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@@Gloomfury, @@Lordav,

 

"Abendstern also has such things. In particular Iron and coal. The others vary, but we can always negotiate over what you need to our supply. We are also in the current process of obtaining more food, and lumber. Our nation can also act as a mid point in trade. If we agree to do so, we can exchange goods for you, saving you the time it takes for them to reach their destination." he said.

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"We could use most of those things. We're pretty low on raw materials, so that would be a very good deal." He took another drink from his glass and placed it back on the table. "Now to show my hand, so to speak." He chucked. "Because we can't really afford to shear what materials we have, the main thing we can shear is labor. What we lack in military strength we make up for in skill in many fields. Farming, mining, construction you name it.  

 

We also have a few veterans that I know for sure are the strongest in Quinacta. So some might not mind being guards or even trainers if you're feeling your troops could use a little more fighting skill under their belts.  Cause like I said, skill in many fields."

 

After picking up his glass again he leaned back in his chair. "We also have a rather keen knowledge when it comes to money and trade, so I wont have a doubt that we can all end up with a pretty bit in each of our treasuries. The reason why I'm willing to shear this with you both is because I really think we can help one each other and build a friendship between our nations.  

 

But of course, friendships are give and take.  So in return for my well skilled man power, we would like set up trade routs. From there we can buy and sell many things, raw materials being one of them. 

 

And also." He smiled. "We would grateful if maybe one of you would be willing to show us how to make our own air ships."

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The diplomats were glued to the portholes, watching the land beneath them fly past with a look of wonder on their faces. It was one thing to hear about a flying ship, but it was another thing entirely to experience it first hoof. Still, they were trained professionals, and they quickly got ahold of themselves. They replaced their looks of wonder with looks of mild curiosity, and took their seats. Peaceful Solution tried to use his magical senses to discover the magical enchantment that powered the flying ship, but to no avail. He reasoned that the enchantments had been hidden, to keep them secret.

 

Silver Gleam merely smiled, and removed the silly hat that had been concealing his horn. "I myself am a Unicorn, and many of the ponies in my nation are also unicorns."

 

(Hey, are we close to the emperor's throne room yet? :twi: ) 

((yes sorry friend.))

 

"Hmm... Very well, that is good to know." Guard said before opening then Emperor's throne room doors.

 

Blue Crystal has once again returned to stare out of his window, but as he heard that door was opened, he turned around to stare the comers.

 

"Welcome to the Crystal Lands. I am Emperor Blue Crystal, as you may guess. It has years, since here was last anypony from somewhere else." he said as he stared at comers interested.

"Guards, you may leave us alone." Blue Crystal said. Guards nob and then left.

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"Skilled labor hmmm? We could make use of that. And I'd be most glad to help you get yourselves off the ground without the use of wings. Under specific conditions of course. I'll even supply you with some raw materials for free as foreign aid whereever you currently need it as a kind gesture." The Kaiser said.

Mean while the new sub had steadilly made its way to the southern sea, staying in view of the coast so as not to get lost in uncharted waters. It soon came to the end of the line of Pegasonian ships surrounding what had been the southern part of the Dominion of Katrin, and past the end of the Raging River. Strange ships that definetly weren't of Pegasonian origin were sighted. Wanting to find out more without losing his hidden status, the captain turned around and went up the River a small ways till it came across one of its own ships patrolling it. The captain of the submarine explained what he wanted, and they waited till another one of its own ships came about so word could be reported back as to where it would be redirected.

@Skullbuster, The submarine waited in the river while the ship was sent to investigate. Upon site, it fired a single cannon to signal that it was in the viscinity. it raised a white flag beneath that of its nation to show that it meant no harm. "Greetings!" shouted the captain when he was within hearing distance.

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Malachi smiled. "That is very kind of you kind, Magnum." He said dropping the Kaiser's title. "And I hope you don't mind me calling you that. Not a real big fan of titles. Before we became leaders we were ponies. Also, I would like to know what these "specific conditions" are. Do you think we'll try and use the technology for world domination or something?" He laughed.

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The queen was very surprised to see a ship come out of the water, she kept her eye on it "Hello! Who might you be?" she shouted back "Fancy ship there" she added

 

@@Lordav

 

The old pony was still in a bit of pain "Why dont you just kill me now...thats what your going to do anyway, theres no point in dragging this out" he stood up to face them "Your just needlessly wasting your time on me, I have nothing to gain from giving in, I did my duty to Lixin, and the high priest humiliated me and cast me from my position, so just do it already. I hate it when time is wasted"


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"Well... We could use a couple of flying pegasi... Must say, we dont have many back home, actually we dont have a single one." He added, "You said you lack millitary strength... Im sure we could spare a few of our advisers to help with your troops training."

