Count to a million

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*Kills butter with knife*

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*melts butter with heat ray*

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by the way, I already start chapter 3, yay^^

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Awesome! 

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I haven't even seen chapter 2!

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I start during the time yesterday, were I was pissed of and leave the thread for a time

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Why did you leave the thread?

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because of all the sad and depressed aura here yesterday, but after equerio slowly cheers up here, I come back

 

nut it looks like, it was again depressed and Swirls is again away for a couple of weeks ...

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Yeah. There's been lots of fighting lately

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We should just stop debating philosophical matters.

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Indubitably!

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Well, if you want chapter 2, I can put you in the pm-conversation, don't worry, NFSW-Content is marked with lines, you can skip until the nedxt line

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Your choice 

Edited April 17, 2014 by The Snapp

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Put you in now, like I said, I marked it, so you can skip one comment from sky and the longer scene^^

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Alright then 

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because of that, I try to notput important things during those scenes, so even the ones, who not read that part can still follow the story^^

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You writing is definitely getting better. 

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Why thanky(You will understand thanky soon^^)

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I already understand Thanky. You made up a contraction! 

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how far are you already?

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Finished    I read pretty fast.

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I can read fast, but my OCD tends to slow me down. 

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and how do you like it so far?

[Fishy Stick 7,538]

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The writing style is good, your grammars not to bad. No offense but you've definitely improved from Chapter 1.

 

Do you have OCD Game?

Edited April 17, 2014 by The Snapp

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what is this OCD?