romance Author Seeking Review on all of his works

[Zooman Stan 15]

Hello all, I'm new to the forums and would like some help on my writing. I have several stories and was wondering if any of ya would be willing to check it out.

Here's the link to my FiMFiction.

http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Hianloland%20Rescue%203

I need constructive criticism, not hate or sarcasm.

Thank you so much! 

[Xenomorphic 362]

I could read one or 2

If that y'all makes you happy