 

@Skullbuster

"You get something out of it, a nice painless, quick death. We will make you confess sooner ir later... But do take your time, we are enjoying this, arent we lads?"

The other two guards left.

"Bring in the iron maiden!"

 

A huge metal coffin with the face of a mare was brought forth, when it was opened it revealed thousands of long metal spikes.

"Dont worry, itnwont kill you. The spikes are placed in special positions to not hit any vital organs. You will be very much alive."


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The old priest laughed "You wingless bastards are just full of surprises, you masquerade as this great civilization who does no wrong, moral champions, and yet here we are, you torturing an old stallion, and lets not even pretend your doing this for a confession, your doing this for fun...nice to see your ponies true colors, so go ahead, lock me up in your contraption!"

 

 

meanwhile elsewhere in the prison out of the depths, the 2 servants sat in their cell, disconnecting their mental link with the old preist, they teleported outside of the cell when no guards were around and managed to sneak out into the desert


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"Well the goverment has to do something with the likes of us. Yeah we're phsycos and no phsycologist can chamge that... So we do what others cant. And youndeserve this for the murder of mares and children."

They shut the door over the priest, the spikes entering his body; legs, arms, neck, cheat, even parts on his head,

"Dont worry. It takes about a week to bleed to death there, we wont give you the pleasure to."

 

It was soon time serve breakfast, a normal (non-torturer... Those are the only 3) prsion guard walks by the cell of the assistants, it was empt. He runs and pulls a lever. Speakers throughout the prison start an alarm while red bulbs flash on and off. About 100 mounted prison troops (they can outrun you) are sent in the desert. A telegram with a description of the 2 dangerous murders is sent and troops from the city are mobilized to look for them. Posters of them are now on the streets of Hoofsburg and citizens are urged to report any sighting of them.


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"take care now!" the priest said as the diplomat left "If you have more questions feel free to talk to me or any other priest you may find" he waved

 

the outside of the city was rather busy despite it being night time, several markets were still open and ponies still walked and flew to their destinations all across the city 

The diplomat rushed out of the blighted shrine of evil, glad he had escaped their fiendish clutches. After that, he walked around, watching all the pegasus ponies around and marveling at the above ground architecture. Never before he came here had he seen a pony with wings! He had also never understood why ponies built their buildings above ground, but he supposed it made sense for ponies with wings, after all you couldn't fly underground!

 

The diplomat noticed he still had the pamphlet, and started looking at it morbid curiosity, fully expecting it to be an instruction manual in pony sacrifice or something even more horrific...

 

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(Yeah but their cannons sounded different, were less powerful and had less range than european ones. Look at the opium war. The brits bombarded chinese forts and they couldnt fore back)

 

"They can go up to 37 knots! So a couple of days. Ponssia is pretty far away from here."

(I only said I have cannons, not that they're better then yours. And I have a feeling that the Chiniese couldn't teleport once per day.)

 

"Impressive. Or at least, I think that's impressive, I'm not really sure what the standard for airships is... In any event, I'd love hearing about your nation, if you've got time to talk about it."

 

((yes sorry friend.))

 

"Hmm... Very well, that is good to know." Guard said before opening then Emperor's throne room doors.

 

Blue Crystal has once again returned to stare out of his window, but as he heard that door was opened, he turned around to stare the comers.

 

"Welcome to the Crystal Lands. I am Emperor Blue Crystal, as you may guess. It has years, since here was last anypony from somewhere else." he said as he stared at comers interested.

"Guards, you may leave us alone." Blue Crystal said. Guards nob and then left.

Silver Gleam quickly bowed in front of the Emperor, as a sign of respect. "Greetings, I am Magi Silver Gleam. It is an honor to meet you. We have much to discuss..."


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(Its about 65km/h... still in the opium war the chinese lost about 200-300,000 while the brits lost 79)

 

The captain sat down on a box and looked at Peaceful Solution, taking his pipe out of his mouth and blowing out a small cloud of smoke;

"Well what would you like to know about us?"


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Malachi smiled. "That is very kind of you kind, Magnum." He said dropping the Kaiser's title. "And I hope you don't mind me calling you that. Not a real big fan of titles. Before we became leaders we were ponies. Also, I would like to know what these "specific conditions" are. Do you think we'll try and use the technology for world domination or something?" He laughed.

