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Ice looked at his team and back at Tybalt. A small grin grew on his face, "I'm ready willing, and able. Let's get this party started, folks."

 

Keeping his confident grin on, Ice started walking ahead, expecting the rest of his team to follow as well, "Let's do it, guys."


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And with thet our heroes started to follow main three ponys of this forwered camp in the way to the Canterlot.

They walked for minute or so before they exited this forwered camp and could see an army in front of them, all dresed in red - Order agents.

But our heroes could also see, in farr distance, destoryed and burned city of Canterlot. They could see the City thet onli a day ago was an beacon of hope of Equestria, and now it was just ruble of cityit onces was...

 

Our heroes with Tybalt,Twilight and Celestia walked tru the path thet Order agents made, as they walked close to them. This path was made out of respect at there Princess.

"Stey with the agents, we need to walk up there and say word or two, to raise our army moral." Tybalt said to our heroes as he with Twilight and Celestia contineu to walk.

 

When Tybalt,Twilight and Celestia walked away, and Order agents regruped again, our heroes found them selfs surounded by order agents thet loked in front of them self - at there Princess and two commanders. "Did you realy gone head to head with Scarlet?" One mare agent thet by look looked like he was an high rank in Order , asked our heroes with week and quait voice, she probably did not whant for other agents to her thet she was a fan of Divine Fighter's.


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Radiant stepped forward and looked to the mare who appeared to be the one in charge of the small army before them. "While I'm sure there are tales to be told of the past encounters with Scarlet, I highly doubt we should waste the time while within view Canterlot continues to burn and Scarlet continues to get closer to what we believe is a magical ley line." He said sternly.


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Mare lowered her head and turned around, she got embarrassed by one of her hero. She felt awfule, she started to move and quickly got lost in the crowed of Order gents around our heroes. She just whanted to meet her heroes, and all she got was from this 'meeting' was an broken heart.


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Tyra frowned at how dejected the mare looked. She wished to hear an uplifting tale of how the group had confronted Scarlet, but was denied.

 

Scowling, she stood forward and addressed the mare. "Aye, we have faced the witch in combat! With hundreds of molten dogs and pirates on her side, and only the half-dozen of us! And we were the ones standing triumphant!"

 

She puffed out her chest, radiating with pride. "And just like back then, we will take the fight to her, and we will win!"


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"T-thet...." Mare started inicure, and with week voice "....s-sound interesting.". She was still feeling awfule, but at list now she seen thet not evryone from Divine Fighter's are mean ponys with onli victory on there mind.

 

And as this was happeing out in the crowd, back in front of them, commanders Twilight and Tybalt, and Princess Celestia were geting ready for a speach.


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Tyra shot the agent a confident smirk, and stepped forward toward her. "You are correct to put your faith in us, because we will not fail!"

 

She got the feeling she was not the most confident mare, and her smirk turned into a friendly grin.

"However, even our strength has a limit," she went on, "But, I have seen how agents fight, and you are amazing warriors! So I must ask, will you lend us your strength in the coming battle?"

 

She held out a hoof to the mare. "Even a single hoof can change the tide of battle!"


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Mare smailed at Tyra words, her words were soft and yet strong at a same time. Thos simple words had the message she belived thet her heroes were following. She was still litle sad of how one of her heroes treated her, but after Tyra word's, she did not feel awfule as much. "I-I hope I will be use full in this up coming battle...." She started with week and insicure voice onces again, but as she contineu to talk insicurity desapired "...I hope they dispatch me close inaf so I can see how Divine fighter's fight up close."


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Radiant who wasn't one for boasting and had kept out of Tyra's attempt to flourish their reputation. He did feel somewhat guilty for denying her what she wanted but there were better times for such things.

 

He then caught a comment from the mare and he looked back to her. "You'll invaluable on the battlefield, as will all your troops. We are no more heroes then all of you are, I do look forward to fighting alongside you all." He said in an attempt to smooth things over as well as boost her morale and in turn the troops.


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Tyra looked at Radiant, hearing his say, and nodded with a grin. "Aye, well said. You are as fine warriors as we are, and it will be an honour to fight alongside you all!"

 

Her teeth bared in a wider grin as she bowed her head to the mare, and walked back to the Royal Guard captain.

"I feel so ready for this fight!" She declared, punching the air.


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Ice wasn't much for boasting either. But seeing Tyra as hyped as she was did make him feel more like they had a better chance inside, "We all are. None of this would be possible without team support and trust."

 

He grinned, looking at Radiant, "I'll admit, it's been fun working with ya, dude."


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Mare smailed, she opened her mouth to say something but she quickly stoped, as well as evry other talk betwene agents because Princess Celestia was about to speak.

 

"Moment of silens young ones." Princess celestia started with high voice thet evry Order agent could hear her, but even with thet high voice, it still sounded elegant. "I know thet you are afraid young ones, I can see it in your eyes. Thet same fear have taken the heart of me. I know the time will come when courige of ponys fall, and you break all bounds of friedship. But I can say, youngones today wont be thet day. I know thet time of timber wolfs and shater shilds will come when age of pony kind comes to the end, but again young ones today is not thet day, wont be tomorow and wont be even in next hundred years. And I know when thet day finaly comes, thet pony kinds will come crashing down with there swords and shilds up. And so now young ones, look into your heart for evrything you had oncs hold dear in Canterlot. I bid of you, young ones battle today not for my but fot the things you hold dear."

