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Tyra regained consciousness and shook her head. "Urgh, Sleipnir's mane, what happened...?"

 

She glanced around, noticing she was trapped in a cage, with that mare from earlier sitting nearby.

Filling with an uncontrollable anger, she lunged for the cage bars with a shriek and started wailing on them with her hooves.

 

"FREE US, TRAITOR!" She roared, punching and bucking on the bars, and even trying to chew on them in a rage.


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Pony didnt raise her look from magazine "It was a bloody time you started"<crunch>"awake,it was 3h from ur lite talk." she swallowed her bite and have taken another one "Did i ever sad I'm on<crunch>your side honey?" she turned page on magazine,on one of posters pages "Wow <crunch> this is some relly good stuf.You whant to see it?"

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Blizzard got even more furious, "Dammit lady release my friends and I right now, or you will feel nothing but pain and death, served cold!" he said as he prepared one of his hooves with an ice blast. "Yo are you listening to me?! Want me to come over there and make you listen?!"


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Radiant had been awake for a while now because of having his armor up and he was sitting in the corner of the cage. every other pony begun waking up causing a commotion "Everypony calm down, yelling and barking at the enemy isn't going to get us released." He said standing up examining the cage.


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Tyra's onslaught against the cell bars had not ceased, or even slowed. Her anger-fuelled attacks kept at the same frantic pace.

 

"I will break through these bars," she snarled, trying her teeth once again, "and one I have my axe, this trickster shall know what happens when you turn on a Shatterhoof!"

 

She obviously was not going to stop easily.


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Blizzard the trots over to Raid and whispered, "Are you trying to figure out how we can get outta here? If so I have an idea too that could bust us out. If we combine our ideas, maybe we can get outta here quicker. Well, tell me what's your plan? I have one, but I wanna hear yours first."

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She rasied her look cutting blizzard with it "What do you have to be like that honey...If i whanted you dead I would kill you on surface<crunch>I had opportunity ask your friends if you dont believe me" <took another bite>"And please listen you your royal guard friend i wont relese you until you dont come down<crunch>"look down at magazin "I have my standards"

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Radiant used his magic to pull out his four swords watching Tyra going crazy on the cage. He levitated all four swords toward Tyra manifesting the blades. Once all four of her hooves were on the ground he drove his swords into the ground while setting one on Tyra's back holding her in place with his swords and magic.

 

"Tyra enough, save your energy! This cage is magic and a strong one at that. You'll have more luck getting through my armor spell then this cage." He insisted looking back at Blizzard.

 

Radiant continued keeping his magic on his swords and Tyra keeping her put until she calmed dwn. "being magic I might be bale to detonate my armor to disperse the cage for a second and we escape in that time-frame. But it tires me out me out quite a bit so it's not preferable." he whispered.

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Radiant used his magic to pull out his four swords watching Tyra going crazy on the cage. He levitated all four swords toward Tyra and once all four of her hooves were on the ground he drove his swords into the ground while setting one on Tyra's back holding her in place with his swords and magic.

 

"Tyra enough, save your energy! This cage is magic and a strong one at that. You'll have more luck getting through my armor spell then this cage." He insisted looking back at Blizzard.

 

Radiant continued keeping his magic on his swords and Tyra keeping her put until she calmed dwn. "being magic I might be bale to detonate my armor to disperse the cage for a second and we escape in that time-frame. But it tires me out me out quite a bit so it's not preferable." he whispered.

"My idea was using my new move: IC4. I can coat the cage in the explosive ice, detonate itm, and boom! We're outta here!" he said in a quiet voice. "And if you use a simple magic disruption spell, we can bypass the magic part and you won't get tired! Whaddya think eh? Sound like a good plan?"

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Tyra yelped as she was caught by Radiant's swords, snarling and yelling to be let go, but she couldn't budge. After a few moments, she let out a deep breath.

"I am calm, you can let go of me," she muttered, and so he did.

 

Once free, she sat down with a thud, and glared to the mare outside.

"If these damned bars were not magic," she growled, pouting.


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Radiant looked at Blizzard with a questioned look on his face "Magical Disruption Spell huh? Not sure if any one has told you about different classifications of spells and the Basics of magical study. magical Disruption is an Alicorn level spell, I only have a few spells being the only ones I need as a guard." He looked back at the cage turning back at Blizzard "And that ability of yours affects physical matter, Magical structures and such are Ethereal matters... So can't be frozen or turned to an actual solid such as stone, so it wouldn't work." 

 

Radiant looked back at Tyra who finally calmed down releasing her putting his swords back in his bag. 

