My friends OC

[Storm Flicker 10]

This is my first time drawing a friends OC, so I hope he likes it but I thought I should post it here first to see if anyone had anything to help me make it look better. Sorry that its up-side down my camera on my iPad is messed up or something.

[Concord 1,982]

Hello!

 

This is the Anti-pony!

 

My neck hurts quite a bit now, so I won't bother tilting my head, thus I'll try to say something while he's upside down...

 

... God it's hard... The front legs aren't correct. It looks as if both of the legs are on the right side of the pony, which, I guess you understand, isn't normal . I suggest errasing the line between the body and the front left leg. Try to mess around with the mane a little bit. A mane should never just be a curved plank stashed on a head. Try to match the hooves a little more aswell.

 

There's a lot of stuff to improve upon, but it's a good start.

Edited July 10, 2013 by Concord

[Storm Flicker 10]

Hello!

 

This is the Anti-pony!

 

My neck hurts quite a bit now, so I won't bother tilting my head, thus I'll try to say something while he's upside down...

 

... God it's hard... The front legs aren't correct. It looks as if both of the legs are on the right side of the pony, which, I guess you understand, isn't normal . I suggest errasing the line between the body and the front left leg. Try to mess around with the mane a little bit. A mane should never just be a curved plank stashed on a head. Try to match the hooves a little more aswell.

 

There's a lot of stuff to improve upon, but it's a good start.

Like I said its my first time drawing one for my friend, so I understand what you are saying, thank you for the advice and tips.