 

After Celestia was finished Agents were silent for couple of moment and after thet they starte to hit ground with there hooves.


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Ice listened intently to Celestia's words. The entire time he kept quiet to let her speak, "We're gonna show them all! Prepare yourselves guys, we're gonna be able to take this down and put it to rest once and for all!"

 

A small grin grew on his face as he listened.


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Radiant remained silent as Celestia spoke to all of the ponies in the area who were ready to head into battle. 

 

Once Celestia was done speaking to everypony they all begun cheering and stomping their hooves. A small grin appeared on his face seeing the morale of all the troops being rather high. However he wasn't one for cheering, he simply waited for the cheering to slow so he could possibly get the group moving so they could spear head the forces.


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As the cheering calm down Tybalt step forwered and yelled, one simple order thet evryone here have been waiting for "Move out." And with it evryone started to move out.

 

They had walkes for around one hour, until they reached burned city of Canterlot, our heroes, with other order agents entered the city tru Trader's forum.

In midle of traders forum there was a small group of order agents with Equestria flag in midle with small badge in corner of it.

Our heroes walked up to the Twilight,Tybalt and Celestia onces they reached Traders forum."Our enemy have been diging in from lest night....as expected." Twilight said, and after her Tybalt contineued "After all this time we finaly have s

Scarlet were we whant her, in our hokves with no posibility of escaping. You ready for this? You ready for finall battle?"


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Tyra sat quietly, rather uncharacteristic of her, and listened to Celestia's speech. A wide smirk crossed her face when the ponies began stomping their hooves and cheering; morale was obviously back up.

 

In the trader's forum, she nodded at Tybalt's question, hopping on her hooves. "I was born ready."

 

Blizzard lowered into a pouncing position and growled, mirroring her owner's confidence.


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Ticktock hit is hoofs on the ground a couple of times before chuckling to himself when he heard Tybalt "Well lets see we're all probably going to die, knowing Scarlett she'll have a back up plan so we will most likely all die with the odds stacked against us... I've had worse odds. Let's do this thing then."  


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Radiant stepped forward and looked to Tybalt. "We're more then ready as well as I believe it would be best if we spearhead the army since many look up to this group, it will only assist the morale of the troops." He said before his gaze shifted to the burning city of Canterlot. "I will make sure nothing stops us from reclaiming Canterlot."


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"I dont expect thet to be too great strategy, as then you will be the frst one to get hurt." Tybalt started "You will go in frst row if you whant thet,but you wont go in front of anny agent,you are equal as all of them.Is thet all right?"

Tybalt point was simple, he did not whant to demorolaise the army by giving Divine fighter spotlight in this battle, they had worth same as annyone other in this battle.


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Ice yawned and stepped forward. This was apparently getting boring to him with all the talking, not moving, and not talking. He was getting a bit tired of Tybalt's worrysome attitude as well, "Just calm down, bro. We got this no problem. We've handled worse before, and we can do it again."


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"That was what I was suggesting, we would be in the front line with the other troops. We would not have the spotlight and would be fighting alongside them instead being toward the rear as if we were the ace in the deck or being protected." Radiant said looking around. "It would only help morale to have fighting alongside the front line." 

 

The captain sighed and looked back to Canterlot. "Either way let's begin the assault so we can retake the city before there's nothing left to salvage." 


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At thet moment Twilight walked in front of a agents and with just one word, started what evryone whanted to do "Charge!!"

 

 

Couple of minutes later our heroes found them self with 20 Order agents charging head on frst Aetherblade position, there were 27 good dug in Aetherblades in from of them thet were shoting fireballs and lightings at our heroes and other agents in hope to kill them ; or at list slow them down. If our heroes whanted to take victory here they would need to take out all enemys or de moralaise them inaf to surrender.


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At the call to charge, Tyra reared up and bellowed an awesome battle cry before drawing her axe and galloping toward the enemy. Blizzard let out a confident howl before joining her.

 

The two ducked and weaved the fireballs and lightning, and once they were close enough to their opponents, they pounced onto them, flooring a pair of fighters.


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Ticktock took in a deep breth "You know sometime, i hate me life... but hey gotta inbrase the adventure!" Ticktock charged into the battle field as well blocking many fire balls and lightning bolt with his magic and returing some fireballs and lightning bolts with his


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As Tyra punched two of aetherblades down, couple of Aetherblades around turned there fokus on her because she was obisuly festest from the bunch and if she was to die would hurt Princes army the most. Couple of arrows from back flyed in her direction as one Aetherblade pirate swinged his sword aiming for her head.

 

 

Ticktock magic shild returned some of fire magic and lighting magic back at Aetherblades. One lighting magic hit dead centar and one Aetherblade pirate was out from future battle. After this aetherblades fokused less magic atack on Ticktock because they did not whant more of richochet and hit them. From now onli arrows were shot at Ticktock.


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