ooc A personal letter for the one I have wronged 1x1 RP

[Yoshikupo 302]

https://mlpforums.com/topic/137156-a-personal-letter-for-the-one-i-have-wronged-1x1-rp-with-illiad-easle/

This is an RP that I thought was brilliant and needed to make. Its about my OC Jade sending a letter to his best friend, how he stole from, finally found her again and now wants to return a jewelry box to her, hoping to try to make amends. aka this will be a romance RP but I didn't know how to do it with so I leave it to random chance to decide. (normal rules apply, blah, blah blah, first come first serve)

 

The letter:

Dear _______

'I know what you might be thinking, how is this pony named Jade? well I used to be your best friend and now that I have found that your in Ponyville I want to give back what I stole, your jewelry box, I know you may have not thought about this at all but I have...it haunts me every night and day because I got my cutie mark from it, if you want whats yours back, then meet me at the bridge over the park. Please come the guilt is killing me even as I write this letter.

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 Sincerely Jade

 

To anyone still debating or haven't checked this, the conflict will come with guards after Jade, just so you know and may be interested now...I hope this doesn't die, all I need is one person.

Edited September 7, 2015 by Yoshikupo

[Illiad Easle 3,171]

@@Yoshikupo,

This interests me,

I only have one Female OC though, I could through down a description if you'd like? Or I could finally get around to making her character profile.

 

You should post in the fantasy RP though.

Edited September 4, 2015 by Illiad Easle

[Yoshikupo 302]

This interests me, I only have one Female OC though, I could through down a description if you'd like? Or I could finally get around to making her character profile. You should post in the fantasy RP though.

either type would work and I did the second one

Edited September 4, 2015 by Yoshikupo

[Illiad Easle 3,171]

All right, a description is easier for me to through down.

I hope you don't mind her being a bit, different, than most ponies.

 

Selena Diamond,

By all outward appearances she resembles a typical crystal (earth) pony of the white variety. Though when she experiences intense emotions she glows with an inner light.

She is not actually a crystal pony though, the difference being that she is actually fragile, and will shatter if enough force is applied to the magical field that holds her together. If broken she will slowly reform through the ambient magic in the air or if magic is applied to her form.

I know this isn't really relevant to this RP, but it might be important later depending on how the story goes.

 

She is average height and build, with a hair/mane style similar to freshly cured Luna.

 

Let me know if you need more info, I will be happy to supply.

[Yoshikupo 302]

@@Illiad Easle,

not that's good enough I will make the RP in a bit

[Ochre_Dust 329]

@@Yoshikupo, 

 

I'd be interested in an RP of this vein with my character Aquamarine Amphora I'd just have to change some minor details of her background. Don't suppose you'd be willing to have something separate? If not, I understand.

[Yoshikupo 302]

@@Ochre_Dust,

 

hmm...I don't know, I cant think of anything for your character to do at the park, if you think of something I will think about it

 

@@Illiad Easle,

 

that will mean a little wait

[Ochre_Dust 329]

@@Yoshikupo,

 

I was thinking that Aquamarine Amphora could reveal to Jade that she's a few months pregnant. Instead of just some random stallion at a party, Jade could have been courting Aqua for a little while before making off with several sets of jewellry she had made. 

[Yoshikupo 302]

@@Ochre_Dust,

 

I could make two RPs, but the jewelry thing happened when they were kids, unless your saying that they were like teens which make this into an entirely different RP...that could still work though (like the one I had planned was more adventures with the other pony getting caught up in the law with him, yours would be like...domestic problems)

[Ochre_Dust 329]

@@Yoshikupo, That is what I was proposing, two separate RPs. So a slightly younger Amphora and Jade? I'm okay with that.

Would you mind if we did it via PMs? I find it much easier to keep track of things for 1x1 RPs with those. 

[Illiad Easle 3,171]

@@Yoshikupo,

Alright, I'll start plotting out a bit of a back story for Selena, I am excited to see how this starts.

[Yoshikupo 302]

@@Ochre_Dust, @@Illiad Easle,

 

yours can be PM's but I will make llliad Easle's an actual RP

 

also yeah that sounds good

[Illiad Easle 3,171]

@@Yoshikupo,

For backstory, I'm thinking Selena had a sort of amnesiac effect soon after the box was stolen, which would explain why she doesn't remember Jade, or the box, until your letter reminded her of it.

 

idk, something like that maybe? 

[Ochre_Dust 329]

@@Yoshikupo, 

 

I'll get started on the first PM then.

[Yoshikupo 302]

@@Illiad Easle, @@Ochre_Dust,

 

why not, that would be good

 

also there is no need I did it first

[Illiad Easle 3,171]

@@Yoshikupo,

 

I can work with that, let me know when you make the first post. 

[Yoshikupo 302]

@@Illiad Easle,

 

soon it takes a while to think of a good way to start something you know?

[Illiad Easle 3,171]

@@Yoshikupo, 

 

I know what you mean, I've been thinking about how to start a few RP's of my own.

Eventually I will be able to work up the courage to start them.

[Yoshikupo 302]

@@Illiad Easle,

 

I posted the RP, this is going to be more action based btw because its a lot more of my ideas going it

[Illiad Easle 3,171]

@@Yoshikupo,

Alright, I do like action. 

 

And there is my first post, don't worry, the rest of my posts won't likely be even a third as long.

I just wanted to set up my character as much as possible.

@@Yoshikupo,

Just had a thought,

If a guard sees the exchange they could think that Selena is an intermediary for you, like an accomplice, that would be an interesting twist. 

Edited September 5, 2015 by Illiad Easle

[Yoshikupo 302]

@@Illiad Easle,

dude I thought of that the second I thought of the RP, your on my level

[Illiad Easle 3,171]

Wow, this guard is actually a cool villain, I can just imagine that out of the public eye she would beat Selena to pieces.

I'm actually scared to find out what will happen next

 

Though I'm surprised at the guard's non-reaction to the fact that Selena's foreleg was shattered by her grip.

[Yoshikupo 302]

@@Illiad Easle,

just saw this...she thought she deserved it, later to be told by backstory of jade and her are told more!

Edited September 6, 2015 by Yoshikupo

[Illiad Easle 3,171]

@@Yoshikupo,

Okay? the second part of your comment didn't make much sense, and the first part, the guard thought Selena deserved to have her hoof crushed? That is pretty messed up.

Though I didn't expect her to get fired though, maybe a reprimand and a demotion but fired? that really sets the guard up to seek revenge later.

 

outside of the armor Selena wouldn't recognize the guard. 

[Yoshikupo 302]

@@Illiad Easle,

my engrish is off sorry, also lets just say she really hated Jade even before this and anyone that she thought was with him she would hate them instantly...I want to keep somethings secret though so its interesting (aka the reason why she was fired and not demoted)