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Snow shimmers is no ordinary pony, she has a dark side too. If she gets angry, her dark side will burst out! This is the story we will create about this mysterious mare. To get started, when she was a filly, a dark force called nemore engulfed her. Happily, after struggle, she regained control, giving her cutie mark, a snowflake, to represent the good she fights, so strongly to keep. Her evil form is called flaming darkness. No pony knows that she is flaming darkness, at least not yet. After the nemore got snow, many ponies have gone missing, and no pony knows or even has a clue why.

 

Snow shimmers unicorn magic is not as powerfull As most unicorns.

 

Perhaps your character has a dark side, I'd love to see it! Might be a cute disaster , or a cool bro, I don't know.

 

 

This is my first time doing this so everything might not be perfect, but oh well. I'm unsure where this will go, I guess we'll find out!

 

My rules for this will, simply be no kissing, cussing, spamming, or very unfriendly actions to a pony without their permission, and don't go too far off topic.

Snow wandered the ground endlessly, searching for a crystal of magic in the deep woods of the ever free forest. She heard a roar behind her. A lions roar. "Aaaaaaa!" She screemed, beginning to gallop away. But the lion was too fast. It opened its mouth for another roar. "Kocadoodle-doo!" It screamed "wha?" Asked snow, lifting one of her hooves in confusion. "Kok-a-doodle-doo!." The lion screemed once more. It charged at her. Snow closed her and turned her head, a hoove around her face. Suddenly it was quiet.

 

Snow opened her eyes to see her laying on a pile of hay at Sweet Apple Acres. "Few, it was just a dream" snow turned her head to see a rooster perched on a fence next to her. "Kok-a-doodle-doo" it said. Snow got up and decided to go over to ponyvile. "Maby there's somepony to talk to", she thought. Snow went to have breakfast with the apples, an apple muffin, with cider and a red delicious. "Thanks for the food!" Said snow on her way out. She took a moment to enjoy the view, the birds in the sky, the delicious apple orchard, the sweet smeeling grass, and trotted on towards ponyvile.

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(Mind if I join in with Junebug?)

 

Junebug walked down the path towards Sweet Apple acres, on the way to see her friend Babs Seed. Ever since she came to ponyville, the two really hit it off, especially sine Junebug had become a Cutie mark Crusader. She began singing a song as she trotted down the path, her head up, watching the birds flutter around.

 

Oh, what a wonderful place

The world seems to be going in a wonderful race

 

Who knew that today would be the best one yet

No pony today will have to worry or fret 

 

She sang several more verses of the song before settling into the tune and just humming it. She stretched out her wings and flew only a few feet above the ground, giggling a little as a small ladybug landed on the tip of he snout. It seemed to want to go for a ride, as it stayed there for awhile. 

 

The filly's wings became tired quickly though, and she was forced to retire to the ground for awhile, at which point the bug flew off her nose and out of the pony's view. She looked up into the sky again, no matter how sore her neck was getting when- oof! She walked right into another filly. "Ah, sorry there, didn't mean to be so clumsy. I'm Junebug, by the way."

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"Huh? I havnt seen you before, or maybe I have, who knows"

 

Snow shimmers looked behind her at her recently earned cutie mark. She never truthfully told any pony how she got it and made the lie about her realization of pure intrest with the snow and ability to create many things using it. Was it time to tell the truth? Or have everypony living in a lie. Snow was tangled in many thoughts and ideas.

 

"Umm... Do you want to do something? Like sing? No, I just heard you doing that, or humming at least. Maybe we should talk about are interests, becoming friends! Uhhhhh...... What do you like to do?"

 

*ugh, snow shimmers, don't make a fool of yourself! If you want to make a new friend, you should approach them differently! You can't just blabb on obout random things, oo! Is that a GOLDEN apple over there? Never Mind that, you have to be strait, calm, not bouncing of the walls like a filly pinkie pie! But seriously, that apple is completely golden, I've never seen anything like it! Ugh, and you won't see any friends if you talk in your head like this forever!*

 

"I was simply wondering what you would like to do, that's all"

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((Next time I recommend making a sign-up topic in RP Planning & OOC Discussion, but for now, can I join with two OCs, Broken Cloud and another pony I'm making?? they'll both be fillies. Click the name to see Broken's page. As you'll see she has a dark side as well, named Fallen. Also i recommend not making an advanced role-play))

((This is the song that never ends.It just goes on and on my friends.Some people started singing it not knowing what it was,And they'll continue singing it forever just because . . .'This is the song that never ends.It just goes on and on my friends.Some people started singing it not knowing what it was,And they'll continue singing it forever just because . . .This is the song that never ends.It just goes on and on my friends.Some people started singing it not knowing what it was,And they'll continue singing it forever just because . . .This is the song that never ends.It just goes on and on my friends.Some people started singing it not knowing what it was,And they'll continue singing it forever just because . . .This is the song that never ends.It just goes on and on my friends. Some people started singing it not knowing what it was, And they'll continue singing it forever just because . . .))

