First Drawing Of Pony.

[TheodorePonievelt 4]

This is Pony. it is currently a work in progress, I really can't think of a name so for now it's Darryl Hall Pony. The cake is just a random object and may be removed before I'm done, but this is a pretty thick pencil, so I'm not sure if trying to erase it would be smart, then again I could just take it out with Gimp or Paint, anyway, what do you think?

[Chigens and Kay 3,832]

It's pretty good but, maybe the horn should be moved more toward the front of the head, it seems out of place.

[Paradox 1]

pinkie pie: cake?!! ooo is there a party?!

[Gingerpotato 889]

It looks really good for a first drawing of a pony, especially the back legs. I always struggle with those >_<

 

However, I agree with Chigens, the horn should be moved towards the front of the head.

[TheodorePonievelt 4]

yeah, the horn also seems kinda long to me.

[dar tunsh 446]

I drew my unicorn OC... the trick with the horn is to wrap the mane around it. Here is an example (quick crop and resize in paint, lol)

 

All u really need to do is cut a part of the bottom off and draw a "hair-line," so to speak.

Edited March 19, 2012 by A TF2 Brony

[Marcato 2,143]

Its pretty swag! Cool dude with the sunglasses. :3

 

But i think the horn could be moved a little more to the front of the head like others have been saying. Other then that its pretty good.

[Alpha Centauri 169]

I agree about the horn, but apart from that its a pretty good drawing, considering that its ur first

[SrFrog 927]

The muzzle could be slightly more squared, just that and a few tweaks and it would be perfect.

[Daring Do 195]

This is a pretty good start! Keep on this trade and it will be just like the show before you know it!

 

I agree with the others though, the horn should be slightly closer to the eyes...