Um...H-hi... It's Ditzy here. I was just wondering if someone could please give me a critique on my story? Everypony I ask says they don't do shipping or just can't critque... It's a reader x human pony thing... Could someone, if it's not to much trouble..., look at my story please and tell me if I'm doing well so far? I understand if no pony wants to... but here's the link anyways...
http://www.wattpad.com/user/RebbecaSlayer