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Ice watched in shame as they had pretty much failed their task. There was nothing left to do now, but turn back and face Twilight-- oh wait she was right there, "Um....sorry Twilight.....guess we bombed that one...."

 

He really didn't have much else to say, as he couldn't think of anything.

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"Oh you will be sor...." Twilight started but was cut off by Rarit thet walked right in front of her. "We still can salvage this,we still did not failed." Rarity said looking at Twilight.Twilight sighned and said "You got five minutes."

Rarity smauled and turned to face our heroes "Come..." she started tru smaile "...some one need to pull thet sword from control panel.I can not do it.". She was lieing she could not do thet,but at this moment she thinked our heroes needed to do something, thet will make them feel they did not falled this,and thet they can still do something good for the mission.


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At the molten dog's accusations and Twilight's scolding, Tyra narrowed her eyes as anger overcame her. Anger fuelled by realisation.

 

"The dog is right," She admitted coldly, "We are no heroes. We are simple mercenaries."

 

Nevertheless, she did as she was told, and pulled the sword from the probe.

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"Dont beat up your self over one lost mision." Rarity told to Tyra after she finished pulling the sword from a control panel."And you are not mercenaries...they at list get paid." Rarity finished with a smaile before she started to work around the broken controll panel.


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"It was not just 'one lost mission'," Tyra argued, her narrowed eyes welled up with regret as well as anger, "Cities have fallen under our watch! A harmless Djinn village was destroyed! We have ruined, and even ended innocent lives!"

 

The comment about not getting paid did not help. "And we are doing it all for nothing. Nopony will look at us with respect, only fear and hate."

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"But city's did prosper also." Rarity said as she pushed one blue button,thet did not done annything "You saved Hoelbrak from certan annihilation,you also saved ponys of Vanhoover from Mai Trin.Yes,you did saved even Canterlot." Rarity pulled one lever,it also done noting "You even saved Princess.....You cant be the hero to evryone,but you are the hero to lot of ponys." Rarity onces again tryed and presed the blue button,and like lest time,it done noting.

 

 

(   Hoelbrak - act I.      Vanhoover - act II.    Canterlot - act III )


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Ice sighed as Rarity tried to do something with the probe, but apparently nothing happened. However she was right; they were heroes in a way. They just had to believe it, "She's right. We can do this. We're not a bunch of sad clowns. We're heroes that have made a difference!"


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Tyra listened to Rarity list off the group's achievements, and it was true; despite their mistakes and bad judgement every now and then, they still succeeded in being heroes to some ponies, and even the Princesses!

 

"Aye, you are correct," She conceded, her proud smirk returning, "We cannot let some mistakes slow us down!"


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Rarity smailed thet she sucefully cheered up Tyra,but did not faced her,so Tyra could not know thet.And at this moment Rarity pushed little green button and one spark flyed out of this,now un usablr energy prob,far in the cloudy sky.Rarity wached spark fly,but as soon as it decapired in the sky she returned her eyes down on cotrol panel and said with litle un secure voice "This...this is sending signals to something close by.Here it say its 8 miles north east...But there is noting there,onli one large swamp...." She then looked at our heroes,and with this our heroes could onli see her woride face.Rarity contineu,with still insecure voice said "W_What should we do?"


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Ice thought for a moment. What should they do here? It did seem as though the best option would be to try and solve this and dash as fast as they can to the next location, "We should keep moving. We can't get bogged down by one simple mistake, guys. Victory isn't measured by losses, it's measured by gains. Let's head that way."


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Rarity worried face becomed an smaile after Blizzard sentance. "Yes..." Rarity started right after Blizzard "...we must contineu! Come on all,we should go after this as fest as we can!" Rarity was almost skiping in one place from happyness "Come Twilight!!" She yelled to Twilight thet did not had much believe thet our heroes could actuly do one thing right after this "Sure..." She said in reply to Rarity and then contineu "....you.....coming?" This lest question was aimed at our heroes.


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Ice nodded at Rarity. He thought it was so cute to see her happy, and blushed lightly at her when she spoke, "U-um...of course Rarity. I'm right behind you..."
 

He spoke shakily as he walked up to her. He was getting a bit more nervous because she was simply so beautiful.
 


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With her resolve hardened, Tyra felt more confident than ever to see this mission through to the end. She nodded with a smirk, while Blizzard let out a howl of determination, her tail wagging.

 

"We are ready for anything that witch throws at us!" She declared, pattering on her hooves to psyche herself up, "Bring them in!"

 

Blizzard gave her master a quizzical look, unsure if what she said was correct.


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And with this our heroes were on another adventure into the unknown.

 

They did not walk for long true the forest before they found some sort of a old road thet was probably not used in years.The road was going into the same direction our heroes were moving,and so our heroes used it.And even if the road was old,it was still beter then to walk true tick forest, and because of thet our heroes reached the swamp much fester then expected.

 

Rarity was still leading the group as they walked litle true the swap."Signal is recived some were around here." Rarity said as she looked left then right "Spread out,and try to find what is reciving the signal."

 

The place our heroes needed to look around was not wery large.They were standing in some kaid of mud;east from them was a small moutan with many small rocks on its side thet was facing our heroes;north from them was couple of threes - some looked like they were as old was tbe Equestria;west from our heroes was an river,the river had dirty water,probably because of all te mud around it,and so bottom of it could not be seen.South was thet old road our heroes used to reach this place.

