drama CVM Fanfic In Progress

[AdventurousEddie 18]

I am making a story where two mares Derpy and Pinkie Pie get into a feud about which is greater, cupcakes or muffins. 

 

But since I'm making the story after the events of Season 6, I do not know what to do with Starlight Glimmer. I have only three options, she goes and runs away, works aside of Twilight Sparkle as more tragic events occur in Equestria or kill her off entirely (alongside of other ponies)

I know she would be an interesting character but I have enough on my plate

 

 

 

[Jaxsie (Inactive) 1,343]

Woah -- hold on a sec, haha. How did you get from what seems to be a lighthearted story line to thinking about killing off characters? I think I need some context. What is this story about and what makes it a drama? Based on the little I know, I don't see why Starlight can't be off on a friendship lesson with Twilight or something while Derpy and Pinkie are having their feud. ^^

[AdventurousEddie 18]

Woah -- hold on a sec, haha. How did you get from what seems to be a lighthearted story line to thinking about killing off characters? I think I need some context. What is this story about and what makes it a drama? Based on the little I know, I don't see why Starlight can't be off on a friendship lesson with Twilight or something while Derpy and Pinkie are having their feud. ^^

I got the whole story planned, and know which characters will be killed off, but when thinking about the story a whole, I've forgotten Starlight Glimmer through the process. 

 

Derpy is worried about what may come after these random things occurring in Equestria and  feeling that the magic of friendship is a escape goat so that the leaders can continue lounging around. Derpy decides to work over time as a mail mare to get paid more so she can secure her family and prepare before something else happens. Meanwhile Pinkie Pie comes across something which holds the same ability as the mirror but works freely in the ever free forest. She makes a friend in the process and keeps to herself. Pinkie then decides to make a random party to celebrate everypony in Ponyville with the help of her new firend. Pinkie Pie orders more party equipment then Derpy delivers the package to her place. Pinkie can see that she is in need of a break and be given a smile. Pinkie gets a brilliant plan by hiring Derpy to help her on her special surprise for Ponyville. The two get along but then something went wrong. The two got into a feud about Cupcakes and Muffins and they split after push came to shove. Each of them went to war with each other and so begins the story.

 

From the established story of the two and how they get into a feud, the next event is very spoiler worthy and is the main trigger for many other events and other ponies lives. If you insist, I will explain the next act if requested

Also the feud goes on for a fortnight and I already got Twilight going to meet up with Mayor Mare in the Town Hall about Pinkie Pies special surprise when the big event happens. Rarity is over in Manehatten, Applejack is at the farm taking care of the CMC. Rainbow Dash is over at Cloudsdale and Fluttershy is spending the day with Discord or somepony at home.

 

Also the part I'm not wanting to share isn't the end or the half of the story but just a quarter of the cake