Portrait of My OC

[ActualMelon 32]

So I mean I had to start somewhere posting stuff because I'm kinda new so I just worked up this portrait of my OC. It's completely open for criticism of all kinds even if said criticism is it sucks. Like for real anyone who looks at this you don't need to be all nice about it I need to get realistic criticism to improve myself.

 

Thar ya go...

 

Edit: I looked at this thing like a few hours later and was like oh my god what went wrong so I changed some stuff. Chances are I'm gonna go to be wake up the next morning and notice more problems sooooo.

Edited February 8, 2015 by ActualMelon

[RhythmicBrony 19]

to be honest it looks fine, maybe clean up a little around the edges. Does your oc know any other expressions besides the "i wanna blow up the world" face?

[Poetic Stone 1,041]

I like it it looks good to me, I say keep up the good work.

[ActualMelon 32]

to be honest it looks fine, maybe clean up a little around the edges. Does your oc know any other expressions besides the "i wanna blow up the world" face?

Thanks for the feedback, I guess it wouldn't hurt to be more attentive to my linework's cleanliness and as for the expression I mean it's just the face I felt like making I guess maybe I won't do that face anymore or something idk.

[SonicPegasus 284]

http://www.deviantart.com/art/Hair-Tutorial-Link-in-Description-475323614 

Search for Tutorials and try a lot

[~Chaos~ 3,967]

I'm liking it! Your OC' colours are nice. Good job.

[ActualMelon 32]

http://www.deviantart.com/art/Hair-Tutorial-Link-in-Description-475323614 

Search for Tutorials and try a lot

Thanks for the input and I've got the whole try to draw it a lot sort of thing. Like I'm constantly drawing these things.

[1Bit 1,531]

I really dig the style of the picture and the colour is very nice as well. The expression did make me laugh though. Gotta love the 'I wanna blow up the world' face.  I'd say that if you keep going at it, you'll be able to produce some really awesome and unique works!