Fire Breather PMV

[Razersnake 3]

I made this short PMV

 

I could use feedback on it, not about the lenght but of how it came out and if it would have been success full if i made it 4 minutes long.

 

Im also be starting another PMV, featuring . . . Rarity

it will be a while until it's finished but ill post about it here.

 

 

 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9eoqNxtLwZM&list=UUpiAsKwR7YpCxdsM3L7nocA&feature=c4-overview

[Solar Shadow 13]

I liked it you did a good job on it. 

 

the disco ball affect thing you had going on made it feel like i was watching something a little fuzzed out if you know what im say like not clean but other then that it was awesome!!!

[Razersnake 3]

So if i were to make it more clean, lower the amount of screen effect like the disco ball one for example. Would that make it easier on the eyes ?
Anything else you think i could improve on here ?