 
 
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((Next time I recommend making a sign-up topic in RP Planning & OOC Discussion, but for now, can I join with two OCs, Broken Cloud and another pony I'm making?? they'll both be fillies. Click the name to see Broken's page. As you'll see she has a dark side as well, named Fallen. Also i recommend not making an advanced role-play))

((This is the song that never ends.It just goes on and on my friends.Some people started singing it not knowing what it was,And they'll continue singing it forever just because . . .'This is the song that never ends.It just goes on and on my friends.Some people started singing it not knowing what it was,And they'll continue singing it forever just because . . .This is the song that never ends.It just goes on and on my friends.Some people started singing it not knowing what it was,And they'll continue singing it forever just because . . .This is the song that never ends.It just goes on and on my friends.Some people started singing it not knowing what it was,And they'll continue singing it forever just because . . .This is the song that never ends.It just goes on and on my friends. Some people started singing it not knowing what it was, And they'll continue singing it forever just because . . .))

(( sorry about the advanced thing... I didn't find anything else at the time.... Sure you can join! For me, you don't even need permission, just the character(s) your using. And then just start role playing after. Er... I need something to say..... Um..

 

When your rife with devastation there's a simple explanation your a toy makers creation trapped inside a. Crystal ball. And whichever way he tilts it know that we must be resilient we won't let them break our spirits as we sing our silly song. When I was a little filly, a galloping blaze overtook my city so they shipped me so they shipped me off to the orphanage, said ditch those roots with you wanna fit in. So I dug 1000 holes and cut a rug with orphan foals now memories are blurred and there faces are obscured, but I still know the words to this song. When you've bungled all your bangles and your loved ones have been mangled listen to the jingle jangle of my jipsy tambourine so these chorda are hypnotysint and the whole worlds harmonizing so please children stop your crying and just sing along with me.

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(you just don't go into the advanced section. Alright. brohoof for FiW!))

"Now Miss Cloud, you be careful and stay off those wings."

"Yes." Broken Cloud droned. She doubted Fallen would listen. The mare in her mind would stop at nothing to murder anypony she could get her hooves on. broken wings didn't matter to her..

"Good. We're almost here. I'm told our destination is Sweet Apple Acres."

The mare and the filly in the carriage held on to the side as the carriers landed roughly. 

"Sorry ma'am." one of the escorts bowed his head.

'Oh, it's quite alright. "

'Whatever."

"Alright, anyhow this is your destination."

"Thanks, i guess," Broken muttered emotionlessly as she hopped off the carriage. Leaf Heart, her caretaker, stepped off and walked her to the main house. She went inside and spoke to the ponies there. when she came out, she was looking quite pleased.

Giving Boken Cloud a suffocating hug, the mare said her goodbyes.

"Well, you'll be staying here with the Apple Family until everything gets sorted out. Farewell, Broken Cloud."

As she trotted back to the carriage, he Earth Pony mare tunrned to Broken and gave her a large, wam smile. it almost made her choke up. it was the kind of smile her mother had always given her. She had aways said...

'Don't worry, my little Cloud. everything will turn out alright."

Before...

No.

She wouldn't think of it. it would just be seen as weakness in Fallen's eyes, and she knew that clouds wouldn't be the only casualties if she got out. So Broken steeled herself, turned away, and started walking. She noticed two fillies about her age chatting, and forced herself to talk to them.

"Hi. Who are you? I'm Broken Cloud."

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  • 2 weeks later...

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/silk-shadow-r3818 ( I'm joining my OC Silk Shadow)

 

A couple of hours After failing miserably in front of the wonderbolts silk found himself all the way in ponyville from cloudsdale.

 

With a broken pride and a few hours of sleep he had flew far enough to hide his shame. 

 

With a few wobbling flaps of his wings he could feel himself doze off and relive the first time he showed his flying stunts.

 

The dream was vivid. He could see the beautiful young filly with a pink mane. He was arrogant and was trying to impress her.

 

As he tested out his dives and spins where no one could see, he became confident as he felt natural in the air and ready to impress.

 

He found her and began running through his routine. As he began to dive he could feel something wrong. He had lost control and began flying straight towards the ground.

