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Don't be so careful with your lines. It's easier to correct a loose sketch than a hard one.

thanks! Spitfire said they're pretty good but she wouldn't go writing home about it.

Great Sketch! :)

Only things I'd change would be making her mane and wings larger.

 

 

Applejack is great :)

Only thing to add would be to slightly make her flank bigger. (Horses have round butts like we do)

 

Pinkie could use some touching up on her face and neck.

 

I totally understand your plight. Drawing ponies was super difficult to get right when I did it.

 

 

Don't be so careful with your lines. It's easier to correct a loose sketch than a hard one.

 

thanks for the adivce everypony!

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Only one small technical error I detect:

 

The right arm look as if it's coming out of her face, and not it's natural position.

To fix this simply shorten it.

 

Other than that... Great jog bro

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It's looking great!! I'm sure that if you keep drawing, your sketches are going to be better and better each time.

The one of fluttershy is my favorite. ;)

fluttershy is your favorite? that makes wet mane rarity sad.

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And i'm just siting here jelly because i can't draw that good and even if  i could pencils give me goosebumps (they just do alright)

A pencil is all I can even use so don't feel too bad. My drawing teacher cringed cus I refused to use my drawing pencils in favor of my good old zebra mechanical pencil


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The linework and shading are nice and clean.

The anatomy is good, but has a few hiccups here and there (jawlines, ears, leg joints ect.), that should go away with practice.

Are you using any reference sheets?


 

 

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A pencil is all I can even use so don't feel too bad. My drawing teacher cringed cus I refused to use my drawing pencils in favor of my good old zebra mechanical pencil

It's the sound that they make when you write with them (same with chalk on a chalkboard) i had to drop engineering because i never did the tech drawings (which are always pencil)


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The linework and shading are nice and clean.

The anatomy is good, but has a few hiccups here and there (jawlines, ears, leg joints ect.), that should go away with practice.

Are you using any reference sheets?

Reference images for manes and what have you drawn free hand on computer paper. sketched then cleaned up wet mane rarity and the standing RD are the most recent I think they have improved some of the technical issues I am continuing to work on it!


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