private Welcome to Echo Falls

[Eddie 23]

Eddie had arrived to hoofington an hour ago and waited for the customer "where is this fool, she should of been here an hour ago" Eddie was sitting on a stump with his saddle-bag by his side "man i need another smoke" Eddie light up another cigarette, he already smoked 8 of them waiting for the customer.

when Eddie arrived to the hand-off location he was already paranoid that he hadnt shown up, Eddie got off the stump and walked around it for a minute "aaah hell with it im going home" as he was about to grab his saddle-bag a voice from the bushes shouted "YOU WITH THE BLOND HAIR, STAY WHERE YOU ARE!!!"

 

it has been a set-up and Eddie just bolted, thoughts abouts gaurds putting him in juvenile prison (jail,hall whatver) raced through his mind and the only option he could think of at that moment was to run for it, Eddie unfolded his wings right before he bounced his hoofs off the stump and flew above ground, he flapped his wings as hard as he could to out run the gaurds, he wasnt sure how many gaurds there were but he knew even one gaurd would take him down "damn damn damn damn damn!!" Eddie landed on the ground and decided to continue the run on foot/hoof in the forest, he ran as fast as he could dodging the trees in his way, as he could still hear the gaurds shouting in the distance "I THINK HE WENT THIS WAY!!"

 

after a minute of running, making sharp turns in the forest, Eddie felt exhausted 10 seconds ago, Eddie thought he still heard the gaurds as he was a little shaky and nervous and could feel his heart beat, he accelerated aven tho hes exhausted.

Eddie came out of the forest, he didnt have time to react that the forest ended with a hill and quite a long rolling fall down with rocks,

he rolled down it and tried to fly off it as he unfolded his wings, but ended in failure as he hit a big rock on his fall down and broke his left wing, when he landed on the hard pavement road he hit/broke his right front hoof "AAAAAAAAAAAAAH DAAAAAMN!!" Eddie kept rolling around on the side of the road in pain.

 

(i do hope its not much to read)

Edited August 14, 2013 by Eddie

[sunne 659]

Sweet Symphony watched with horror as the bus got too close to the border of the road. Tha voices were back and she was seeing blackness creep up the side of the hill. 

Just a hallucination, just a hallucination, don't freak out, she told herself. 

A thousand voices exploded in her head as she felt the bus tip over and fall into the lurking darkness. She screamed and covered her ears.

"Make it stop!" she cried out to no pony in particular. 

As the bus landed, she was slammed into the side, She hit her head hard on the window and felt a small -snap!- in her right foreleg.

The shadows she had seen on the hillside crept up to her and smothered her in the darkness, until she could neither see or hear a thing. 

She was unconscious.

[RedStorm 66]

Pyxel realized something was wrong. He looked outside to see the bus fall.
"Oh Sweet Celestia why-"
He was cut off by the crash.
Pyxel was rammed against the glass, creating a small wound in his head.
His eyes closed and he hoped it would all be over. Suddenly, it was.
He opened his eyes.
All he could see was the ground but as he turned around he saw dead ponies, some of them rammed against the glass, some of them just lying there.

Pyxel's guitar was pretty much right next to him and it had some scratches.

"O-oow..." He muttered as he spotted some more wounds on his leg and his chest. He was pretty sure that his sides were damaged as well.

Noticing his guitar, he stood up awkwardly and grabbed it, trying to climb out of the bus at the same time.

Finally, he decided to just bash one of the windows with his guitar and climbed outside. He was now standing on top of the bus, looking around himself.

"Hello? Miss Blossom? Anypony? Please?"

Tears rolled down his eyes.

"Well... atleast I made it..."

Suddenly, he realized that he was on a bus that was going to explode any second so he decided to jump off of it.

He landed on his side, hurting it even more. Looking back, he spotted Chem.

"Hey! Y-you there?"

The mare didn't move. Pyxel walked to her an dragged her away from the bus.

"There you... go..." He muttered and sat down. His head was bleeding, making him dizzy.

