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  1. Y u do dis to meh ;A;

    1. NewCalamity

      NewCalamity

      What did I do? щ(゚Д゚щ)

    2. Gizmo

      Gizmo

      you keep ruing through my mind! Stahp eeettt <3

       

    3. NewCalamity

      NewCalamity

      x3 Well, I'm so sorry, please forgive me :3

  2. It's been quite some time since I posted that ._.", and since then I have played it. I won't say it was really scary (I did play it in the dark, and volume on high), but I did enjoy the story line very much.
  3. Nothing interesting going on... Lets change that shall we?

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    2. Commander Urdnot
    3. Gizmo

      Gizmo

      >Mentioned it yourself

      >Suspended as well

    4. Shiki

      Shiki

      Who are you talking to, right now..? ;_; You're scaring me.

  4. Oh hai forums, so we meet again.

  5. That's not entirely true, I know LOTS of stories in second person with lots of characters, and some with too many characters, and they're all not written in the "choose your fate" sense.
  6. Well If you're doing present tense maybe second person would be more of an ally than third person perspective. In Third person and even First it's usually written in past tense, but that's just my opinion. Also Hat is really right about all of that development stuff, was about to mention that as well XD
  7. Well there's your problem, you're mixing up the present tense with a past tense narrative. It's not your writing that's your problem it's your grammar, that's all. Take your first sentence for example which sounds more natural: "Shade watches with a smile as the two fillies talk, after the incident at the wedding almost two weeks ago he’s happy to see things peaceful and back to normal again." Or "Shade watched with a smile as two fillies talked, after the incident at the wedding almost two weeks ago he was happy to see things peaceful and back to normal again." Hope I could h
  8. Soooo much class work @-@ but much more fun than high school so far~<3

  9. Gizmo

    Private Soul Eater

    Stein laughed, he couldn't stop "First of all, you didn't have to bet, none of you did, when I set that up it was nothing more than a joke, but now that you've come out about it in front of Lord Death, I'll let him decide what punishment should be fit for everyone who put money on this fight, as well as if he should return everyone's money" Stein sighed and tapped Shizu "You can let go of him now" "Oh, Right." Shizu said as she morphed back into her physical form, she blushed as she noticed she was now holding hands with Seth and dispersed her sutures from their hands and pulled her arm a
  10. Gizmo

    Private Soul Eater

    Flames spread all over her and changed from green to blue, "Huh, That's interesting. Instead of melting my ice, your flames are just covering me. And it's cold?" Shizu was just as stunned as Seth was. "Hmm interesting" Stein said as he inspected the two closely. "My guess, is that since Shizu has a stronger soul that Seth, her Frost attributes are slowly changing Seth's flames to something that's so cold it's hot. Sort of like dry ice." Stein pulled out a cigarette and lit it with the flames that covered Shizu's weapon form.
  11. Gizmo

    Private Soul Eater

    "Idiot" Shizu said as a blade of ice expanded out and cut straight through his foot, missing any bones or important veins so as to cause him pain, but not any serious damage. "Are you so blind as to what the hell has even happened!?" Shizu yelled as she was unharmed from ay of his kicks. Stein put his hand on Seth's shoulder "Seth, it's over. It'd be best you stop now, or I'll have to play the overly protective father" said threateningly with as smile as he held a scalpel to Seth's throat. "I'd love to see your anatomy up close through means of dissection"
  12. Gizmo

    Private Soul Eater

    Stein sighed, "It doesn't matter sir... Surely you see he's playing right into her trap" Stein rubbed his arms for warmth, "Shizu sees all fights in a tactical chess matter, she works up all her moves to one final point, each move has it's purpose, the water, the increased CO2, all the Methane, even though all of her attacks deal with Ice or freezing temperatures, it all ends the same... in flames. It's how she beat me and destroyed my lab the last time.." Stein had a strong urge to light a cigarette, but knew it was a bad idea. 'I just hope it ends here... if they still go on, he'll invoke h
  13. Gizmo

    Private Soul Eater

    Shizu simply stood there, the CO2 around her had veiled it's self as a protective shroud. As Seth's punch came in contact with it, his fist started to slow down, not a lot, but enough to slow the blood flow in his fist. As his fist came in contact with Shizu she flinched from the power that still had manage to come through and coughed slightly, in turn she simply took hold of his hand and held on to it. Permafrost slowly crept up the length of his arm covering the special points in which soul energy is released, she had expected him to take more careful protection of these areas 'Maybe he does
  14. Gizmo

    Private Soul Eater

    Shizu only managed to block half of Seth's punches. He was fast, that was for sure, but he didn't pay attention to the after effect of his punches. slowly but surely, the water from the frozen ground, the methane in the air from her first permafrost attack, and added CO2, all building up to this moment, she just a few more moves until it was all over. 'For now I'll just have to bid time with some addition precautionary measures' she thought of a trick she learned from Marie Mjolnir when she was over monitoring stein, it didn't do the same thing but it did allow her to condense the air in the r
  15. Gizmo

