critique wanted Ask My OC I Guess (Lonk Chase)

[Lonk Chase 255]

If you want to know what I have for him so far, here: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/lonk-chase-r9180

 

I don't think this will gain any traction, but I'll try it.

[icyfire 433]

What is your OC looking at? sorry i do not mean that in a mean way i am just wondering sorry

Edited December 27, 2015 by icyfire888

[Lonk Chase 255]

(OOC)

I had no idea at the time. I was just drawing my OC. I didn't care about that.

 

(IC)

I was looking at that picture over there. It was interesting for a couple of seconds.

[icyfire 433]

Oh. Okay! thanks nice drawing by the way!

[Lonk Chase 255]

Thanks. I tried. Oh well.

 

Gosh darn it MLPForums, let me post.

[Nervous Stitch 813]

Hi there @, 

Since you're not seeming to look for help on improving your OC, I've moved your topic to our dedicated Ask A Pony section in the Cloudsdale Colosseum. 

[Lonk Chase 255]

Hi there @, 

Since you're not seeming to look for help on improving your OC, I've moved your topic to our dedicated Ask A Pony section in the Forum Lounge. 

There was a section for that?

Derpity derp derp.

[Vera Veil 1,732]

from what I have seen and read (it may not mean much seeing how I havent even got a design for my character yet ...) I believe the backstory could work ... hmm I'm gonna pretend the pony looks like a pony (no offence ofcourse and if I do then I'm sorry) but I believe the colour scheme will work with this pony ... it could have the green toned down just alittle (but thats my OCD for ya xD) if given these I would vote 7/10 ... but I'll sit at 6/10 until then

 

also in the backstory in that link you said "he is a mare"

mare = female and stallions = male

[Lonk Chase 255]

 

 

also in the backstory in that link you said "he is a mare" mare = female and stallions = male

I've already been told that.