ooc Bangcolt Arena! (Fighting/Sol) (OOC)

[Not Yellow Diamond 925]

 

 

Lektra has a Lab. Also please switch it with either the Magic Shop or the Sweet Shop. Switching with the Magic Shop makes the most sense to me, but she should not be able to see the bar from her entryway. I specifically mentioned it's next door to Rarity, and Orion mentioned Wi's is next door to her's. They should both be next door to Rarity's, so maybe put Wil next to the Bar if he's fine with that. This whole section needs to be rearranged a bit.   I figured it was like [Wil][Rarity][Lektra] or [Lektra][Rarity][Wil], but if that doesn't work then one to the side and one to the bottom would work too I guess. But Lektra needs to be next door to Rarity to make sense to have caused noise for Rarity that one time.   Otherwise great!

 

 

TBH, as far as the placement of those 7 shops by the hospitial, i ignored the majority of the previous mentioned in the RP itself. I devided upon what I did based off of Economical standpoint and what would make sense and works well together. 

 

For starters, you couldn't see the bar from your front door since it is directly behind you 

 

Ok, but here is what I can do, I'm not physically redrawing it because, y'know it was on a white board, and I had to erase it, to work on the map of the physical arena itself. So here will be the order, just for you.

 

AJ Bar/Sweet Shop/Rarity's Boutique/Trixie's Magic Shop

REP's Armory/Wilhelm's Lab/Lektra's Workshop/Hospital

 

There ya go. Anything else i should change? Anyone?

[Fractured 2,684]

We are still doing that. Ice was just really impatient before, so for his impatience he's getting another plane slammed on him.

So, the Mario location, or just the plane itself?

[Not Yellow Diamond 925]

I understand you had to erase it, but images can be edited. And it's not a workshop. It's a Labshop if you wanna get technical. But it definitely has lab elements and isn't just a workshop.   Unfortunately that doesn't work still. If the shops let out in the middle as I figure, then neither Lektra nor Wil share a wall with Rarity. I kinda need a wall on the left or right to be shared with Rarity. Can you please move stuff around and put her in the middle between our two labs?

 

This is where i say "no." and for reasoning as well. You put two weapon/chemical/lab shops next to each other, makes sense right? Why would you put a fashion boutique in between two science labs? or next to a science lab period when their is a better location for it. I evaluated economically, sensibly, logistically, geographically, etc. I think moving it to where i mentioned beforehand should be fine. Unless you provide me a legitimate reason as to why i should move it then I don't see the reason to why I should. 

 

I have neighbors who live about 75 yards behind me, and i hear alot of their noise, Rarity's shop and Lektra's would be back to back so I have to invalidate your argument based off of personal expierence, especially due to the fct if you imgined that whatever woke Rarity was occuring on the side of the building closest to her boutique and she sleeps in her boutique, and he bed is angled against the wall closest to Lektra's shop.

 

And I would love to edit image electronically   but i can't  So, I'm not saying i won't move it but I've yet to see a reason why I should and I give you more reason why it would work in the way I had it originally or just moved it to

Edited June 9, 2015 by louisvillepride

[Not Yellow Diamond 925]

 

 

And if the reasoning doesn't make sense to other people? While Lektra and Wil aren't in competition, they're not full contemporaries and would not do well being next to each other. Two labs next to each other is a recipe for disaster, especially since stuff can go wrong and take both out. Simple facts, really.   It's not an argument. It already happened. They share a wall and the map needs to reflect that for continuity. I am very much into continuity.

 

 

Um..? They do share a wall... I had changed it. Lektra shares a wall with Rarity and Wil, I'm not seeing the issue then....

[Not Yellow Diamond 925]

 

 

Where do you have the shops letting out then? I imagine it with the doors in the middle where the horizontal line is. Also the whole don't put two hazardous factories thing next to each other.

 

Nope, imagine it like this

 

door

building

building

door 

 

If that makes sense, the buildngs are back to back

 

Also, "Don't put two hazardous buildings" things.

 

Yeah.. in my originall desgn they weren't... I moved them because you told me to. Inadvertantly. Tell me this, do you put a factory thaat produces smoke, waste, etc. Next to another factory or in between it do you put a person's residence. I'm hoping you see my comparison...

[Not Yellow Diamond 925]

 

 

So you have them let out on the outside of the large rectangle that is the shop area. Well then that fixes the missing wall problem, but creates a lack of next door problem cause one would have to go around to go to Rarity's from Lektra's.   Lektra's has no waste, but is just dangerous. I can't speak for Wil though.   She definitely can't be next to the bar or Wil. What do we do?

