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Radiant charge in with the others, his golden armor armor spell spell enveloping his body before magic begun contacting his armor. He pushed his way through the assault and as he begun to reach some of the Aetherblades four hilts were removed from his harness that ran across his chest. Magical golden blades then manifested from the hilts and the swords lashed out at several of his enemies in an attempt to cut them down.


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Two of Aetherblades pirates were hit by Radiant mighty atack, but 3th one block it sucefully and launched counter atack quickly after sucefull block.

 

As our heroes were fighting, other order agents around were started to clash there wepons with scarlet pirate armada. Battle was going good, Order agents did strike down five of Aetherblades and onli two agents were hurt by fire and lighting magic barage. With this even, one chapter of Equestria history ended and new, chapeter was about to begine...


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Ice started fighting with the others, charging in with full force and holding nothing back, "Come on! Let's make them pay!"

 

He charged in, shooting ice to try and freeze the pirates to the ground and knock them out with a follow-up punch, "Let's go let's go come on!"


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Ice knocked one pirate without a problem but second one expected ice punch so insted to take one free punch he swinged his axe towered Ice face.

 

As battle was happening one Aetherblade pirate in huge armor galopes from back of aetherblade's towered the front - were battle was haplening. And by looks of it this pirate was some high ranking officer. He did not weist anny time, and as soon as he reach battle he swinged his giant sword and knocked out three order agent with one swing. This action made agent lose battle moral, as they seen what this thing can do. This creature quickly contineu to swing sword at next closest person - Tyra.


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Tyra noticed the number of Aetherblades coming her way, and shunted herself into them, knocking them back. The blade of her axe collided with the sword with a loud CLANG before bouncing off, allowing her to buck her hindlegs into the sword wielder.

 

"IS THIS ALL YOU HAVE?!" She taunted her opponents, followed by a hearty cackle, "WE SHALL WIN THE DAY IN MERE HOURS!"

 

The second sword came at her without her knowing, but its wielder was quickly taken down by Blizzard's pouncing on them.


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As soon as Blizzard moved away from Aetherblade high ranking officer, he got back up on his four hooves - it was like onli a fly atacked him. He pick up his sword and charge at agents onces again. Onli unlike lest time he aimed for stupid mutt thet atack him just moments ago. He whanted revage on him, so he swinged his sword down at his paws.

 

As one by one Aetherblade pirate falled, they become more and more desprate. They moved little back, and moment after Aetherblade pirates done thet groumd next to our heroes blow up, ten seconds after another art of ground gone flying into the air - it was another canonade from aetherblades thet were some were behaind this line of Aterblades, thet is from some were with in Canterlot city. As this canonade started couple of Order agents got knoced out from the battle.

And now our heroes had to add another things, next to lighting fireballs and arrows , thet was about to kill them if they contineu to stey in one place.


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Ticktock saw the high ranking Atherblade officer going towards Blizzard and quickly bonded towards him with is sword drawn. Ticktock stayed clear of the explosions and blocked the arrows with his is sword until he slashed at the officers back shouting "Stay away from that wolf!"


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Aetherblade office got slashed by Ticktock, but same as when Blizgard atack him he did not care. He had started to blead from place were Ticktock sword slahed him, but he like a beast of a pony he looked like, did not even let a single word from his mouth, but clearly he was in pain. As he turned to face Ticktock he swinged his sword as hard as he posibly could, his Target was Ticktock body. This Aetherblade officer whanted to return Ticktock with same mesure as he got - Eye for an eye, toot for a toot.


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Ticktock smirked "It's not going to be that easy mate!" As the sword hit Ticktock it just passed straight through him "Here's a hit mate it's called shadow shifting." Ticktock then slashed his sword at the Atherblades side much harder than the first time.


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Blizzard just hopped over the sword swing and snarled before getting into another pouncing position. However, her attack was cut off by her owner's tackling the enemy pony onto his back.

 

"DON'T. TOUCH. MY. WOLF!" She barked, slamming her forehooves into his face with each word.


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Ice knocked one pirate without a problem but second one expected ice punch so insted to take one free punch he swinged his axe towered Ice face.

Ice dive rolled his way out of the axe's line of attack, and charged forward, "Come on! That can't be all you're worth. Maybe this is just a waste of time right here!" A smirk grew upon his face as he rushed back in, flying with a kick right towards his enemy's face.


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Ice knocked out another Aetherblade pirate, by now it was clear thet Aetherblades frst line of defanse will be breach in mater of minutes. There were no more enemis around Blizzard, and no arrows were coming down upon him.

 

Ticktock sword was meet with armor plate on Aetherblade hoove. Ticktock atack got deflected, and aetherblade pirate maid couple of steps back, armor plate on his hoove was destroyed, but he was still able to fight.

But before he could counter atack an small pony charge at him, and in no time she gave him an headbutt. Tyra atack made Aetherblade officer move couple more steeps back. He shaked his head and got ready for caunter attack, bit before he could done annything an canonball striked ground next to him, knocking him out from battle.

At this point two things were clear, frst our heroes stend victoryes and second Aetherblade canons were shooting blindly and could hit annything and annyone at anny moment.

 

"What do you think should be our next priority?" Tybalt said as he galloped towered our heroes "Should we contineu charge at Scarlet army, thet is should we contineu attack before they regrup at next point of interest. Or should we try to find and destroy thos dam..." another canonball exploted near location of our heroes "...canons."

This time our heroes had a choise, would they like to secure easyer battles at long run (destroy canons) or do they see it would be beter to finish this battle quicker but at a cost of lives of some agents.