    Private Soul Eater

    Shizu grunted as her shoulders met the ground. She expected flames, but nothing as sporadic, Seth had got lucky, ans she knew it by the expression on his face. She slid her legs around and kicked Seth in the shin as she jumped on her feet. 'If he's going to rely on luck, I'll just have to make the odds of that luck much more slim...' she thought to her self. 'I cant use permafrost, he'll just evaporate it to methane, but I use regular Ice, it'll melt and keep him wet' she frowned at this thought though, Ice was easier to crush than permafrost or dry ice, but it'll have to do.' she slammed her
  16. Gizmo

    Private Soul Eater

    Shizu staggered after a couple blows and smiled maniacally, she had absorbed each blow by canceling his strength out his her soul wave length, 'perfect as always' she thought. She followed up with a move she previously observed from Stein, but with a bit more flare. After Seth's final follow up with his fist, she stepped to the side as he punched, the frost that had gathered around Shizu's feet allowed her to slide Seth forward as she grabbed his arm with ease as she flipped him on his back. With as much speed and precision as she could muster, she slammed her elbow down on to Seth in a pile d
  17. Gizmo

    Private Soul Eater

    Shizu took her glasses off and threw them to Stein, who was expecting this and caught them. Shizu closed her eyes and focused her soul to a minimum frequency level, 'water is hot, ice is warm, frost is cold, permafrost is freezing' She thought to her self in repetition as she concentrated. The air around her became frigidly cold, and frost began to gather on the floor where she stood. after a few moments of this Shizu opened her eyes to reveal brilliantly blue eyes had now replaced her original brown eyes. Shizu took her stance and readied herself concentrating and locking on to the open spots
  18. Gizmo

    Private Soul Eater

    "Says you sir" Stein sighed and pulled out a cigarette as he lit it and took a drag. He watched his students file into the room and saw Shizu and Seth taking their place in front of Deaths mirror. walking over to the both of them he finished his his cigarette and flicked it off to the side, "So here we are, your first deciding soul wavelength fight Shizu" he said teasingly as he ruffled her hair to hide his true emotions. "Oh stop it" Shizu blushed and pushed his arm away, "Besides you shouldn't worry about this, I'm not going to get hurt." "I'm not worried about that Shizu, I'm worri
  19. Gizmo

    Private Soul Eater

    "Well if you'd be so kind as to let me go my darling dearest" he said making Shizu blush as she let go of stein and crossed her arms still blushing and irritated "I told you to stop calling me that..." she said in spite. "Well since Shizu likes to go all out when she fights" he said as he glared over at her, remembering the west wing of his laboratory she destroyed in their last sparring session, "I received permission to use Lord Death's dimensional room, he'd like to over see their fight as well for..." he stopped talking for a bit and sighed "..personal reasons, so we can head over ther
  20. Gizmo

    Private Soul Eater

    Stein just watched as Seth dropped the papers on his desk "Thank you, but next time you could do with out the attitude. For that I'm deducting an over all grade from both your papers. " he said as he stared off at the window waiting for everyone to finish bringing up their class work. "No I didn't make ay bets because... well I'm holding the betting pool" He said as he smiled and winked at Breech as he took his homework, "And don't think this gets you out of your other two pages. I'll expect them tomorrow." "YOU WHAT?!" Shizu yelled as she heard what stein said "You made a betting pool on
  21. Gizmo

    Private Soul Eater

    "Well if everyone has their homework done, I'll take that first." Stein grinned, he knew pretty much all of them had forgotten, but he didn't really mind, he didn't ave anything planned for class today because he needed to talk to Lord Death about the current Kishen attacks that have been occurring. "Oh, of course I'm ready" he said happily as she pulled her homework out of her messenger bag. "7 Pages Shziu, very nice as always" Stein said as he took her homework and he signed off on it, and waited patiently for the other to hand in theirs as well.
  22. Gizmo

    Private Soul Eater

    Shizu smiled and gasped excitedly, "I finally finished my book!" she yelled only to be shushed by the librarian. "Heh, oops.." She blushed feverishly as she packed up her things and headed to class in an exceptionally good mood. "Good morning!" she said in a chipper voice as she entered and met up with Seth and Keshamaru, who were sitting at a desk. "Hey, you don't look as good as Seth did here last night..." she said curiously eying him as she got uncomfortably close to Keshamaru and poked at his wound. "Why didn't Stein or Nurse Red Heart send you my way?" she asked as she eyed Keshamaru cur
  23. Gizmo

    Private Soul Eater

    Shizu smiled and gasped excitedly, "I finally finished my book!" she yelled only to be shushed by the librarian. "Heh, oops.." She blushed feverishly as she packed up her things and headed to class in an exceptionally good mood. "Good morning!" she said in a chipper voice as she entered and met up with Seth and Keshamaru, who were sitting at a desk. "Hey, you don't look as good as Seth did here last night..." she said curiously eying him as she got uncomfortably close to Keshamaru and poked at his wound. "Why didn't Stein or Nurse Red Heart send you my way?" she asked as she eyed Keshamaru cur
  24. Gizmo

    Private Soul Eater

    (OOC: Yeah I'm fine with that) Shizu awoke he next day to the sound of a blaring alarm clock, "ugh... school already?" she moaned in grief, she was up late the night before reading, again. She got ready for her day and got her messenger bag together, "See you in class later Stein" she yelled, knowing he was probably barely waking up, as she left out the door with a breakfast muffin. She made her way to school and saw she had some extra time, so she went to the school library and began to read her book she had started the night before.
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