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[JDHarding 19]

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Edited December 9, 2016 by JDHarding

[Ghosty13 39]

Amazing I really liked that good work 

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,824]

Ok

 

I notice that you're depending on basic 5ths, which sort of limits to what you can do and makes the key signature blurry. This can be both good and not so good. It's good because it is different and gives a sort of mystery to the piece. However, it can be not so good because it limits what you can actually do to twist the piece around. 

 

Assuming this piece is in the key of C Major, what you've got is this:

 

V of V-ii-V of V-I

 

I see you have a progression in there that does use the vi of the I. Seeing that you used the V of V quite a bit, why not modulate to G and play around that key for a bit. You can then go back to C using the ii of the IV. Since D is also the ii of C, you can use a ii-V-I to get back to C major. 

 

On the sound side of things, I love the slow build-up you've got going there with that piano, leading up to those filtered plucked sawtooths, leading into the sweeping out of the filter. 

 

The dubstep-like section had too much high-end. As Vinyl says "NEEDS MORE BASS!", your piece could benefit from that low end to give it the depth it lacks. Also, the sawtooths at that section have a little to harsh of an attack. Lower the attack a little to give the sawtooths a sort of volume swell. 

 

I like those strings towards the end. What software did you use to get those strings?

 

All in all, it's a great piece, but try to make your chord progressions a bit clearer next time. 

[Officer Strike 152]

I love that song its really nice. Was this for the song competition?

[JDHarding 19]

I love that song its really nice. Was this for the song competition?

 

No, this was for my album. This might be the last song I make for the album.

[Officer Strike 152]

Wow you are just like DJ 3pon lol

[Kivil 1,721]

When I looked at the album name I looked above it because I thought it was telling me where it was. Nope the name of the Album is Above