[Noble 66]

Light was awake, scared, he started grabing the students that seemed alive,he kept count in his head “sweet,violet." he then saw pyxel outside the bus and ran over to him. Light was breathing very heaveliy because he was carrying the two ponies on his back.

Edited August 14, 2013 by Noble

[Inactive01 5,299]

@RedStorm

 

Chemm woke up from her unconsciousness. She wasn't sure how long she remained at such a state. Nonetheless, it felt like an eternity... Chemm could also feel a growing pain on her head and abdomen. The collision must have been so hard that it caused severe muscle sprains around those regions. She was lucky not to have received a concussion. What made her situation even more fortunate was that her diary and saddlebag were still intact. Her precious dairy. The only item she truly cared about in there, and it was still there. She smiled knowing that it was still there as she meekly opened her yellow saddlebag.

 

She tried to get up, but she felt too much pain to do so. She could see a blue stallion who had also just got off the bus, standing beside her. She could feel herself blush slightly at his sight. Was it he who saved her from the crash? What exactly happened? She didn't know. She asked with a struggle to the blue stallion,

 

"H-h-hello? W-w-where... am I?"

Edited August 14, 2013 by Sterling Crimson

[sunne 659]

@@Noble, 

((Pyxel was already conscious and had taken Chemm off the bus...))

Sweet Symphony woke up to the feeling of something- or someone- holding her. She groggily opened her eyes and looked down. She was off the ground, on somepony's back.

"AAAHH!" She screamed as she struggled to get off the stallion's back. The voices immediately kicked in. They were telling her not to trust him, and in her startled state, she believed them. She writhed until she fell off his back and did a faceplant into the ground, followed by her injured foreleg smashing into the ground.. She cried out in pain and scrambled to her hooves. She put her good hoof to her nose. Looking at the stallion, she backed away with a terrified look in her eye. The voices had gotten to her this time.

"S-s-stay away from me!" she yelled. She cantered a bit away, found a spot to sit, and sat. She was trembling with fear now.

[Noble 66]

Light saw that she had awakened and flopped off her back, and started trying to calm her down, then he pointed at the burning school bus with his wing, after that he tried to explain the hurt pony that he was a mute.

 

 

 

 

((Ooc:yeah, i changed it, sorry about that)))

[RedStorm 66]

@@Sterling Crimson,

 

Pyxel heard somepony talk to him.

"Huh? Wha-?" He was still dizzy from the loss of blood, He realized that Chemm was the one who talked to him.

"Oh... uh yeah. You're safe, fine, brilliant. Except the fact that you nearly died."

Pyxel shook his head, trying to shake the dizzyness off.

"Wait a second... Miss Blossom!"

With a quick leap, he was at the bus, dragging Miss Blossom out of it.

He managed to open the doors and was now dragging another pony out.

The wound in his head was now bleeding like crazy, so he tied his scarf thingy (What's that called in english? xD) around his head.

"It hurts... o-ow... just gonna... rest..." He muttered and passed out.

[Inactive01 5,299]

@RedStorm

 

Chemm could see the nervousness in the blue stallion's face. She wanted to try making his acquaintance, considering how chivalrous it was of him to save her from the nightmare that was the flaming school bus. She could see him trying to save other ponies from the mechanical abyss. The screams continued to be heard from the bus. She could feel her sink once she realized that some of the other students might not make it out of the bus on time. The flames were really beginning to engulf the bus now, and she could hear loud coughs and wheezes as ponies struggled to breathe for dear life.

 

She barely knew the students. And yet, to see them suffer in the flames was simply too much. She could feel tears from her eyes, an unusual sight for somepony like Chemm. She was a steadfast, emotionally strong pony, but the idea of death was simply too strong. What compounded her misery was the fact she saw Miss Blossom in tatters and severely injured, and Pyxel passing out trying to help another pony get off the bus. She wanted so much to help the stallion; he saved her life after all. But she felt so weak... the pain from her abdomen was still throbbing, and she felt powerless, unable to move. She wanted so much to write to her diary now, but she couldn't even move her hooves without experiencing pain from them. What was she to do now? She could only watch as she tried with much pain to trudge along the road and towards the blue stallion... Maybe she could try dragging him out as well as her response to him saving her...

