critique wanted Bash Darkly's OC To Pieces

[Darkly SteamGear 110]

Alright, so here we go. *Braces for the bashing he is about to endure*

 

Welcome to bashdarkly.exe where you can bash me about how bad my character page is, or just tell me what I can do to make him sound like more of the super villain

he is then... well... this:

 

All comments are welcome, just don't bash me to the point of which the rules break and everyone dies.  Nobody wants that... Or DO WE?!?!? 

Edited September 20, 2015 by Darkly SteamGear

[Raidoku 12]

That picture looks a f***ing giraffe..XD

Edited September 21, 2015 by Raidoku

[AmberDust 1,118]

This isn't the right way to ask for criticism. ^^' You do actually want help, right? To make a sort of villainous character? Or is your goal to transform him into  "normal" citizen?

I'm sure  we'd help if we knew what you wanted.