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After focusing on many of the other enemies while leaving Tyra and TickTock to deal with the officer he heard Tybalt approach them and shortly following the ground exploded from a cannonball impact. 

 

"The cannons have the ability to decimate our forces by themselves especially while we are distracted by combat and can't keep an eye on them." Radiant said looking up at the cannons. "Let alone they can bring down building on top of us if we try to take cover.


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"Well thet is smart desizion." Tybalt said right after Radiant gave his opinion "So if no one has other opi..." But before he could finish he was cut short by another explosion thet happen close by.After dush have fallen back down on group he started again " One who destory thet canon gets a dinner from my, lets move." He said as he started to move deeper into the city.


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Tyra's ears perked up as she heard Tybalt's proposal; free dinner for destroying the cannon.

 

"CHALLENGE ACCEPTED!" She bellowed, and got off the unconscious Aetherblade to sprint for the cannon. Blizzard threw away another one from her jaws before following.


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"Well..." Ticktock said pondering "Seeing as i probably wont survive this a free meal to end it all dosent seem that bad also because I'm technically homeless now if I do survive I want a nice meal." Ticktock went bonding after Tyra "Sorry Tyra but that free dinners mine!"


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And with thet our Heroes with rest of order agents were off, deeper in enemy controled city.

 

 

After ten minutes, our Heroes reached position were this four canons were set. They were not guarded good, and there were onli six Aetherblade pirates guarding them, but next to them was one big pony thet had canon attached to his body. If our hereos are to remember they would remember thet they seen this big pony with Mai Trin on day when Vanhoover got burned. 

As soon as our heroes comed in Aetherblade point of view, they got under havy artillery fire from canons thet were in front of them. This canon fire had pin down our heroes and order agents behaind one of the houses. 

 

After Tybalt seen thet evryone hide safly, he turned to face our heroes and asked them one simple question "Anny idea on how we are going to destory this canons?"


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Ice simply rolled his eyes. Of course his teammates would be all too focused upon food instead of the current objective. That or they were just hungry as always. Regardless, he was ready with an idea, "Um...maybe we should just pound the stupid thing with everything we have until it dies?"


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"If we just charge at them, we wont survive to see another day." Tybalt answered to Blizzard, he then looked around to see onces what agents were doing, and if some one was foolish inaf to get outside from cover and into certain death. After he cheked to see if no thing change he contineued "If we think of charging head on we will need some kaid of magic shild to deflect incoming canon balls, or maybie some sharp shoters thet will shoot at incoming canon balls." But after he finished he sighed "My agents are not thet strong, most of this fighters are just volunteers thet join the battle onli because Canterlot, there home, was atacked. They are not prepared to do annything big like thet." He then looked at our heroes "But if some of you can do it, we could make it, if not, we need some beter plan."


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"In your dreams, friend!" Tyra cackled, galloping ahead of Ticktock, "Nothing shall keep me from free food! NOT EVEN FRIENDS!"

 

She halted with the others, hopping in place as Tybalt contemplated a plan of attack on the cannons.

 

"I have a plan!" She declared, then drew her axe and sprinted ahead, "ATTACK!!"

 

She ran ahead of them, hopping and weaving any cannonfire directed at her.

 

Blizzard stayed with the group, howling her support for her.


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As Tyra's axe hit frst canon ball, her axe flyed away from her as she was pushed back with insane force. Even a stronges pony could not be winer if it gone head to head with a canon ball.

But Tyra was lucky and some Order agents thet were close by pulled her away from danger, but thet could not be said for her axe, it still steyed on midle of battleground, and she could pick it up onli if some one levitated it back to her or after the battle with this canons.

"How did you survive for this long?" Tybalt said after he seen how Tyra acted "So should we try to make circle around them, it will take some time....but at list it is safest path.Should we do this or you got diferent plan?"


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Radiant cast his armor ability and without saying a word walked into the open. Using his magic he retrieved Tyra's axe and levitated it back to her.

 

After her axe was returned he looked to them all. "You all go around I'll distract the cannons." he said as he quickly moved closer to draw their attention.

 

The captain then put more magic into his armor to make it stronger. Almost invulnerable but in doing so he couldn't move nor cast Magic outside of his armor until he releases it.


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Tyra swung her axe to deflect the cannon fire, but was bounced away from the impact, sending her axe flying.

 

Blizzard whimpered as her master rolled onto the ground, and was pulled away from more bombardment by an agent. "My thanks, friend. Now I must retrieve my--"

 

She watched as her axe was levitated toward her, and she turned to see Radiant, who was using his magic to bring it to her.

"Ah, my thanks to you too," she grinned, grabbing the handle in her jaws.

 

She watched as the captain went ahead to distract the attackers while the group went around. She didn't feel right leaving a teammate alone in the fire, but she trusted her leader's judgement and she galloped around to the side. "These cannons will fire no more!"


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It tok our heroes and Order agents five minutes to go around and flank Aetherblade position. But thisfive minutes were time weisted, Aetherblades on Tybalt front regruped and were stronger then before.

 

Our heroes with order agents flanked Aetherblades from back, and they did not notice them - perfect flanking. In front of our heroes there were still six Aetherblades and one big pony with canon on his back.


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Ticktock observed the situation "Ok guys the biggest threat is that big pony with the cannon, we need to take him out first. I sujest that while half of us distracts him the other half will strike. Then once we take him and the other weaker Atherblades out we storm the cannon and reduce them to rubble or maybe try to take them over and use them our self's. How does that sound?"


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