Criticize my writing!

[The Nth Doctor 663]

http://songbreeze741.deviantart.com/art/Gardening-462917223

 

http://songbreeze741.deviantart.com/art/Come-Little-Children-Of-the-Night-460795968

 

http://songbreeze741.deviantart.com/art/Ideologically-Sensitive-459877250

 

http://songbreeze741.deviantart.com/art/Fragments-My-Luna-456752644

 

If there's one thing I'm not good at, it's titles and keeping a running plotline.

 

Looking for feedback, both good and bad.

[SkyBound 829]

I have not had the chance to read your stories as of yet, but have you considered submitting them to the Authors Helping Authors thread?  Not only would your stories receive a bit more attention and exposure, but that thread is also a great resource to use if you are seeking critique and advice to help improve upon your writing.