Edited August 14, 2013 by Sterling Crimson

[TheGreatTrixie 42]

"What..."-Violet woke up not much after the crash. Her head pulsed from the pain and she felt dizzy. Somepony screamed from that she felt the pain much stronger. "Where am I..." She laid on the ground watching the sky, she could only saw the top of the trees and and a strange smoke which came not far from her. Violet turned her head to the direction of where the smoke could possibly came from. The bus that she travelled on a few minutes was on it's side and it was burning. She saw only a few pony outside. One of them was crying and another one tried to calm her down. Somepony tried to save those who were still inside. It was a caos. "No...this couldn't be..." Violet hardly stood up while she was fringed upon crying. "No!..." The next moment she felt so sick. Her stomach retched and her leg started to tremble. She swallowed one than slowly headed closer to the bus. She saw the pony, who tried to help the others, passing out but she was shocked and that moment she didn't know what to do just moved closer to the flaming wreck.

[sunne 659]

@@Noble, 

((She's not quite in the emotional state to respond properly or realize that he had saved her life. ))

Sweet Symphony put her hooves on her head and curled into a ball. The voices in her head were making her question everypony around her.

She tightened her little ball. She wanted to be away from here. Her paranoia was out of control, and every thing the other two ponies said sounded fake in her schizophrenia-addled mind. The voices told her they were fine, and putting on an act to win her sympathy.

"All of you! Stay away!" The blue mare shouted. She was starting to have hallucinations of ponies coming after her, and wasn't in the mental state to realize it was just more delusions.

[Noble 66]

Light was analyzing everything and his mind was filing a report in his head. “most students dead,sweet=Shock and most likely insane slightly, ms blooms=Fatally wounded, chemm=badly wounded, pyxel=passed out." He started trying to calm himself down, taking a sip of a mountain dew in his bag.

Edited August 14, 2013 by Noble

[Eddie 23]

After Eddie had suffered through the pain in his hoof and his left wing he got up, looked left and right "i believe i had ran pretty far away from hoofington" Eddie didnt know how to tell witch way is south or north "damn, i guess ill settle in some town...AGH! or something" he started walking north or so he thought he actualy went south.

 

he couldnt put his front hoof down on the ground since it gave him too much pain, so he had to touch the ground with his front hoof silghtly he also couldnt fold his left wing, when he tried it was painful for him so he had to have to unfold.

after a few minutes of walking:

"pain is temporary, pain is temporary, pain is temporary...AGH i know it is, atleast i outran the gaurds, HA!! take THAT CELESTIA AND SHINING ARMOR!! YOU SHOULD TRAIN THEM MORE!! not have relations with them in the showers HA!!" Eddie was never a pony that liked how things were ran in Equestria, he was rebelious and anti-social at some points

Eddie then sees something in the distance that looked like smoke "finnaly civilazation...but that dosent look like a chimney smoke, and not a camp fire....looks more like fuel burning"

Edited August 14, 2013 by Eddie

[Noble 66]

Light tried to scream for help, but he remembered“oh yeah i'm a bucking mute",he checked on all the ponies and saw that ms. Bloom was dead, he closed her eyes and mouthed the words “celestia, spare her soul", he then threw his spare mountain dew to the others.

[sunne 659]

@@Noble, 

When the Mountain Dew made it to her, Sweet looked up at it then shoved it away. She was still trembling and thought that the ponies after her were still coming. She curled up into an even tighter ball and started rocking. She still had little sense of mind. she started humming a random tune dazedly, trying to pretend she didn't see the shadows approaching.

[Noble 66]

Light calmly came over to her and tried to calm her down by playing some calming music, then he started trying to make her less.....insane by knocking her out so she could rest for a while, then he carried her over to where chemm was.

 

 

((Finally somepony posted!))

[sunne 659]

@@Noble, 

Symphony had tried to scuffle away from the stallion, to no avail. He tried playing some music to calm her down, but it did little for her current mental state. All of a sudden, he knocked her out, and once again everything faded to black.

((XD nice, knock out poor Sweet Symphony.))

