OC Feedback: Mother, Father and Son

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Well, the focus is particularly on the father who is the newest OC.

 

Snug Roll (Father):

 

 

 

Embers (Mother) _{Hairstyle not final} :

 

 

 

Sully (Son):

 

 

 

Sully has two other siblings: Meadow Howl and Metro Shade. I've yet to design those two. But these three so far, would you believe that they are parents and child? What about the designs individually?

 

Any feedback would be appreciated.

Edited July 12, 2015 by SunBurn

[Nyan Neon 50]

Snug looks good. I like his color pallet. You might want to change his eye color to something that stands out more, like orange or (more saturated) green. Also, it looks better when the eye color matches the cutie mark, so that's a tip when making his CM. 

 

Embers looks very pretty. I love her colors, they're favorites (red and purple). The eye color looks very nice with the rest of the colors. I'd like to see her final mane style! 

 

Sully is a pretty handsome stallion~ You might want to tone down his body color though. I suggest making it more pastel. The mane and tail look very cool. 

 

Overall, pretty good-looking OCs. Make sure to post their personalities and backstory as well~

 

Oh and by the way, they do look alike, but if you want to improve a little, try to make Sully look more like his mother.

 

sorry for my poor english and constant use of the word "looks"

Edited July 12, 2015 by Nyan Neon