Does this drawing of Fluttershy look ok?

[KittyTwilight 110]

This is the first time I've drawn Fluttershy, and any constructive criticism is appreciated

Here it is. Sorry forgot to upload it

[Surface 115]

First? 

The ears are wrong direction, and lines aren't good.

But this is good for first! 

[Aniki 386]

First time drawing her? I'd say you did a splendid job!

 

The first time I tried to draw Fluttershy it was so terrible I turned off my computer and went to bed like 2 hours earlier than usual. Haha.

 

My only critique is perhaps a bit lighter coloring, seems a bit too saturated. Aside from that, awesome! Keep it up!

Edited December 10, 2013 by Aniki

[KittyTwilight 110]

First? 

The ears are wrong direction, and lines aren't good.

But this is good for first! 

Thanks! I appreciate it, I'm not the best at drawing but I enjoy it, I'm still practicing with lines.

First time drawing her? I'd say you did a splendid job!

 

The first time I tried to draw Fluttershy it was so terrible I turned off my computer and went to bed like 2 hours earlier than usual. Haha.

 

My only critique is perhaps a bit lighter coloring, seems a bit too saturated. Aside from that, awesome! Keep it up!

I thought I may have done that, thx for the feedback!

[Techite Sparkle 354]

For a first time... this looks amazing a close to show acurate

Bravo ^-^

[fimdash 1,197]

Hmm pretty good, especially for your first attempt at drawing her! I'm not too great at giving constructive criticism with art, but I'd say try to make the irises a tiny bit smaller

[KittyTwilight 110]

Hmm pretty good, especially for your first attempt at drawing her! I'm not too great at giving constructive criticism with art, but I'd say try to make the irises a tiny bit smaller

Thanks for telling me that

[Frith is Magick 1,471]

Pretty good, especially for your first time. Computer art isn't really my domain, but a method I use is continuing the inner lines of the mane and tail into the outline in order to give it a nicer flow. The other main points have been covered, all I can say is that with practice you can refine your work. Good work, keep on trying.

[Mr. Critical 434]

Not too bad actually. The muzzle looks a bit sharp, but it looks fine really.

[Zygen 6,066]

Overall especially for a first drawing pretty darn good. The head overall looks pretty well done, might have some minor issues not sure. Might even be a little small.

 

Also the body looks to be a bit big, maybe even the neck. Not all of it is visible, but it already has that big feel to it just from what shows, which makes things look out of proportion.

 

However, overall this is very good! Way way way better then my first fluttershy! infact probably better then alot of the crap i could draw right now ;p.

[Neon Fire 473]

For a first time, I think this is good.

 

I do have some stuff to help you in the future though, being an artist as well.  Her ear is a bit large and pointy (try rounding it) and her snout's a bit pointy too, unless that's just your style.  Also, the color is a bit dark for her, try making it lighter.  But other than that, great job and I hope you have more art!