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So I have this OC, her name is Anna (OH GOD THAT'S NOT A PONY NAME. Shush, I know). I love to use her for roleplaying, some writing pieces, and even to just show off as my main character for everything. So, why wouldn't I want her perfect? You know what they say, nobody is perfect, so the colors scheme I picked may not be as good as I thought they were. I have never gotten a definite answer to if my OC is pretty or not, all I have gotten is "Lol, it reminds me of golden sweetie belle".  

 

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Should I change anything? And this doesn't have to just be colors. Is Anna a generally pretty character?

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OH GOD THAT'S NOT A PONY NAME

Agreed with everyone else. Maybe the hair needs to be darker.


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I mean, she's not an alicorn bat pony changeling with a rainbow mane and tail. So you got the first mistake avoided.

Err, no. I try to have my OC's be realistic and not over-the-top Mary Sue, overpowered, dark lords, of... magical rainbows?

 

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she's really pretty! almost as close to perfect as you can get, the only change I'd make is giving her wings different colored tips, blue, purple, green, black or grey would look really cool  B)  but what can I say? I'm a sucker for colored wingtips


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I like it a lot! Without any accessories, the mane/body might be accused of looking too matchy-matchy, but the white coat really sets the whole thing off. She looks exactly like what her personality should suggest; professional, a scientist, but with a tousled mane that shows she isn't all that collected, and would fit into the show aesthetic in that role. 

 

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If I were to criticize it, the cutie mark confused me. It's intended to be a microscope, but it's stretched a little wide and looked like a sewing machine at first glance. 


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I like it a lot! Without any accessories, the mane/body might be accused of looking too matchy-matchy, but the white coat really sets the whole thing off. She looks exactly like what her personality should suggest; professional, a scientist, but with a tousled mane that shows she isn't all that collected, and would fit into the show aesthetic in that role. 

 

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If I were to criticize it, the cutie mark confused me. It's intended to be a microscope, but it's stretched a little wide and looked like a sewing machine at first glance. 

The cutie mark is the only undecided thing. As you can tell, on two of the pictures it's covered and not so detailed, and on the first you can't really see the whole thing either. I don't have a official cutie mark, all I know is that it's a microscope 

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