open a journey through time and space.

[Mr. Critical 434]

Trottingham. A city like none other. A city of business, and wealth. But this city was about to get an introduction to something it has never expierianced before. A plot of massive proportions. This very city, would harbor those that would bring the very universe to its knees... they just didn't know it yet.

[Commander Tangent 861]

Icarus entered the city. His search for the creator had led him here. No longer would the creator be able to run, hopefully, he would get to settle things here. He checked his medical bags, and his weapon, before moving into the main part of town to get a feel for the place.

[**Appleshy** 19]

Appleshy sat silently in her studio, staring out the window. "What adventures would today hold?" She asked herself silently as she watched a masked figure trotting by her cottage. He looked... strange. He had a beak. Ignoring him, she thought about her home. How she'd been kicked out because of her religion. Wiccan. Pagan. She was an outcast, but she did not care. She still secertly contacted those who she loved.

[Mr. Critical 434]

In the midst of the city, within a deep alley. A weezing, yet haunting, groan could be heard. In the distance an object was materializing. Containing a being of untold knowledge, vast intelect, and technology unfathomable by the beings of equestria. When the object had become stationary, the pilot stepped out. A tall, litish brown equine. By the name of Mr. Critical. He had come to this city to investigate an anomoly. He looked back at his vessel, and with great wisdom, he spoke...

"Why in the wide, wide universe did you disguise yourself as a tool shed.

A great intelligence, indeed. With his confusion, he ventured from the alley, and looked to the tall buildings of Trotingham.

[CeruleanPoptart 14]

Governess sighed while she was laying on the couch in her tardis reading a book . It was abouring day like every other because of the gaping hole her son left when he left her. The quiteness desturbed her like a murder scene. And dust knew this and was worryed for her compaion Governess. Dust appeared beside governess a foot away. " Please Governess Go out and do somthing! Your worrying me!" dust says worryed for governesses heath.

[Mr. Critical 434]

Critic had emerged from the alley, he was searching for... actually that's a good question, what is he searching for. Oh well, he'll probably find out late. He began to look at all the other ponies out today. Critic wasn't normally one for large crowds, but today was an aception. He didn't really like the large crowds because he towered over the other ponies, them being at a natural 4 feet, while critic was a wopping 5 foot, 9 inches. The stairing, can't really get passed it, but he did his best. He had othheher things to worry about today though. An odd temporal anomoly was detected and he need to find out what.

[Anon In Equestria 57]

Connor was a simple unicorn he he liked laying in bed but he would have to get up soon he got up and he looked at his clock 1:17 it read "smeg I'm late!" Connor jumped out of his bed and put on a black cloak and made a dash for the door he left his flat with a package he had somewhere to be and he had to get there soon or he was in trouble

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,824]

Thunder Dash flew into the warm city of Trottingham. The first thing he smelled was the delicious treats coming from a nearby pub. "So this is Trottingham...not a bad city, but it could use a little bit of modernization." Thunder Dash stated as he continued to walk slowly on the streets. 

[Anon In Equestria 57]

Connor was dashing down the road he was gonna be in trouble he was meant to be behind hooflocker meeting a client connor had to hurry the buck up he turned the corner and saw hooflocker he ran around behind it and saw a pony in a trench coat and fedora "hay are you mister x sorry I'm late have you got the cash

[Mr. Critical 434]

Critic was making his way through the streets trying to detect anything and everything that could have any relation to a temporal anomaly. On paper it sounded relatively simple, but in practice... he was better of finding hay in a needle stack... on fire. He turned the corner observing the sights. He saw many things. Two stallions in a hooflocker, a timid mare in her apartment, and...

*sniff sniff.

"Tofu dogs."

he said those words with drool flowing from his mouth.

[Anon In Equestria 57]

"Ahhh so you are connor of hoofington" the man "ummm yeah that's me now do you have my bits"connor replied "yes I do have you got the stuff" said x "of course I do hand me the bits" said connor a little annoyed by how long this was taking "here you go 500 bits now hand over the stuff" "ok here take it" connor said handing the stalion a small bag of white powder "good good thanks" said the x ok I've got to go you know how to contact me if you need more ok later" connor said leaving and heading out onto the highstreet "hmm what should I do now" his belly rumbled at that statement "ok food what to get hmmm.... Oh tofu dogs yum" connor said as he made his way to the tofu dog stand

Edited December 25, 2013 by lonewolf1735

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,824]

Thunder Dash kept on walking though the narrow streets of Trottingham, with the smell of sweets of the pub still wafting about. A gust of wind blew his silky mane, causing him to look pretty attractive to mares passing by. He looked at them, as they looked at him, muttering to themselves. 

[CeruleanPoptart 14]

Governess Sceams loudly as dust drags her to the door forcefuly and throws her out."What the hell!" Governess says to dust pretty upset. "And Stay Out!" Dust says slamming the tardis door in Governess Face. Governess Bangs on the Door Pissed Saying "Let me in Dust!".

[Mr. Critical 434]

Critic ate his hot dog, and felt something. It wasn't indigestion... this time. He felt what he was looking for, yet faint. He began trotting toward his target until he found a small shop. He walked in and found it to be an antique store. He was met by an elderly pony. She began to speak.

"Hello, Im Dig Site. How may I help you?"

"Um. Just lookin around for now."

"well, if you need anything. Just give me a call."

She gave Critic a wink, and a shiver went down his spine. She left Critic, while she wen around back.  After a while of searching, another mare came in and she was fairly younger. Yet... familiar. She Came up to Critic and said...

