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  • Cinnamon Pop


    CinnamonPop

    • Age: 18

      Gender: Female

      Species: Pegasus

      Appearance: <p> A red coat with a darker red mane. Her mane is very straight, and Pinkamena-esqe. She can mess it up to the point where it will have many bangs and curl around her face. Her tail is long, and criss-crossed in a kilt-like pattern between a lighter and darker color of brown but the color of her tail does match her dark red/brown mane. </p>

      Cutie Mark: <p> Cinnamon Pop's cutie mark is a silver gem. Her Cutie Mark changes color based on her mood. Cinnamon's Cutie Mark turns white when she is happy, red when she is sad, and black when she is angry. Her cutie mark also can appear on any part of her body at various speeds. Cinnamon is referred to as "The Diamond In the Rough" by Apple Fritter, noting her hiding that she doesn't really believe in friendship with others (and may even hide from them), until they make the first move towards general friendship.  </p>

      Personality: <p> Cinnamon is usually competitive. She is slightly more hostile toward acquaintances and more dependent than an average pony. Either than that, she is mainly carefree. She tends to "Jump to conclusions" in unimportant issues. She's an aggressive believer of justice, and will act accordingly to any to hurt either her, or her friends. Whether or not you intend to mess with her doesn't matter and won't depend on how harmful she <em>wants</em> to be to you. Otherwise she's a very quiet, huggable pony; and her friends will definitely alibi it. *red gem/Blank Flank* When she's really upset, she tends to cut herself from society, her friends, and will hide in a patch of forest that she calls "her house" for about as long as it takes to regain her mood. She can usually cheer her friends up with some talking and funny antics. No matter how much "digging" she has to do, she ends up finding out the problems that others may have and may try to cheer them up! </p>

      Backstory: <p> Cinnamon Pop was born just outside of Cloudsdale, in a very small town named Sugarcane Lake. Though she had problems breathing in her first few moments and was required to be put on oxygen for a few hours before she could breath properly. She was a perfectly fine young foal. A few years later in life, when she was around the midst of nine she was asked, by one of the many other pegasus youngsters to compete in a competition between her and a few others. They were all by Cinnamon's mind, far better flyers than her. But as soon as the race started she had already achieved the lead between the eight cirrus lengths or so. The other young pegasi were impressed, but a little upset. After that she signed up for all manner of school flight clubs, Being second best to a few of the greatest of flyers. She was bound for great things until a fateful day after her fifteenth birthday. She was practicing in one of her many warm ups for a but race the school was having. A sport day of sorts where the students could sign on for an event. Of course Cinnamon had selected all of the racing ones. But during her practice session, as she took a flap her wing locked up. She like many pegasi fell victim to one of the many stages of teenhood, Wing locking. Wing locking can happen at any time, preventing the pegasi from flying for around a couple of hours, but after it happens it doesn't repeat, it just so happened that this particular lock was directly over a large patch of trees. She hit a few trees before finally landing onto the locked wing in the Everfree Forest. Cinnamon couldn't control the fall with both wings, only one that allowed her to come out without critical injury. But unfortunately, as a side effect to the fall from such a great distance, she had major damage to the wing that had locked. It had severed one of the major nerves that allowed her to change her wing's direction. Knocked out for a few hours, as well as stuck in the rain... She eventually started to seek out anyone as she screamed for help. </p> <p> Her meeting with Zecora was certainly an interesting one as Cinnamon was terrified of the zebra, however she let Zecora drag her since she couldn't move from the impact. The Everfree Forest is one of the few areas where the pegasi don't control the weather as flashes of lightning revealed even more morbid faces on the trees surrounding Cinnamon as she was dragged. Terrifying the young filly more to where she braced her pain, broke Zecora's grip on her, and ran. She had managed to get to Ponyville hospital not to far away for this diagnosis. "She might never fly again." Cinnamon resigned to stay with her sister, after her sister had informed her parents that Cinnamon had recieved a terribly broken wing they came and almost smothered her. After they left from their three day visit Cinnamon's sister became her carer, who had her admitted to the Ponyville Schoolhouse. Cinnamon's first day was rather tense, she was introduced to the class by Cheerilee. One of the ponies on this first day stood up, pointed at her and spewed forth a sentence:<span style="font-size:16px;"> </span><strong>"Her Cutie Marks On 'er Back!"</strong>  Immediately, Cinnamon became an interesting topic to discuss amongst the class. She felt rather fearful for a few minutes. When lunch had been called Cinnamon resigned herself to a small corner of the play area, away from the other colts and fillies. She did this for a few weeks thus forth. A particular filly strutted up to her and spat venomous words of hatred at her. "<strong>You're too old to be here, and your Cutie Mark is wrong! It shouldn't be on your wings or chest, it should be on your flank, freak!</strong>" The filly Junebug had caused Cinnamon grief over a few days until a particular pony, a large colt that seemed rather out of place stopped the horrible bully. He never spoke a word from that day or before. Cinnamon was intrigued by him for a while, but when her conversing with him got her nowhere she stopped. A few weeks later a filly by the name Apple Fritter befriended her. It was a rather awkward conversation for a few minutes, but they started to find common ground to tread. They managed to become great friends. Apple Fritter had gotten the new pony to come out of her shell. Cinnamon had made friends with the nurse that had seen her before the doctor at the hospital, but she wasn't usually available inside of school. More Ponies took interest. And after her tenth week in Ponyville, A pink pony, rather bouncy knocked on the door. <span style="font-size:18px;">"</span>Hello!<span style="font-size:18px;">"</span> She had squeaked. This was Pinkie Pie, She hadn't noticed the newer pony in town from all the adventures She had been having. So, She had set up a party that Cinnamon would not forget. And that was true, a year on and she hadn't forgotten. </p> <p> She had also acquired more friends, A Candy Floss had started to converse with her. Along with others such as, Spring Step and Sprinkle Medley. Though, Spring Step Is rather new to her. She hadn't met Spring before. Sprinkle and Candy had spoken to her before she had turned seventeen, but still, a new friend is usually an interesting one. So, to put it together, Cinnamon Pop, The bright red pegasus with a deeply crimson mane, beholding a stripe of red like her coat Is a sporting pegasi, that, even though she had lost one of her wings' ability to work properly, and had struggled through some time at school, is somewhat a charismatic pony, with an amazing running speed, as well as cunning and wits enough to disorient a mind. </p>

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    Finally got around to reading this character properly. She very unique and exciting! ^.*

     

     

    And as you asked for critiques...

    - It read that she entered Ponyville schoolhouse under Cheerliee. Not sure if Cheerliee would teach that age group, but that's just my headcanon she's only a younger filly teacher.

     

     with a strength rival to that of A Bulk Biceps, and cunning and wits enough to disorient a mind

    - Very strong (minus the flying/wing issue), and very smart. Not much of an issue, but it sounds like you're leaning slightly into a Mary Sue trope of perfection. 

     

    That all being said, I think Sēkr would get along with her. Particularly as a checker-playing buddy :P

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    Actually my oc RootedWisdom would get along well with her. Seeing that she is one: treated as if she was precious by her parents. Two: She's been in EverFree, where RootedWisdom's Kingdom resides(though nobody has found it and lived to tell the tale.) Three: RootedWisdom is actually shy around women, but don't be surprised if he doesn't chew one out if she said something harmful to anypony. And four: RootedWisdom is very competitive, and that's a great plus.

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