and grabbed him by the head and swatting the plasma cutter away. "WHO ARE YOU" Equinox yelled as threw Issac into a wall with magic. "Open up the damn mask before I pry it open myself" Equinox threatened as he took the katana and was ready to shove it through Issac's throat


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The sword broke, and Fallen flung it at another colt.

she grabbed her dagger and went to stab him, when a hoof tapped on her shoulder. She turned and saw a stallion, speaking to her. The surprise alone was enough for Broken Cloud to lash out and start to regain control. Fallen growled furiously.

'Stay the hell out of this, Cloud! I want to stay here and kill, and you won't stop me. I won't let you. You're weak. Worthless. Broken, like your name says. Now just let go and leave me to kill who I want.' She yelled in her mind. Broken just kept her grip, not fazed by her dark side's words. She'd heard it nearly every day since Fallen showed up in her mind.

Fallen growled again and turned her attention to the stallion.

"You're very brave to come up to me like this. Brave and stupid. I kill because I want to. Because I love the smell and sight of blood. Crave it. If you were smart, you'd run now. Not that it would make a difference. I'll find you again."

*Well then, I believe we have the same interests* The voice in his head told him. Shimmers shook his head.

"While that answer could have been seen liable I do not count it as such. I simply believe that is an excuse. And if you require a response to running? Well one does not simply run from a formal conversation between poinies. That is immoral and rude."

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"You really are fond of chatting with me, aren't you? If I didn't know better, I'd think you had feelings for me!" Solaire of Astora.
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