"Hi, can I help you?

He gave a smile .

"Just... looking."

"well, if you need assistance, just call.

She gave a wink, and Critics smile Grew.

"Names Dig Site by the way."

Critics smile vanished.

[Commander Tangent 861]

Icarus made his way into the center of town. 

 

@,

 

He noticed a very specific Stallion  walking by, as he seemed to be the center of attention for several mares.  Icarus at one time had had a mare of his own, but that was a story for later. He simply sat down on a nearby bench, and watched the area, thinking.

[Mr. Critical 434]

Critic started to investigate the antique shop. He was starting to get an idea of what he was dealing with. But he had to make sure. He snuck into the back and started to sense for the anomaly. However, Critic had stopped because the anomaly was... below him? Critic began to look around and found a near by door. He opened it and found a stair well. He began to walk down until he found what he was looking for, his suspicions confirmed. It was a...

"A crack in time and space."

I began to call my ship and within a few minutes the tool shed began to appear. I ran inside and grabbed some scanners, and began to scan the crack. Before long, I felt it to dissipate. Yet, I felt something coming through. And it was big.

[CeruleanPoptart 14]

Governess After the random, made her way down the road after senseing something strange. She followed her senses and went west as it was where it was coming from.

After a while she  came to her self to a shop. Governess Become confused " Why a bucking shop ? a little stupid .. " she thought grumbling and walks in serching  and ends up out of surprise while looking around spoting anther pony.

Edited December 27, 2013 by IIFlyingGraceII

[Mr. Critical 434]

Critic felt the sensation getting worse, a large creature was coming and it was coming fast. I turned around to make my way to the tardis so I could find something to stop this thing and came face to face with a pony standing before me. I looked to her and she had a confused look to her, as if she was curious of what was going on. I opened my mouth to ask her what she was doing here but before long I heard a low growl. I turned to the almost gone crack to find a bipedal being standing before us, standing a t 8'3". he had to crouch just so e could be in the building. Okay translation Circuit, do your thing.

"~Uh, greetings. H-how may I help you.~"

The beast looked around in Confusion and spoke.

"~What. Is. This. Place.~"

It spoke in a low groggy manner as if it had been awoken by something.

[CeruleanPoptart 14]

Governess smiled a little. She just remberd how good it felt to discover something  but something blew out of her thought as she herd anther language be spoken by the bipedal with a unkown name that just apeared out of nowhere. "Before we tell you where you are how did you get here?' she said in its language.

[Commander Tangent 861]

Icarus immediately picked up radion excitement. Radiation, not a lot of it, barely even noticible, but it was there. He had a spell to detect it inside of a patient so he could treat for radiation poisoning. Thus, he could detect small amounts of it naturally. He followed it to the source.

 

@,

 

"Ahh, this is most unexpected." He arrived to find a pony already there. 

[CeruleanPoptart 14]

Governess Fluttered her wings in fear as she heard anther thing behind her. She Bucked the unknown thing out of self fear.

She turned around quickly ready to fight whatever it was. " Oh come on whatever that is its ugly" she said to the thing as she could not know what it was sense she just woke up and her freind kicked her out.

[Mr. Critical 434]

The being saw the one behind Critic, and saw that she was smiling at his presence. Asking for his name. It spoke and said...

"~I. Am. Ch'troka. Of. The. Planet. Calibri.~"

Okay, now Critic has a destination.

"~Um, Ch'troka, you're on a different planet.~"

His eyes widened in horror and confusion. Critic thought he should calm him down before something happens.

"~ Not to worry, I am fully capable of getting you home at the time you left. It would be as if you never even left your home.~"

Ch'troka seemed to calm down a bit. Though a sense of wariness still lingered in him. He gave a nod in understanding. Critic then turned to the mare in the room.

"Excuse me miss, but I could use your assistance."

But to his surprise, Critic found another pony in the room. and on the floor.

Edited December 27, 2013 by Mr. Critical

[CeruleanPoptart 14]

"Oh Yes my fellow Time Lord". She says laughing turring to him after bucking that pony in the face.

" Uhh may i ask  Ch'troka what time are you from because i may fear that you may been teloprted to a differnet time" she says in hes Lag. She knew that thing behind her will be pissed so she turned to it ready as she nodiced it was a weird dephormed pony atlest she guessed.

Edited December 27, 2013 by IIFlyingGraceII

[Mr. Critical 434]

Critic looked to the pony in confusion. Time Lord? What, is that some kind of status or something. Oh well I'll ask later. I looked to Ch'troka. He then spoke.

"~The. Time. Was. Of. The. 27th. Millennium. Under. The. Protection. Of. Ch'klora. The. Great. Queen.~"

Okay, got a time and place. Now Critic can get him back to his home before things take a turn for the worse. The bipedal equine stepped into the light giving Critic a better chance to get a better view of him. He was big, as said before. His coat looked rough, as if he was outside often with a lite brown color to it. Not really sure if it was the natural color or if it was dirt. His eyes were like ours, with the exception of the cornea. It was a slit with a vertical and horizontal slit. His mane was a dark brown with light brown accent to it. Critic Directed him towards the tool shed in the room.

"~That there is my ship. I can take you home, if you wish~"

He gave a nod.

[Commander Tangent 861]

@,@@Mr. Critical,

 

"Your attempt at self defense was not needed. As for both of you, Extra terrestrials, What is your business here?" He asked the two, looking for the source of the radiation in the local area. It had to have been there somewhere. But, theses two were of primary concern.