"Not necessarilly, but one can never be to careful." he said smiling. "But we would request that the airships be built by us, and that they be checked between zones, and of course, used only for trade."

 

@Skullbuster, "We would be the captain and crew of this here ship. We hail from Abendstern, and have been aiding our ally, Pegasonia in conquering lands west of us. Who might you be, and what is your business here, If I might ask?"

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Silver Gleam quickly bowed in front of the Emperor, as a sign of respect. "Greetings, I am Magi Silver Gleam. It is an honor to meet you. We have much to discuss..."

"Stand up. I am glad of your words Magi Silver Gleam and yes: We possibly really have. Take a sit of my personal table." he said pointing towards the small dining table. It has in both ends two chairs, made of crystal, but they aren't sharp and ponies have done all they could, to make them softer. Next to it: Has a large round table for other bigger and important cases.

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(Its about 65km/h... still in the opium war the chinese lost about 200-300,000 while the brits lost 79)

 

The captain sat down on a box and looked at Peaceful Solution, taking his pipe out of his mouth and blowing out a small cloud of smoke;

"Well what would you like to know about us?"

"Anything and everything, my friend. But let's start with the basics. What's the political climate in your country?"

 

"Stand up. I am glad of your words Magi Silver Gleam and yes: We possibly really have. Take a sit of my personal table." he said pointing towards the small dining table. It has in both ends two chairs, made of crystal, but they aren't sharp and ponies have done all they could, to make them softer. Next to it: Has a large round table for other bigger and important cases.

"Thank you." Silver Gleam pulled out one of the chairs and then sat down in it. "Now, let's get down to brass tacks, shall we? Personally, I think our nations have much to offer each other. In fact, I already have some ideas on how we can help each other, if you don't mind me being so forward."

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(Everything, ok... It all started 15,345 years ago when...)

 

"Well... The north is cold and icy and the middle is moderate grassland. We have some hot desert down south but the grassland contains most of the nation, meaning moderate weather. However that doesnt really matter as the cities would always be warm and shadowy from all the factory smoke."

 

Soon on the horizon a thin landmass could be spotted, above it raised huge, dense columns of thick, black smoke. Below the airship sailed hundreds of trading and fishing ships. From time to time huge, metal, steam-powered warships could be seen.


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"I am Queen Salazaria of Cidonia, a land south of here, I am here to establish an alliance with Pegasonia" she said to the captain, as the Abendsternians got closer she noticed that they were not ordinary pegasi "Say...what kind of pony are you? ive never seen a pony with features such as yours"

 

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The pamplet had a picture of Lixin the sun goddess drawn on one side, the other side read:

 

"Dont be quick to give up on your goals as Lixin is there to help you, sometimes things dont always go your way and you may be tempted to give up, but just be patient, as Lixin only wants the best for you, and in time, good will come to those who wait"

 

below that was a simple song about Lixin helping her ponies

 

at the bottom of the page it read

"Next week, we will talk about how Lixin can influence your business" 


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One of the guards beats his baton on the coffin after a few hours,

"Changed your mind yet? Old pony."

 

Dogs sniffled the ground as mounted guards surveyed the desert. A group of 10 guards and 3 hounds caught a trail. They started following it immediately, starting to catch up to the runaways.


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the old priest groaned in pain "i killed them!, are you happy now?"

 

out side the sun was out at mid day, and glaring down on the desert sand, making it hot to the touch, the 2 assistants had a few hours head start on them so were able to take advantage of the cool sand, the heat was at its highest, with no quick access to water or shade, traversing the desert could be very dangerous

 

meanwhile in the capital city of Clepto, Hommit walked up to the Duke with a report from his investigation "Well I came up with something interesting, my agent followed the paper trail, it leads from Clexto, now being called Hoofsberg, a lot of the reports originate from the government building there, which lead my agent to believe that thats all the regent there does is just write reports, some came from over seas, however he found a few particularly interesting, and looked further into it, they were connected to supplies going off into the desert to the west, these supplies containing food and water, and an oddly large amount of honey and milk, he couldnt follow them as he risked becoming spotted. He noted that they were heading to the mountains to the west, and must of confiscated a spirit map to help them navigate the desert.  Any idea why they would be sending supplies to the mountains?"


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(Wow... Just wow..... I mean there would be no reason for the mayor to send em there....)

 

"Now... That wasnt so hard now wasnt it."

He turned around,

"Get him out and take him to the medical bay, we cant risk him dying or anything."