 

That was when he woke up and found himself falling. He hit the ground hard with a THUD!!!

 

He stood up and shook off hopeing no one had seen.

 

but as he turned around he could see 3 fillies a little younger than him.

"H-H-Hello" he choked out

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Broken felt two confilcting emotions. First, she felt a sharp pang of jealousy. She missed flying, and her broken wings were still too weak too fly with. Secondly, she felt a small rush of empathy. While his fall had not been nearly as bad as hers, and he had no actual injuries, she knew what it was like to fall from the sky when you're supposed to be flying fine.

The jealousy won out, with the help of Fallen darkening her thoughts. She carefully rustled her feathers and eyed the colt suspiciously. 

"Hi," she said. "Who are you?"

"Oh, let me take over, little Broken Cloud. I can get rid of him for you if you're jealous of him flying."

Broken shivered. She was terrified of what she knew ran through Fallen's mind, but she had a resolve to keep her in her head.

N-no, she replied. I'm good. Besides, do you want us to get caught in jail or go to a mental asylum? At age eight, i don't want to go to either. it's because of you that I even know what those are!

"Fine," Fallen grumbled. "But you would be alright anyhow. You're good with clouds, you could make a hide hole in one."

i can't fly.

"Oh, save it. You're fine. Besides, Pegasi heal quickly, and you have braces. You'd be fine."

Broken just rolled her eyes and waited for the colt in front of her to answer.

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 At first shadow did not know what to say. Between the feeling of total embarrassment from the fall and the odd looks this filly was giving him. But he could see the filly wait for a reply to his question.

 

"My name is Silk Shadow. What is yours?" he softly said. As he looked around at the other two. he could see a semi surprised look on their faces. Probably because some colt fell from the sky, crashed , and started talking to them.

 

"I hope I didn't interrupt anything" he says as he starts to stretch. 

 

About this time he feels his energy run down from the excitement and lack of sleep.

 

He must look like a train wreck with dirt, leaves, bruises, and a crazy mane he thinks to himself while he waits for the fillies to reply.

 

At least I'm not the only one as he thinks about how the one filly shivered for no reason and would roll her eyes like she was carrying on a whole nother conversation. and the other one keeps glancing at a golden apple. Maybe he will fit in with these ponies he thinks to himself..j

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  • 2 months later...

(I'm gonna use Princess Aphrodite and Prince  Ares)

The two walked  around Ponyvillie, Ares  stopped and looked at his necklace, which was turning darker. Aphrodite looked at her brother, "There is no evil here" She said...

"Sometimes it glows when nothing evil is around"
"I believe you, so why do I have to stay on the ground with DIRT, It's ruining MY HOOFICURE"

"Sorry sis, but can you try to survive walking on the ground for once?"

Aphrodite sighed, and followed Ares to the Library, where their aunt lives. They went around Ponyvillie with ponies asking them questions. 

"Can I scout for it?"

"Go ahead, scout, I give up"

Aphrodite flew  a few miles ahead. Ares stood in the same spot, waiting for a reply. While he was waiting for his sister, Ares  practiced a little bit of Necromancy. 

Aphrodite came back a minute later, "It's that tree in the middle of Ponyvillie"

"Did you ask a Pegasus??" Ares Asked.

"No, Ares, I just... uh..I looked into a window and saw books"

Ares nodded, Why did she look into a window? He thought and followed his sister, who was a few feet above ground.

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(You're not supposed to decide how the other ponies react.)

Broken eyed the colt.
"I'm Broken.... Broken Cloud, I mean..." she deadpanned, fluttering her wings again. She looked at the other two fillies.
"No. You weren't. I was just walking up to them."
"My, my, can you become any more boring? At the very least start fighting him."
Why would I even do that?
"Because it would be fun. Maybe he's strong and could knock me out of your head so I can become my own pony."
While being away from you sounds great, I don't wanna fight... And you'd just kill every pony!
"That was my plan, yes. Anything to be out of this weak little body that can barely harm a thing."
Broken had to stop herself from yelling and stamping a hoof on the ground. I'm not weak!
"Oh, yes you are, little one. It is truly a curse to both of us. The only thing remotely strong about you is your mind... other ponies whose bodies I have shared, so to speak, all have had weak mental capacities, meaning I was able to get out all the more often."
Right... I'm just going to talk to them now...
"So, where are you all from? Broken asked, her tone still rather flat and emotionless, much like her facial expression.

@, (Probably best if you come find us instead, nopony's characters are going to be at the Treebrary.))
@@Snow Shimmers@@RosemaryPetal, ((Y'all gonna post?))

 

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