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VoxelBrony

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  1. What do you think of my latest fanfic?

  2. What so you think of my fanfic, The ongoing tale of Valor,and her friends?

  3. To Lyra: Since you are my favorite pony, i have to know this. would you be weirded out if i made my wallpaper, all profile pics (avatars) a picture of you? and would you please say hi to me? :3 Lyra: would you be creeped out if I made my wallpaper, all my profile pics, and avatars, a picture of you?
  4. My fanfics are all spaced out in paragraphs now :3

  5. hey all, repsol rave told me to split my fanfics in paragraphs. so i will next time :D

  6. hey all. sorry about my fanfics. they weren't split into parahraphs. :( next time ill make sure they are.

  7. made another fanfic! its about my oc ponies! check it out. its called the ongoing tale of Valor and her friends.

  8. The Ongoing Tale of Valor and her Friends *UPDATED* When Valor was a little filly, she was made fun of alot. for some odd reason, she never did have parents. she was made fun of for... just plane stupid reasons. for being blue... for having a horn that doesnt work... for being a blank flank... yeah. Valor was extremely sad and depressed. Valor had no friends and no place to stay. She decided to run toward Canterlot. She didnt like Fillydelphia. Later on, Valor ran into the Canterlot school. She went to school there from then on. On her first day, she was made fun of. alot more than she was at fillydelphia. she started to regret ever coming to canterlot until winter gave Valor a note. it said "its ok, We got your back" written in permanent marker. Valor grinned at Winter. a Colt behind her looked at her with a grin. Valor turned the paper over. it said "To: Valor From: Winter and MineStack. Later on that day, when they were released out of school for the day, they met up outside. "Its ok, new kid. we wont let them make fun of you." Valor smiled big. "Allow me to introduce ourselves." Winter said. "My name is Winter. This is MineStack." "Hey, do you mind if I stay with one of you for the night? i have nowhere to sleep." Valor asked. Winter nodded. "come with me." at Winters house were 3 beds, 3 tvs and 4 rooms. 2 bathrooms. "Here, Valor. you can have the big room." The next day, they met up outside. MineStack had to get a package from Fillydelphia, containing tons of supplies, and Valor was competing in a competition. a flying competition. MineStack Took off in his air balloon and went to Fillydelphia. Valor took off to the race. Valor arrived. She was lining up on the line. "Hello, Fillies and gentlecolts! welcome to the 74th annual hunger games! oh, wait, i mean, welcome to the annual Flying Tournament!" the announcer said into his mic. first, on lane 1, we have Cloud Kicker! on lane number 2, we have FloorBurner! on lane number 3, we have Derpy Hooves! and finally, on lane number 4, we have Valor! On your mark... Get set... Gooo! Valor sped through the air as swiftly as she could. she could feel the adrenaline rushing through her veines. then suddenly, a green alicorn tied places with her. same speed and same agility. they left the other racers way behind. they were so close to the finish line, when suddenly, the green alicorn tried to cheat! she used a fireball she made with her hands, (which was her special talent) and threw it at Valor. But it missed by a tiny feather. Valor dove out of the air into the finish line. Thats when her cutie mark appeared. it featured a flaming thunderbolt. "For first place, we have Valor! for second place, we have, Floorburner! for third place, we have, Cloud Kicker! and for Final... wait... Did not finish, we have Derpy Hooves!" Valor was proud of herself. she won and got her cutie mark. Meanwhile in Fillydelphia... MineStack got off his air balloon at a town. a ghost town. When he walked down the street, he heard crying, and weeping of pain. he looked around the corner and saw a light blue pegasus, laying on the ground with 3 colts surrounding her. "Come on. Give us your money or we kill you." the colt said as he pulled out a knife. MineStack watched closely. he found a dagger laying on the ground and kept a good grip on it. he stuck it in his pocket. he climbed onto the rooftop silently. he yelled at the colts. "Stay away from that mare!" the colts stared at him. "Back off. or you and this mare get it." MineStack quickly threw his dagger he found at the colt's knife and jumped down. Run! he yelled at the blue pegasus. He slid under the colts legs and picked up both the dagger and the knife. he then jabbed the knife deep into the 3 colts' bodies. he disposed of the 2 blades as quick as he could and went to aid the poor blue pegasus. "What happened?" MineStack asked. "I... I... they... they... fractured my arm... for my life savings... thanks you... for helping......." MineStack quickly got her to a hospital. after a long time of recovery, Minestack brought the blue pegasus to the Canterlot School. There she met Valor and Winter. "My name is StormStopper, by the way." StormStopper said. "My name is MineStack, this is Valor, and this is Winter." "Are you here to help me?" StormStopper asked. "Yes" Valor Said. "We've got ya covered." "Hey, Valor." asked StormStopper. "Do you know who Applejack is?" "No" Valor said. "She is really nice and one of my best friends." StormStopper replied. "you should meet her sometime." "I'll go tomorrow." Valor said. The next day, Valor wandered off to see Applejack. Applejack was bucking apples. she picked up an extremely hard apple. (it was actually a rock that rainbow dash painted) she was looking at it closely. Valor poked Applejack. Applejack turned around quickly and hid Valor on the side of her cheek. "Oh, So you wanna go?" Valor Said Angrilly. "LETS GO SOUR APPLE IM NOT AFRAID OF YOU DONT THINK YOU CAN HIT OTHER PONIES FOR NO REASON! i'll let you off on this one but this doesn't mean i like you. Valor took off back to her friends. "I Hate Applejack because she hit me