 

I brought the waste up simply as a connection, it wasn't meant to be taken as literally.

 

And IMO, i don't care if Rarity takes the walk over to Lektra's, if she is pissed she'll take the time and effort to go take care of the issue

 

Also, i personally think it's fine.  

[Not Yellow Diamond 925]

Oh, no, no. I was going to put Lektra's shop behind Rarity's and moved Wil's and REP's one to the left.

[Not Yellow Diamond 925]

REP, "Resedentially Evil" 

 

Thanks ice for another terrible pun... It's a shop owner who isn't really controlled by anyone.

Edited June 9, 2015 by louisvillepride

[Mars Orbit 729]

I'm just gonna go ahead and bet a ton of bits on lektra.

[Fractured 2,684]

I love it. Just one question. If Magneto isn't known about in Equestria, then who's the first other than him?

It's comic canon that the mirror that lead to Equestria Girls was actually built by Celestia and Starswirl as a trans-universal gateway. With that in mind, it's actually entirely possible Celestia's met Magneto, albeit in pony form, and i'm banking on that chance, because it's awesome.

 

edit: anyone putting bets on Twilight vs Trixie?...

Edited June 9, 2015 by Corona de Adamas

[J.R. 3,183]

@,

 

Excellent point, though it would confuse those who don't know about the mirror, which is practically everypony. Carry on I guess.

 

As for bets, Lektra is too close to both to wager, though for different reasons. Plus she's not one to do this anyway.

IB be all like:

But with snowballs.

Seriously, in my last post, he's actually doing that.

[J.R. 3,183]

I can do that too, and we cancel out. -_-

I'd like to see you try Rambo.

 

That doesn't look like it lends itself to very accurate aiming.

Not really, But few hopefully will still hit.

Not to mention his Cryo style = Agressive.

 

Not strategic.

[J.R. 3,183]

Not strategic? Then he's already lost.

Figured I would start off slow so they could gauge each other.

No, strategic is Maverick style in which he's defensive. But you said no to that. -_-

[J.R. 3,183]

Well unless you DO wanna get annihilated my Magitek weapons?

Nope. -_-

 

Which is why you're fighting what you see.

 

 

Ice decide that his middle name was Rambo.

F8ck Yea.

[Not Yellow Diamond 925]

Um, What? 

 

I think the point you're trying to make is IB's OC did too much over the course of one attack, would that be safe to assume?

[Not Yellow Diamond 925]

Ok... I don't think It's sort of all too much of a problem... I mean idk though since I was never given a set of rules to follow and it is my first RP so I'm not sure. So don't consider me as credible

 

I see your point and I also see another point.

 

I agree with you because yeah, he did quite a bit. And what he did would of taken a lot of time. But at the same time you have to look at what he did. Most of what he did was set up his actual attack and so the only thing I really see as attacking your Oc is Icicles falling but I don't know for sure. Soooo yeah. Best to just wait for a DM

[J.R. 3,183]

Yes. I can't figure out how that looks, and how may attacks that actually is. That's the rule I follow in my own RPs and have trouble thinking in ways other than that.

Since this is my and Pey's RP, the rules may or may not be different.

 

Also in retrospect all I did was just cause ice shards to fall towards your OC in a flashy way, nothing more. -_-

[J.R. 3,183]

I am not saying change the rules. I am just extremely confused about what you did, and posted the way I fight for reference.

In short: Ice shards the size of yards sticks are falling towars Lektra.

 

What do you do? -_-

[P-Jay 1,987]

fluttershy imitation: okay, I can see you both are confused, and annoyed. but, if we just refrain from using any hurtful words, or tones, we can avoid a fight. now...

 

WHATS UP, EVERYBODY?!?!

[J.R. 3,183]

fluttershy imitation: okay, I can see you both are confused, and annoyed. but, if we just refrain from using any hurtful words, or tones, we can avoid a fight. now...

 

WHATS UP, EVERYBODY?!?!

Nah, we're cool.

[Unicorncob 5,692]

Has anyone addressed the fact Strix is getting a free show yet?

[Not Yellow Diamond 925]

 

 

Has anyone addressed the fact Strix is getting a free show yet?

 

Not for long it won't be...

[Mars Orbit 729]

Has anyone addressed the fact Strix is getting a free show yet?

I'm gonna give the situation much more Mars.

Because thats what it needs.

[P-Jay 1,987]

wait wat?

[J.R. 3,183]

wait wat?

*pats head*

This is why I'm your assistant DM to keep you up to speed. -_-

 

Unic's OC Strix, flew into the stands without paying. Also, I think Mars wants to bring Mars in.