EDIT: I advise for you to realize this fanfic may be N.S.F.W, as it is a bit sketchy. I'm not sure if so or not, but I would suggest viewing at home.
So far I've only done 1 chapter, got lazy and blew it off. Being the amazing and well equipped writer I am (teh best of teh best), I and my handsome looks decided to revive the fanfic (or in some odd man's case "fapfic") and begin typing once again. But before my mind and fingers agreed to get out of the gutter, I ran into a terrible problem: I had no criticism! I was that good.
No, just not many people read it. So I need well thought out reviews of the most greatest bestest fanfic ever: R LEE ERMEY IN PONYVILLE.
http://fizzypup.deviantart.com/#/d4gllqp
Please, respective reviews only. I know you wanna kiss the ground I walk on, but do honest, no matter how wonderfully super awesome I or my fics are.
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