Fishy Stick 7,833 April 17, 2014 Share April 17, 2014 38,716 Alright then Number 1 proprietor of Fishy Sticks since February 17th 2014 a.k.a The Snapp Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deae Rising Shine~ 57,155 April 17, 2014 Share April 17, 2014 38.717 because of that, I try to notput important things during those scenes, so even the ones, who not read that part can still follow the story^^ 1 Legends never die. Ponies neither. Rainbow Dash is best pony! Ava made by Pandora^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fishy Stick 7,833 April 17, 2014 Share April 17, 2014 38,718 You writing is definitely getting better. 1 Number 1 proprietor of Fishy Sticks since February 17th 2014 a.k.a The Snapp Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deae Rising Shine~ 57,155 April 17, 2014 Share April 17, 2014 38.719 Why thanky(You will understand thanky soon^^) 1 Legends never die. Ponies neither. Rainbow Dash is best pony! Ava made by Pandora^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fishy Stick 7,833 April 17, 2014 Share April 17, 2014 38,720 I already understand Thanky. You made up a contraction! 1 Number 1 proprietor of Fishy Sticks since February 17th 2014 a.k.a The Snapp Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deae Rising Shine~ 57,155 April 17, 2014 Share April 17, 2014 38.721 how far are you already? 1 Legends never die. Ponies neither. Rainbow Dash is best pony! Ava made by Pandora^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fishy Stick 7,833 April 17, 2014 Share April 17, 2014 38,722 Finished I read pretty fast. 1 Number 1 proprietor of Fishy Sticks since February 17th 2014 a.k.a The Snapp Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gameangel147 5,915 April 17, 2014 Share April 17, 2014 38723 I can read fast, but my OCD tends to slow me down. 2 NAME: GAMEANGEL147 AFFILIATION: MANE 9 GOAL: TO LOVE AND TOLERATE AND EAT TACOS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deae Rising Shine~ 57,155 April 17, 2014 Share April 17, 2014 38.724 and how do you like it so far? Legends never die. Ponies neither. Rainbow Dash is best pony! Ava made by Pandora^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fishy Stick 7,833 April 17, 2014 Share April 17, 2014 (edited) 38,725 The writing style is good, your grammars not to bad. No offense but you've definitely improved from Chapter 1. Do you have OCD Game? Edited April 17, 2014 by The Snapp Number 1 proprietor of Fishy Sticks since February 17th 2014 a.k.a The Snapp Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deae Rising Shine~ 57,155 April 17, 2014 Share April 17, 2014 38.726 what is this OCD? Legends never die. Ponies neither. Rainbow Dash is best pony! Ava made by Pandora^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fishy Stick 7,833 April 17, 2014 Share April 17, 2014 38,727 Obsessive compulsory disorder. Mental illness. Number 1 proprietor of Fishy Sticks since February 17th 2014 a.k.a The Snapp Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deae Rising Shine~ 57,155 April 17, 2014 Share April 17, 2014 38.728 oh ... Legends never die. Ponies neither. Rainbow Dash is best pony! Ava made by Pandora^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fishy Stick 7,833 April 17, 2014 Share April 17, 2014 38,729 Very hard to get rid of it has the power to ruin lives. 1 Number 1 proprietor of Fishy Sticks since February 17th 2014 a.k.a The Snapp Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deae Rising Shine~ 57,155 April 17, 2014 Share April 17, 2014 38.730 *Hug gameangel* 1 Legends never die. Ponies neither. Rainbow Dash is best pony! Ava made by Pandora^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fishy Stick 7,833 April 17, 2014 Share April 17, 2014 38,731 The style I'm typing in is my essay style! 2 Number 1 proprietor of Fishy Sticks since February 17th 2014 a.k.a The Snapp Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gameangel147 5,915 April 17, 2014 Share April 17, 2014 38732 *hugs back* Thanks guys, but it isn't too severe. It just gets annoying at times. 2 NAME: GAMEANGEL147 AFFILIATION: MANE 9 GOAL: TO LOVE AND TOLERATE AND EAT TACOS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fishy Stick 7,833 April 17, 2014 Share April 17, 2014 38,733 That's good that it's not severe Number 1 proprietor of Fishy Sticks since February 17th 2014 a.k.a The Snapp Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deae Rising Shine~ 57,155 April 17, 2014 Share April 17, 2014 38.734 Legends never die. Ponies neither. Rainbow Dash is best pony! Ava made by Pandora^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gameangel147 5,915 April 17, 2014 Share April 17, 2014 (edited) 38735 And it actually varies from time to time. But yeah it can get in the way sometimes. And I am really surprised by how much you improved Rising? Did you study or something? Edited April 17, 2014 by gameangel147 2 NAME: GAMEANGEL147 AFFILIATION: MANE 9 GOAL: TO LOVE AND TOLERATE AND EAT TACOS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fishy Stick 7,833 April 17, 2014 Share April 17, 2014 38,736 Number 1 proprietor of Fishy Sticks since February 17th 2014 a.k.a The Snapp Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deae Rising Shine~ 57,155 April 17, 2014 Share April 17, 2014 38.737 Uhm, no, just write like usual. Did I really improve so much? Legends never die. Ponies neither. Rainbow Dash is best pony! Ava made by Pandora^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fishy Stick 7,833 April 17, 2014 Share April 17, 2014 38,738 Indubitably! 1 Number 1 proprietor of Fishy Sticks since February 17th 2014 a.k.a The Snapp Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gameangel147 5,915 April 17, 2014 Share April 17, 2014 (edited) 38739 Yep. At least gammatically, it is a lot easier to read. I can't say anything about story elements yet, Edited April 17, 2014 by gameangel147 2 NAME: GAMEANGEL147 AFFILIATION: MANE 9 GOAL: TO LOVE AND TOLERATE AND EAT TACOS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deae Rising Shine~ 57,155 April 17, 2014 Share April 17, 2014 38.740 thanky all^^ 1 Legends never die. Ponies neither. Rainbow Dash is best pony! Ava made by Pandora^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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