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Pony standed up "Ok....Now that you are a little comer<crunch>" walked close to cage and look at our heroes in eyes "Would you like my to free you or would you like to die like rest by been lab rats for Molten army​?"She than pulled device out of her bag "I just have one request  tell my one of your weaknesses,each one of you." She than started to laugh...

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Radiant walked forward taking the first go to see what she was going to do. He walked up to the wall of the cage looking down at the mare "I'm the leader of this group as well as a guard captain of the royal Guard. If I tell you my weakness and you do whatever you're going to do, will you spare my squadron members?" He said narrowing his orange eyes at the mare.


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She started to laugh so hard,she started to roll on ground "What do you think about my that i'm an idiot.I hold all cards in my hooves,you cant negotiation with my.And just for that you will need to tell my you greatest fear with your weakness honey.Just dont forget i'm making rules here..."


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Tyra heard the mare's request, and a new anger broiled inside her. She dashed to the bars and slammed her hooves on them, glaring daggers at her.

 

"I would rather die than tell you anything about me!" She snarled, teeth bared in rage, "Do with me what you like, but touch my companions and you will never see another daylight again!"


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Blizzard decided to step forward, "You know what screw it! If nopony else is going to step up, I will. I cannot stand my friends being in a situation like this. My weaknesses are extreme internal heat, whether it's from embarrassment, getting nervous, excited, or love."

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Radiant glared at her as she laughed at him "Well I figured maybe a mule bred mut such as yourself would have a sense of honor at a soldiers sacrifice but I guess I expected too much from you." He said watching as Radiant ran up to the cage wall yelling out his weakness against any type of internal heat.

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Caliber was watching the whole scene, from the corner of the cave. This mare seemed...familiar, to say the least. But no matter. If it meant getting out, he decided to step forward as well. "Take away my sword, and I'm next to nothing." he said boldly. "There is little I can do without it."


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Pony got serius after Tyra said that "You and you stupid litle"she started to yell "companions!If i didnt have plans for you i would murder every last one of you,and than feed you to my worm.."She comed down a litle after Blizzard and Caliber sad there"See is that so hard?!".She than turned on Radiant "Dont get coky with my honey,i have my plans.And i cant let you litle heroes runing around and destroying em just like that?Can I?Just spill  it and you  all be free..."

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Blizzard pleaded, "Tyra, Raid, give it up. There's no other option from this point. Doing what she say is all we can do right now. And don't worry Tyra we'll get the chance to kick her flank another time, but for now, do what she say so we can get free. Please? Come on what else can we lose at this point?"


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Pony looked at Blizzard "You relly think you can destorye my?"She pulled one brosh from her bag and with grin on her face she contineud "When i have this on not a single pony can get close to my,or anny of you stupid spells can hurt my." She than looked at Tyra,she had maniacal look in her eyes "Give it up short short stuff!!!"


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Radiant saw that she didn't do anything to the other two as they shouted their weaknesses. "Well as least she didn't kill them or anything like I expected. But now she's going to readjust combat to work against every weakness we have. She doesn't know much about us so perhaps I can give a false weakness. Basic Hunter and Prey strategy, she's plans on toying with us." He thought to himself.

 

He looked at her narrowing his eyes more, "My ego and not being able to fight with a Squad with me." He said keeping his expression it's usual neutral look.


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Tyra snarled, nearly sending spit onto the mare. She looked back at her companions, the hope draining from their eyes, and it was all up to what she did next. Would she risk her companions' lives for her own pride?

 

No. No Shatterhoof would do such a thing.

 

She closed her eyes and sighed, sitting back in defeat. "I have completely no resistance to magic."

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Blizzard then stepped up, "Ok you got what you wanted, all of us told you our weaknesses, now let us go! We held our end of the deal, now it's your turn!" he said as he grew even more angry at the fact that his friends were put into an uncomfortable position by telling this evil mare their weaknesses.


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She looked at Radiant  "I tough royal guards should be honest and not lie to everyone.But as you see you cant find good guards this days." She looked at her device in hoof "I can say it now,because i see i wont get much of other 3.I know more about you than you ever know.I do my homework..." She jumped back to doge spit from Tyra "...Short stuff  think about your action next time we meet." Than her bag started to beep and blink "She lowered her look on ground and with angry voice started "You cant finde good hendcmen this days,what did they done now....O im sry your freedom.I left you a gift in Blizzard bag,and i will take your magazine.It have some good stuf."She then trowed device towered Tyra "Bombs away!Or rather in your face!" bomb comed in contact with magic barrier,and just started to blink in midle air "I think you can do the rest alone." Darken under her grabbed her and pulled her down and in lest second our heroes could hear "Thaumanova destroyed.West Molten factory destoyed..."

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