My Little Brony Adventure

[DarkLight 3]

Well... I've been saying that I would post a fanfic soon. This is my first fanfic so I don't expect much, also i will try to release chapters asap. I hope you enjoy it. please leave feedback, either here or on my FIMFiction page.
 
(hope this link works...)

http://www.fimfiction.net/user/DarkLight_

 

Let me know if the story is able to be seen/read.

 

Hope you all enjoy

I done goofed...waiting for approval... I'll let you know when it is up and ready to read. I appologize again about the miss informanion...

Edited July 10, 2013 by DarkLight

[DarkLight 3]

Well...finally got Chapter 1 fixed...if there are grammer errors, Im sorry. let me know so I can fix them. workin on chapter 2. Also if you hate my story so farm I'll still love and tolerate you. What can I do, haters will always exist and I don't have any plans on trying to distroy all of them.

 

here is the link:

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/116361/my-little-brony-adventure

[Night Shine 767]

Why hello thar! o3o

 

I wouldn't worry about people hating on your fic too much on a forum like this. FiMFiction might be something different...but then again, that's based on what I've heard from others, not from my own experiences.

 

 

...Anywaiz...

 

What a coincidence! I, too, am a writer of pretty pony fanfiction. Aaaaand, I might be able to give you some advice about writing your story, if you so desire. :3 (for a sample of my writing, check out the story in my siggy).

 

...but, if I read/review/proofread/whatevsies, I have a tendency to go waaaaay too in-depth with my analysis, taking lots of time. So, if you do want me to review your storeh, shoot me a PM or something....I have a bad habit of making sincere offers and then forgetting them. 9_6

 

Point being, send me a message and I'll break down one of the chapters and offer my critique--with grammar, spelling, story elements, characters, literary themes, and all that good stuff. And, unlike some certain critics, I will say what I liked as well as what I think you could improve.

[DarkLight 3]

feel free. I've been told that where I posted my fic, that community can be a bit harsh if you make too many mistakes, or if it is disliked by many. you can look at the comments. The one that hit me the hardest was the one that said that it will hit the dislike abyss (i think thats what it was called) quickly. I remade chapter 1 after that.

Im thinking of adding a password so only people/ponies from here can read it...But Im still unsure of that idea. If anyone reads this, please let me know what you think.

[rainbowbrony2013 2]

The story is great. If any wait for chapter 2 do you know when it'll be out if so can you tell me plz

 Also  it's applejack not Apple Jake 

[DarkLight 3]

The story is great. If any wait for chapter 2 do you know when it'll be out if so can you tell me plz

 Also  it's applejack not Apple Jake 

WOOPS...Ill be going back to fix that...now Im going to check the other names i may or may not have goofed on...thanks, i appreciate the feedback.

 

I recently got back from a long trip and I was typing up chapter 2 the entire car trip. So it is up now. It's amazing how much you can type in a cramped car for 5-6 hours.

 

Let me know what you think. I deleted the old outdated comments about my story. They were originally for my chapter 1 before I deleted it and made it a chapter1 vs 2.0 (lame computer term). I hope that others enjoy it, and i wish I could reset the likes and dislike thing in the corner of it.

Edited July 29, 2013 by DarkLight

[DarkLight 3]

So yeah...When i post a new chapter there is a good chance that i will take it down later to make tweeks...thats why chapter 2 is now down...please, when I post a new chapter can you give me feedback. I really need it if I want to improve my story.

Im not sure if anyone is still interested in my story or is even still looking at my thread here, but in case there are. I made changes to chapter 2 and it is back up. Please give me some feedback, I could really use it and let me know if i made errors in the story, i try not to but i will fix them if they are pointed out.

[DarkLight 3]

I uploaded chapter 3 part 1.

Chapter 3 will be a long chapter since there is a lot i wanted to fit in there but there had to be a break between them, thus 2 parts. Also when i type these up in Microsoft word i try to keep each chapter between 5-7 pages (size 12, times new roman, 1.5 spaced). Part 1 is 6.5 already

[DarkLight 3]

On the off chance that somepony still watches this post i finally have Chap 3 part 2 up...it took me forever to get it to look decent...