searching Everfree: What We Have Left Behind

[Firehearted 120]

@@Ano170,@@HunterTSN,

RECAP:

 

Feather Quill: Dead of Head Trauma so has a bump on the head. Atlas went to her. He is insisting to get her to a hospital.

 

Zephry: Died of Internal Bleeding. I mad an error early on and swapped Feather and Quill's deaths.

[Ano170 162]

@@Firehearted,

 

Okay, got it now, I'll edit my first post a little and then reply - thanks  

[HunterTSN 1,444]

Hold on, I thought I understood but now I'm confused again.

 

Done!

http://mlpforums.com/topic/110869-everfree-what-we-have-left-behind/

 

I know I only focused on Zephyr but everyone else is awake too, so get up. 

 

Injures:

Zephyr: She has a bump on her head with some blood dripping from it. That blood is permanently stuck on her and her mane.

Galatea: None visible besides the smallest bump on her neck. That's the dislocated vertebra. 

Atlas: Large gash down his neck. A lot of blood stains covering a good portion of his neck and down to his shoulder somewhat. Also permanent.

Feather Quell: None Visable

This was the first indication of their injuries where you say Zephyr has a head injury. Also you specifically mentioned focusing on Zephyr in the first post.

 

Oh. I just noticed I made a small error. 

 

Feather Quill doesn't have blood on her head. She got internal bleeding. Zephyr does. Sorry. When I was typing up the Report thing I swapped a couple injures and must have not fixed the post. Sorry.

Here it is repeated that Zephyr has the head injuries and Quill died of internal bleeding, I don't see where any error was made at all.

 

Feather Quell, Female, Pegasus, 17

Cause of Death: Head Trauma

​Estimated Time of Death: 1:15 PM

 

Zephyr, Female, Pegasus, 22

Cause of Death: Internal Bleeding

Estimated Time of Death: 1:30 PM

Here it originally stated Zephyr had the head injuries, but then it was edited so Quill had them.

 

"You alright" I laid at the side of the nearest pony. She had a grey mane and a steel blue mane. "Come on! Wake up!" I shouted keeping calm. I noticed a hit to her head. A bit of blood went down her mane staining part of the blue a crimson red.

Here is says "she had a grey mane and steel blue mane", assuming that was a typo and it was supposed to say "grey coat" instead that could only describe Zephyr as I don't think that Quill has any grey on her despite also having a blue mane.

 

RECAP:

 

Feather Quill: Dead of Head Trauma so has a bump on the head. Atlas went to her. He is insisting to get her to a hospital.

 

Zephry: Died of Internal Bleeding. I mad an error early on and swapped Feather and Quill's deaths.

This contradicts all of the earlier posts.

 

Did I miss something?

Edited September 26, 2014 by HunterTSN

[Firehearted 120]

@@HunterTSN,@@Ano170,  

 

Please give me a moment to tear my hair out

 

...

 

Okay, done.

 

Somewhere, I don't know where, I missed something up! Whatever it is we put it to rest here! I probably made a type somewhere which threw us off.

 

Feather: Head Trauma

 

Zephyr: Internal Bleeding

 

Any objections?

[HunterTSN 1,444]

@@HunterTSN,@@Ano170,  

 

Please give me a moment to tear my hair out

 

...

 

Okay, done.

 

Somewhere, I don't know where, I missed something up! Whatever it is we put it to rest here! I probably made a type somewhere which threw us off.

 

Feather: Head Trauma

 

Zephyr: Internal Bleeding

 

Any objections?

Alright, as long as we can agree clear it all up now. Just good to get sorted out now before The RP really gets going.

[Firehearted 120]

@@HunterTSN,@@Ano170,  @@Miss Reaper, 

Just a friendly reminder. I know other things get in the way which in the long run frankly this isn't important. Wow, that sounded better before I wrote it. Well just saying.

[HunterTSN 1,444]

@@HunterTSN,@@Ano170,  @@Miss Reaper, 

Just a friendly reminder. I know other things get in the way which in the long run frankly this isn't important. Wow, that sounded better before I wrote it. Well just saying.

I was just giving everyone some extra time to post because I know there are some weird timezones in this group. I can post again to get the ball rolling if that's what everyone has been waiting for.

[Ano170 162]

Yeah, sorry I haven't posted in a while - yesterday was pretty hectic, it's starting to look like today might be the same (welcome to uni!).

 

If I can I'll post tonight, otherwise it'll have to be tomorrow morning. Sorry about this!

[Ano170 162]

So university as it turns out can take up quite a bit of your time - who knew?

 

I'm really sorry but I think I'm going to have to drop out. We're barely in and already things like work and time zones mean I can't keep up.

 

Again, truly sorry about this.

[Firehearted 120]

@@Ano170,

 

It's fine. School work is much, much, much more important than this. Besides, I think I kinda died anyway. Again, it's fine. Thanks for telling me though.

[ReverieRiver 526]

Has this one died? Please don't let it be so

[HunterTSN 1,444]

Has this one died? Please don't let it be so

I'm still willing to continue it, Ano left but it's still early and wouldn't be too hard to write it off Quill somehow.