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I hope I didnt foil your intro steel, I would have tried to end the day earlier but I couldn't post.

 

How do you think you ruined it? It's going fine as it is.

 

 

She then pulls out that statue of rainbow dash and Ezekiel can tell that Dashia is just a color changed version of Rainbow Dash from the statue as comparison.
 

 

Actually that's a good point, what DOES she look like? Last time I checked on the document, there's no appearance description.

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I mean sorry if I forced you to do an intro you otherwise didn't have in mind, is what I meant.

 

Well my only other option would be to have introduced him at a moment that wasn't about to be followed by a night's sleep. From a narrative perspective, the pacing of that seems clunky is all.

 

If some time has passed and they feel comfortable enough that at least he's not going to kill them in their sleep, that's different. Just that:

 

"Nice to meet you total stranger, you can bunk next to me, good night!"

 

See what I mean?

You didn't see the description on the main app?

Guess i never added one. One sec, got to find her mainsheet. Started her in blood moon.

 

Let me look again. I didn't see it at first.

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Well Chip is starting the end of the day, he's going to go to bed... well floor since he'll let the others have the more comfortable spots :P


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Well the farmhouse does have a living room and two bedrooms, so he could sleep on a couch or something and they could lock their doors.

But yeah it certainly is clunky and I understand why it vexes you.

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Chip never explored the house so he doesn't know what's around and he's the nice guy who will let every pony else have a nice place to sleep.


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Well the farmhouse does have a living room and two bedrooms, so he could sleep on a couch or something and they could lock their doors.

But yeah it certainly is clunky and I understand why it vexes you.

 

Also, having one of the party passed out and thus not actually meeting him is going to make things awkward. Guess it's not that different from how Xenith joined with Littlepip first and the others only met her later though.

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By the way Chip is a light sleeper, when you live in a village where you feel the raiders want you dead does that to a pony lol


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Apprearance: very pale sky blue coat, long wavy thundercloud grey mane and tail. Silver wrench with Dash's mark behind it for a cutiemark. Her build almost matches dashes build to the T.

Here ya go. Sorry.

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@@Steel Accord,@@Midnight_Aurora, @@Unicorncob,

 

Or if you guys decide before Chip falls asleep he can use his magic to quickly disassemble a door knob and flip it around so they can lock Ezekiel in a room, 


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Or if you guys decide before Chip falls asleep he can use his magic to quickly disassemble a door knob and flip it around so they can lock Ezekiel in a room, 

 

We can only hope he doesn't take it as a racist gesture :eww:

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We can only hope he doesn't take it as a racist gesture :eww:

He seems reasonable and would understand that we just don't trust a random pony walking up and joining us lol

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Here ya go. Sorry.

 

No worries, although I'm looking at the doc now and it's still absent, as well as backstory so her being down here but not a Dashite also strikes me as odd.

He seems reasonable and would understand that we just don't trust a random pony walking up and joining us lol

 

 

We can only hope he doesn't take it as a racist gesture :eww:

 

A racist gesture? No. Take offense to it? Yes.

 

As far as Ezekiel is concerned, he would not see that as a reasonable measure of security, but a sign that they didn't trust him when he had done nothing to harm them.

 

By all means, if you wish to still do it, do it though.

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Cool if I control Crackshot then so we can end the day for defender

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Oh yeah, granted I know Unicorn would be fine with it, I just like asking permission first lol

 

So if he logs before answering I'll do it anyways  :umad:

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Not fully sure... If anything i'd say more mutant from fallout 3 sense being their strong, beefy and huge lol

 

they're also small in number and usually captured for slavery 

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That's there physiology but if that were that mattered, we'd all either be Brahman, dogs, or . . . centaurs. *shudder*

 

I mean, the earth ponies and unicorns are typical wasteland humans, the pegasi are the Enclave, the Zebra are Caesar's Legion, and it's the alicorns that are the proxies of the Super Mutants.

 

Just going by the brief description, it seems Minotaur culture is very tribalistic but not quite hierarchal enough to be the Legion. So I just went with the Great Khans, especially with the horns and Greshken's name scheme.

 

The Super Mutant comparison would hold more weight if they were all dumb as bricks, impossibly violent, deliberate mutations, and telepathically slaved to the spawn of Lovecraft's fever dreams.

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