 

The guards stopped, the officers ordered,

"Halt, we arent gonna make it through that. Let those criminals go... Poor devils are gonna fry alive without water or supplies."

 

"No, i cant say i would know... There should be a stone quarry in the mountains... But i see no reason for these reports to be sent here...."


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 "Interesting..." Hommit continued "also, before he returned he did some snooping around to see what else he could find,all of thee could be investigated as well, lets see..." He looks at a list "Cidonian nobles attempted to purchase the city with no avail, Ponissians who showed any interest in Cidonian religion and attended the magic school set up have been disappearing, a large number of city funds have been going to a Cidonian noble who is believed to be funding a construction project to turn his home into a palace, my agent even heard of talks, primarily of Ponissian nobles to reenact the "Pegasus genocide" that sounds pleasant, I personally want all of this investigated, but since you are our royal guest, Ill let you decided which one we should look into first" 

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The pamplet had a picture of Lixin the sun goddess drawn on one side, the other side read:

 

"Dont be quick to give up on your goals as Lixin is there to help you, sometimes things dont always go your way and you may be tempted to give up, but just be patient, as Lixin only wants the best for you, and in time, good will come to those who wait"

 

below that was a simple song about Lixin helping her ponies

 

at the bottom of the page it read

"Next week, we will talk about how Lixin can influence your business" 

Well, at first glance the pamphlet seemed harmless enough, the diplomat noted, although the note about Lixin influencing businesses seemed very suspicious. However, he still wan't entirely convinced that the group wasn't a dangerous, pony sacrificing cult. He tried singing the song printed on the pamphlet, just to see what it would sound like.

 

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(Everything, ok... It all started 15,345 years ago when...)

 

"Well... The north is cold and icy and the middle is moderate grassland. We have some hot desert down south but the grassland contains most of the nation, meaning moderate weather. However that doesnt really matter as the cities would always be warm and shadowy from all the factory smoke."

 

Soon on the horizon a thin landmass could be spotted, above it raised huge, dense columns of thick, black smoke. Below the airship sailed hundreds of trading and fishing ships. From time to time huge, metal, steam-powered warships could be seen.

"Ice? I must admit, I have only heard of ice and snow in legend. To my knowledge, it has never snowed in our native land, and ice is an extremely valuable commodity."


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"Yes... i guess it is useful at cooling down drinks and such... but ther than that... its more of an obstacle... Slows down fishing... ruins land... and the central heating in that area has a lot of trouble keeping up."

 

@@Skullbuster

(Religious matters are not in control of the state... church and State... totally different)

"Interesting... well i must say i find the genocide talk as most dangerous. On the contary we would like to encourage pegasi and repopulate our land with the species that we killed so many centuries ago in some terrible times. I must say.... whatever palace that noble of your is building, its draining away your tresury... i mean.."

he searches thrugh a pile of reports,

"look  at his... he consumed about a sixth of your money."


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The song was about staying happy through dark times with the help of Lixin

 

as he sang it, a few ponies near him over heard and hummed along while they walked by

 

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"Thats...quite a considerable amount of money,  when you think the monument that was commissioned and the treasure fleet hardly dented our economy, ill prepare 2 manticores, we will ride over as soon as possible"


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"Manticore... I wish not to offend but i think id prefer to stay on my mount... You know... The large four legged creature i came on. Its just that i have never rode one before... And learning would definetly take some time."

He put on an obviously fake smile,

"And alas, i miss riding old thunder."


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"Fair enough. But I would like it if you took in some of my best engineers and one of my boat builders so they can learn how they are build. It is nice of you to build one for us but we don't want to be dependent on you forever. We want to be able to make our own, and give then our own personal touch.  I know a few sailors who are use to wend sails rather then engines. It might be slower but but thye never run out of steam." He shrugged as he took another drink.

 

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@@Lordav,

 

He then look toward the king with another smile. "We'll be happy to send some Pegasi to your land. Bay be we could send up a trading office there with a few of them. I bet a few of the ones I know wouldn't mind visiting other lands.  And the troops don't really need training. We already have a few of the best trainers there is. Like I said, what he lack in we make up in skill. In fact, about we send one of our trainers to visit your land and maybe show your troops a thing or two." He chuckled.

 

"He's one of our best fighters the the general of combat. He was raised by griffons and joined there military for before he became a mercenary. But now he thinks Quinacta his home. And it is.  But if you want to help make us a little stronger." He took another drink. "We could use some better firepower.  Meaning guns. In return we can trade some of the some of the ones in our armory , you can melt the metal down if you want."

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