[Inactive01 5,299]

@RedStorm

 

Chemm continued to approach ever so slowly to the blue stallion who saved her. She wanted to repay his chivalry by pushing him out of the way from the destroyed bus. It could be blown to smithereens at any moment, but Chemm's conscience was clear. She would never live it down if he wasn't saved from the flames. 

 

She finally reached the blue stallion, her body still hurting from the crash that took the lives of many. With all her might, she pushed on the blue stallion, hoping to at least make sure that he was some distance away from the bus.

[Noble 66]

He then realized the thing he did, but confirmed it was for the best, he later had found some water to wake sweet up with in a while, so he waited 50 minutes to wake her up because her mental state would have cleared up, then he splashe the water to wake her up.

Edited August 15, 2013 by Noble

[Eddie 23]

Eddie had headed torwards the smoke, he limped close enough to see what was burning, he saw what looked likea bus to him, with victims around it "looks like an accident, the surviving ponies must be devestaded or some other emotional ship" Eddie limped torwards them to ask for directions, Eddie whistled loudly at them "HEY!! all of you there! damn it hurts"

[sunne 659]

@@Noble, 

Sweet Symphony woke up shivering and coughing after having the chilly water dumped on her.

"That was c-c-c-cold," she muttered, her teeth chattering from the cold water.

She looked at the stallion who was still holding the bucket and suddenly remembered her little paranoid attack. Her ears flattened and her shoulders sagged.

"S-s-s-sorry about my little at-t-ttack," she apologized, still shivering. She wrapped her forelegs around herself to try to warm up. "I h-h-have schizoph-phrenia, and s-s-sometimes it gets the better of me, like then."

She hated telling somepony she didn't even know about her mental issues, but he had probably figured it out by then, and if he hadn't, she owed him an explanation.

[Noble 66]

Light knew she had mental problems,so he used his wings to hand her a mountain dew and a black blanket out of his bag, then saw eddie and pointed at him, clearly scared and surprised

 

 

((Char limit is the worst thing ever in the history of the internet next to pony porn))

[Inactive01 5,299]

(OOC: Personally, I enjoy being able to write lots of characters. Try broadening on your character's feelings and thoughts as they perform their actions. That could help.)

 

@RedStorm

 

Chemm was still trying her best to push the blue stallion out of the way. By this time, the fire had begun to subside, and all that was left of the bus were charred bodies and burnt metal. The sight was a horror to see in the midst of all the tall green trees and wonderfully refreshing bushes. The view only made Chemm's tears grow. She may have survived, but many of the ponies... were simply burnt to a crisp. It made her all the more determined to push the blue stallion up despite her injuries. 

 

When she found she couldn't do so anymore, she cried out for help, albeit with a weakened voice. 

 

"Hello?!!! Is anypony else still alive?! Can anypony hear me?!! Please!!! Somepony here is down, and I can't help him up because I'm injured! Help!!!" 

 

Chemm continued to shout like this for some time, unsure whether anypony heard her... She could only give tears of sadness and fear as she continued to call out for help.

[sunne 659]

@@Noble, 

"Th-thanks." Symphony gratefully took the blanket and drink. She followed the stallion's gaze and noticed another stallion. She stood up, blanket wrapped around herself, and squinted at the stallion.

@@Eddie,

"Uh...Hello? Who are you?" she queried loudly so he could hear. He seemed to be in pain, but he wasn't the only one. Her nose had some dried blood on it from her faceplant into the hard-packed dirt earlier, and her leg hurt with every small movement.

She heard a cry for help from the bus and turned back to the mute stallion.

"Can you go help her?" she asked, weakly raising a hoof in the diirection of the bus."I would but I hurt my leg when we crashed. I'll deal with whoever that is," she added, jerking her head in the newcomer's direction"

Edited August 15, 2013 by Mint Drop

[Noble 66]

Light nodded to sweet and walked over to bus, holding his breath due to the burned pony flesh, he swiftly grabbed up the blue stalion and chemm, and carried them back calmly, after that thoughts and strange feeling came to his mind but he brushed them away.