Guys, I need your help

[Minos 40]

I am a fic writer from Ukraine. Few weeks ago I have wrote a crossover of MLP and TES (The Elder Scrolls). Most of my readers liked it, but them quite a bit on that resourse. So, I desided to publicate it on central cites of MLP fandom. The problem is that I not quite enought in English, and absolutely don`t know English punctuanion, and my lexis is too poor. 

 

In other words, I need editor. I was able to begin translate it (with help of Google, of course), but I asking somebody of you to help me make it into readable form.

 

If some of you has been interested, please, tell me.

 

Here is Google docs. (first two chapters)

Here is also original text.

 

(God, I hope it isn`t too much mistakes in this text...)

 

P.S. Text is quite large, 128439 words in russian.

Edited December 18, 2014 by Minos

[Sugar Pea 2,682]

I think I may be able to be of some assistance.
How long is it? And what's it about? I won't do it if it's inappropriate.

Edited December 18, 2014 by teacup-bunnies23

[catnet 9,356]

I could have a go at editing it, if you're interested. Just let me know if that's okay with you

 

Edit: though it's fine if you choose somepony else

Edited December 18, 2014 by Edwardo_Brony

[Littlepip3000 111]

Send me a link to the story and I'll probably do it.

[catnet 9,356]

I've skimmed through part of the intro, and to be honest, I don't think I'd be the right editor for the job in this case. There are some phrases I can't really seem to get ('After a few hours of my camera went, who you think?' for example), and I can tell that this is gonna be difficult for me to edit with my complete lack of knowledge of the TES series. Sorry, but I don't think I would be able to really help you with this one

Edited December 18, 2014 by Edwardo_Brony

[Littlepip3000 111]

I am a fic writer from Ukraine. Few weeks ago I have wrote a crossover of MLP and TES (The Elder Scrolls). Most of my readers liked it, but them quite a bit on that resourse. So, I desided to publicate it on central cites of MLP fandom. The problem is that I not quite enought in English, and absolutely don`t know English punctuanion, and my lexis is too poor. 

 

In other words, I need editor. I was able to begin translate it (with help of Google, of course), but I asking somebody of you to help me make it into readable form.

 

If some of you has been interested, please, tell me.

 

Here is Google docs. (first two chapters)

Here is also original text.

 

(God, I hope it isn`t too much mistakes in this text...)

 

P.S. Text is quite large, 128439 words in russian.

This should be quite easy, I think. I'll be your editor for sure.

Edited December 18, 2014 by Littlepip3000

[Verily British 145]

Hmm, so far as I can tell your spelling is pretty much spot on, it just appears to be your grammar that needs some work.

 

From a purely spelling and grammatical standpoint I can certainly help, but I'm afraid I won't be much use in terms of lore or effective story telling. But, I'm more than willing to help.

[Minos 40]

This should be quite easy, I think. I'll be your editor for sure.

Fine. I`ll be glad, if you`ll do it. When will you be able to finish work?

[Littlepip3000 111]

Fine. I`ll be glad, if you`ll do it. When will you be able to finish work?

I got all the time in the world right now. I'll begin working on it today.