Gizmo

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  • Birthday 05/23/1994

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  1. Zoop

    Happy birthday, Mogiz! :)

  2. Happy Birthday, Giz!

    1. Gizmo

      Gizmo

      Thanks ^-^

      You could of just told me on skype instead of making me sign on to here ;A; lol

       

  3. Y u do dis to meh ;A;

    1. NewCalamity

      NewCalamity

      What did I do? щ(゚Д゚щ)

    2. Gizmo

      Gizmo

      you keep ruing through my mind! Stahp eeettt <3

       

    3. NewCalamity

      NewCalamity

      x3 Well, I'm so sorry, please forgive me :3

  4. Woahhhhh, Gizzy, where did you get such a badass avatar from? ooooo:

    1. Gizmo

      Gizmo

      I TOTALLY MADE IT BY MYSELF, YUP, ALL ALONE. lol

    2. NewCalamity

      NewCalamity

      Woahhh, gizmo, you're so talented! @u@

    3. Gizmo
  5. It's been quite some time since I posted that ._.", and since then I have played it. I won't say it was really scary (I did play it in the dark, and volume on high), but I did enjoy the story line very much.
  6. Nothing interesting going on... Lets change that shall we?

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    2. Commander Urdnot
    3. Gizmo

      Gizmo

      >Mentioned it yourself

      >Suspended as well

    4. Shiki

      Shiki

      Who are you talking to, right now..? ;_; You're scaring me.

  7. Log on more often :3 <3

  8. Oh hai forums, so we meet again.

  9. That's not entirely true, I know LOTS of stories in second person with lots of characters, and some with too many characters, and they're all not written in the "choose your fate" sense.
  10. Well If you're doing present tense maybe second person would be more of an ally than third person perspective. In Third person and even First it's usually written in past tense, but that's just my opinion. Also Hat is really right about all of that development stuff, was about to mention that as well XD
  11. Well there's your problem, you're mixing up the present tense with a past tense narrative. It's not your writing that's your problem it's your grammar, that's all. Take your first sentence for example which sounds more natural: "Shade watches with a smile as the two fillies talk, after the incident at the wedding almost two weeks ago he’s happy to see things peaceful and back to normal again." Or "Shade watched with a smile as two fillies talked, after the incident at the wedding almost two weeks ago he was happy to see things peaceful and back to normal again." Hope I could help you out a bit
  12. Soooo much class work @-@ but much more fun than high school so far~<3