m1l1p1 40 August 7, 2014 Share August 7, 2014 (edited) --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Edited July 31, 2020 by NinjaSputnik -- 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bronyette 835 August 7, 2014 Share August 7, 2014 (edited) I think the tail and movements were really spot on. The only thing that I see that needs improvement is the puppets, or maybe the way you use them. I would go for a full two legs pose, instead of the one you are using now, where it looks like they are just facing forward with their chest slightly raised. It just looks really unnatural to me. Otherwise I think the animation was great! Edited August 7, 2014 by Bronyette 2 Click on the Banner for more info! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buck Testa 5,505 August 7, 2014 Share August 7, 2014 ...they are staring into my soul O.o lol it wasn't bad. you may want to pick something more natural for a pony to do and get some eye movement and blinking so it doesn't feel so disturbing. http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Billy%20G%20Gruff http://billyggruff.deviantart.com/ https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCPVpSXbUpDYTcaFHTPiPjYA Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
m1l1p1 40 August 7, 2014 Author Share August 7, 2014 (edited) -------------------------- Edited July 31, 2020 by NinjaSputnik -- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1111 1,284 August 7, 2014 Share August 7, 2014 (edited) are their necks realy that long? standing up maked them look weird Edited August 7, 2014 by flutersparkle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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DND 2,355 August 7, 2014 Share August 7, 2014 (edited) Ack- legs- legs! D: Their legs look really misplaced to me. Anyways, this is kinda nostalgic for me. Edited August 7, 2014 by IncognitoKiwoy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wingnut 6,948 August 8, 2014 Share August 8, 2014 This topic appears to contain original pony artwork that does not fall into any of the specific categories and thus has been sentenced to Other Fan Works. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
galaxysquid 2,122 August 8, 2014 Share August 8, 2014 Ohai! That's pretty good! Although the necks are a bit to long... you should fix that. ^^' Other than that it's really neat and it came out great! My OC, Starlight. (Better than Starlight Glimmer): http://i.imgur.com/RefDHIL.png Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragonsponies 101 August 8, 2014 Share August 8, 2014 this is kinda creepy since the necks are to long and their faciall expression never changes. more natural movements would be good. although this does however has rather smooth movement, now it just has to be correct i've been drawing for 3 years now practicing dragons and poniesi'd love it if you could check out my Deviantart or Tumblr. i also sell commissions right here on MLPForums, check it out! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
m1l1p1 40 August 18, 2014 Author Share August 18, 2014 (edited) -------------------- Edited July 31, 2020 by NinjaSputnik --- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prince Of Madness 28 August 18, 2014 Share August 18, 2014 There necks are just a few feet long. Although I could be exaggerating a bit to much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rainbow Skywalker 642 August 19, 2014 Share August 19, 2014 Nice job to be honest, for someone just dabbling in Flash I'd say this is a good start. People have been complaining about the necks, but I'd say that the stomach is more of a priority to fix being that it doesn't seem to exist Remember that back legs aren't going to be in the default state while moving, they'll typically turn towards or against a certain direction. Great starter loops though! Signature by Azura みぞれ 恋人 (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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