 

 

 

 

(In one of thos old threes there is an lever ;) )


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Ice nodded at Rarity's orders, "Alright. Let's go!" He began searching the surrounding area immediately after. Looking around all the trees and such, but not finding anything of note, "Hm....if I were a not so obvious obvious item of high value....where would I be...?"


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Tyra nodded at Rarity's orders and began creeping around the trees. Blizzard joined her, and they both started sniffing around each tree like bloodhounds.

 

"Where would we find a device in a forest...?" She muttered.

 

The ice wolf began pawing one of the trees, grunting in reaction. Tyra's ears perked up and she trotted over. "What did you find, girl?"

 

She craned her head up and spotted the switch embedded into the tree. "Everypony over here! We found something!"


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Twilight still in her mod - thet our heroes will fall onces again said "Good for you." She did not like thet our heroes falled a mission back at energy prob - but most of all she did not whant to tell to Celestia they done something wrong.

 

But Rarity was a diferent story she was happye thet they found something out here in this swamp.And unlaik Twiligh she moved closer to see what is thet our heroes found - it was an switch embedded into the tree. "Go on pull it!" Rarity said excaitedly to our heroes.


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Within the swamp the captain of the royal guard trudged his way through the murky landscape, the mud and filthy water coating the fur of his legs. He let out a sigh of exasperation as he used his magic to make sure his scarf was wrapped around his neck enough so it would not become coated in mud. "From one mission to another to the prior, the princess is really keeping me busy lately..." He mumbled to himself as his train of thought changed. "I wonder how Tyra is as well as if ice blizzard hasn't gotten himself killed."

 

The stallion continued through the swamp keeping a watchful eye out for any movement so he might find the group he was ordered to meet up with, his magic keeping vines and branches out of his face. "Although if ice blizzard was still with the group, I'm surprised to not of heard him from the edge of the swamp." He said to himself with a small smirk.


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Ice looked around until he saw the switch too. When Rarity looked excited about it, he thought it was adorable, and it made him all fuzy inside to see her so cute. Nevertheless, he was focused on the mission, "Alright! Finally we're getting somewhere positive for a change. Let's do this!" He pulled on the switch.


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Ay the swich moved,rocks thet were on the side of a moutan,thet was east from our heroes current poition,started to fall down and one reviled an long dark coridor behaind them.

 

"At this point if something is in there,probably know we are out here." Rarity started "So there is no point in been quait." She had sighed "You should move in and see what is in there,Twilight and I will stey here and see thet noting gets in or out." Twiligh did not said annything on this,but by looks of it she did not even plan to go with our heroes in this long and dark hole in the mountain.

 

 

 

 

(Two thing,frst to Chip-Rarity and Twilight dont know you are close so with them I am going as planed so far.Second guys you onli see dark hallway onces you all enter I will say you walked a litle and then will post how main room loks like.)


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Ice listened carefully at Rarity's direction. He knew that what he had to do might be a bit off putting due to the fact that this was yet another case in which they had to go into a dark unknown place. However, Ice wasn't about to back down from this, "Alright. No point in wasting a buncha words....let's just get this done."

 

He began walking.

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Tyra watched in awe as the rocks on the side of the mountain shifted, revealing a dank tunnel leading into darkness.

"Amazing!" She gasped, peering inside. She squinted to try and get a better view, but nothing doing.

 

Blizzard suddenly raised her head, sniffing. A scent had been caught in her sinuses. It smelled vaguely familiar; she could smell the tiniest fraction of it on her master.

 

Just as Tyra agreed to walk on into the tunnel, she was nudged by her ice wolf.

"What is it, girl?" She asked, and the wolf began skulking off in the direction of the newcomer. Knowing this could be important, she looked to the group and yelled, "I shall return in a moment!"

 

She trotted off after Blizzard, wondering what she could have smelled.


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Radiant continued through the swamp, beginning to wonder if he was going to find the group soon.

 

Soon he could make out the sound of a loud huffing and the occasional bark. "A wolf? In this region, what would it be doing here?" He questioned as he drew a sword hilt from the harness across his chest.

 

Radiant continued forward keeping his sword at the ready just in case.


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For most of the journy Ticktock had been in a form of quiet contemplation with himself about the way he was acting lately and came to the conclusion that he had been a bit of a selfish jerk, so he desided that (for the sake of Equestria) he would try to be a bit nicer and put his hatred of Twilight in the back of his mind.

 

Ticktoock didnt make a sound. but insted just followed Ice. 


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Radiant continued through the swamp, beginning to wonder if he was going to find the group soon.

 

Soon he could make out the sound of a loud huffing and the occasional bark. "A wolf? In this region, what would it be doing here?" He questioned as he drew a sword hilt from the harness across his chest.

 

Radiant continued forward keeping his sword at the ready just in case.

 

It didn't take long for Blizzard to track down the newcomer, a unicorn clad in impressive armour. Curious, the large ice wolf slowly but carefully approached the stallion, snuffling him. She backed up and her tail began to wag; this was indeed the source of the scent, and he indeed seemed friendly.


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