with a hard apple on purpose." Valor Said. "ok." After the incident with Applejack, she wasnt even thinking about it anymore. She was thinking about the 3 colts and the story that MineStack has told her. She knew that one colt had escaped. She thought deeply about where that colt went. She knew he would seek revenge. Valor couldn't get her mind off the one colt that had escaped MineStack. Could he have bled out? died of hunger? or lived on to do some other dirty job? Valor was becoming a nervous wreck. She couldn't think anymore about what that colt could be doing right now, then suddenly a scream was let out across the street. Valor and Winter quickly rushed across the street. they crept up too the window and peaked inside. All they saw was blood and gore. broken limbs. they rushed inside. their old friend, Blockwin, was now gone. they looked around the house. they found nothing. then a shadowy figure appeared out of the hall. When Valor spotted the figure, it had threw a knife that skimmed past her face. She could still feel the wind of the knife passing by. then the figure came out of the shadows. It was a Green pegasus with a Green and bloodred mane. His cutie mark, a knife. Winter and Valor stared at the colt through the call. He introduced himself "hello.... my name is Blade." the mysterious colt said with the lowest, creepiest voice. Winter yelled at him through the hall. "Hey, why don't you shove that knife up your butt?" "No need for jokes, i seek vengeance." Blade said. "I was serious, but ok" Winter said. Valor laughed. "You will pay for your disrespect!" Blade shouted. Blade through a knife at the doorknob, breaking the doorknob. Blade through multiple knives at the ponies. He never hit them once. Valor was the most athletic, and Winter had the most agility. These attributes assisted them through the bottom part of the house. They were quickly ran down into the basement. The Green pegasus flew downstairs. With the most of his speed, he dashed toward the two ponies, who huddled up together. But it was all in the plan. When the pegasus dashed for the two harmless ponies, they jumped out of the way and ran upstairs, locked the door to the basement, and searched for a way out. The two ponies ran upstairs to find a way out. They spotted a door to the balcony. They opened the door. "Climb on" Valor said. Winter hopped onto Valor. They flew away from the house back to their home. Valor and Winter were proud that there plan had worked, But at the same time, they were terrorized. Adrenaline running through their veines. They couldn't believe they had made it out alive. In the morning, they told MineStack and StormStopper everything. "That was the colt that had escaped me." MineStack said. "Yeah, We thought so." Winter said. Winter led MineStack, StormStopper, and her friend, Valor to the house. Valor being the only one not wanting to return. MineStack stared at the dead body inside. he couldn't believe that such a little Green pegasus could kill such a big Pegasus like Blockwin. they went inside. the twisted Blue pegasus was still banging on the basement door. MineStack set up a trap. A launcher trap. he put the knife on a slingshot. When Winter opens the door for the menacing green pegasus, Valor will release the knife from the slingshot. The knife will penetrate deep enough into the colt's eye, traveling deeply into the brain. This was sure to kill him. Winter opened the door for the pegasus. The pegasus. the pegasus rammed through the doorway. Valor released the knife. The knife hit the crazed pegasus in the eye and killed the insane colt. After this, befor they left, Floorburner, the pegasus that had lost to Valor, Silently slit StormStopper's throat. Valor turned around quickly after hearing the short, but load scream coming out of MineStack. Valor glared at the orange pegasus. "Oh, Hello Valor" FloorBurner said Menacingly. "Dont suppose you mind if I take this colt with me to put into my collection. I already have one of the same. It was me who killed the two colts. I took MineStack's identity by putting his own skin over my body. I helped StormStopper to defend my identity. To not be figured out. Oh, and it turns out the pegasus you killed was Blockwin. I told you the story of what I did. You worthless ponies never suspected anything. The body on the floor is one of the three colts. The other colt is dead too." "Revenge..." Valor thought. "FloorBurner! Hand me a knife and ill help you." "Oh, it seems you want to help me out to kill your worthless friends. After, I will kill you." Valor was about to kill Winter. Her eyes, filled with tears. Valor turned right to look at the Crazed pegasus and instead stabbed her violently. She cut every single limb of FloorBurner off. Blood went everywhere. Valor started to cry. Winter Cried also. Winter and Valor quickly looked through the books for a revival spell. Winter could easily cast it. But through the archives, there were no revival spells. The End. I hope you enjoyed. im feeling sad too at the end of this. I declare my first Fan-Fiction a success. BTW Blade left the house at the end and was watching the whole thing. Thank you so much for reading my first ever fan-fiction Please brohoof this because i worked very hard on this. Valor and her friends would appreciare it. Take that knife and shove it up your butt if your thinking about killing me xD
  9. heh im just tryin to make some more fanfics to entertain myself and you all

  10. how do i become a member?

    1. ParsoOfEquestria
    2. SCS

      SCS

      You have to reach 40 posts to automatically become a full member.

  11. im curious... who are your favorite background ponies?

  12. how do i post fan fics? i made a new one 15 minutes ago.

    1. SCS

      SCS

      You can post your fanfictions in this forum section: http://mlpforums.com/forum/29-fan-fiction/

    2. Sky Warden

      Sky Warden

      Pony Artwork section -> Fan Fiction -> link your Google Doc or whatever in a thread.

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