searching [Adv] The portal of the three knives [1x1-guided-GRIMDARK]

[Silver W. Valensnow 196]

So many ponies, l would bet nearly everypony, has a secret. There is one pony however that holds secrets so gruesome and dangerous that it might some day bring forth utter destruction. Can you put a stop to this pony or would you encourage this scheming, every action taken is irreversible and might have other outcomes than you think in the city that never sleeps... Las Pegasus.

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​2 players required: __________ x __________
(Backgroundchecks will de done to determine that both ponies aren't family, in a ship, or anything similarly binding)

​please note that the amount of players in this RP 'might' increase depending on the need for important characters. Also note that, aside from the normal rules that apply, this RP will enforce special rules too, seen below. If you do not want to roleplay by said rules, then please do not apply. When applying you will be required to link a character sheet with a pony-character that also adheres to the rules mentioned below.

​1. Strictly turnbased posting, meaning that if your post is done and posted that you are NOT ALLOWED to edit it with the exception of correcting grammatical/spelling errors and only with the conscent of everyone active in the roleplay. You are also not allowed to send an additional post before it's your turn again.

​2. No substantial timelapses are allowed without properly asking for it in the OOC, meaning that writing of a few seconds is no problem, but that extended periods being skipped, wether characters are together or not, in context, is not allowed without conscent of everyone in the RP, with the exception of the storyteller, me.

​3. Fluxwriting to express yourself should be kept to a minimum, try to use extensive sounds and overly descriptive  auditory words as few as possible. Jibberish is not tolerated, also in a pony's way of talking.

​4. Metagaming or fourth-walling is not allowed.

​5. Absolutely NO CHARACTER CONTROLLING of any kind, even if it fits the plot and/or is inherent to your OC ('s traits/behavior).

​6. repeating events is not encouraged, but it is allowed when properly discussed and agreed upon in OOC by everyone in the RP.

 ​7. The theme of this RP is Grimdark, please do not 'Pinkie Pie' or 'Cadance' around too much, sure, a joke here and there and appreciation are fine, just don't overdo it.

​8. This is a guided RP so do not take control of any externals outside of the exception that your pony might alter them naturally by doing something. Followup-control is allowed if it is already clearly stated that the source was going to behave that way. This right belongs to the storyteller, me.

[4HFan 476]

So many ponies, l would bet nearly everypony, has a secret. There is one pony however that holds secrets so gruesome and dangerous that it might some day bring forth utter destruction. Can you put a stop to this pony or would you encourage this scheming, every action taken is irreversible and might have other outcomes than you think in the city that never sleeps... Las Pegasus.

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​2 players required: __________ x __________

(Backgroundchecks will de done to determine that both ponies aren't family, in a ship, or anything similarly binding)

​please note that the amount of players in this RP 'might' increase depending on the need for important characters. Also note that, aside from the normal rules that apply, this RP will enforce special rules too, seen below. If you do not want to roleplay by said rules, then please do not apply. When applying you will be required to link a character sheet with a pony-character that also adheres to the rules mentioned below.

​1. Strictly turnbased posting, meaning that if your post is done and posted that you are NOT ALLOWED to edit it with the exception of correcting grammatical/spelling errors and only with the conscent of everyone active in the roleplay. You are also not allowed to send an additional post before it's your turn again.

​2. No substantial timelapses are allowed without properly asking for it in the OOC, meaning that writing of a few seconds is no problem, but that extended periods being skipped, wether characters are together or not, in context, is not allowed without conscent of everyone in the RP, with the exception of the storyteller, me.

​3. Fluxwriting to express yourself should be kept to a minimum, try to use extensive sounds and overly descriptive auditory words as few as possible. Jibberish is not tolerated, also in a pony's way of talking.

​4. Metagaming or fourth-walling is not allowed.

​5. Absolutely NO CHARACTER CONTROLLING of any kind, even if it fits the plot and/or is inherent to your OC ('s traits/behavior).

​6. repeating events is not encouraged, but it is allowed when properly discussed and agreed upon in OOC by everyone in the RP.

​7. The theme of this RP is Grimdark, please do not 'Pinkie Pie' or 'Cadance' around too much, sure, a joke here and there and appreciation are fine, just don't overdo it.

​8. This is a guided RP so do not take control of any externals outside of the exception that your pony might alter them naturally by doing something. Followup-control is allowed if it is already clearly stated that the source was going to behave that way. This right belongs to the storyteller, me.

This sounds interesting, are Alicorns allowed? If so I would like to use Damien, if not, I'll use Acrylic. The choice is yours.

 

Damien Bolt: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/damien-bolt-prince-of-bravery-r9385

 

Acrylic: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/acrylic-r9488

 

Just one question, is this to be done first-person or second-person?

Edited June 6, 2016 by Damien & Flash

[crispy fries 433]

@@Silver Snow,

 

Color me intrigued. I'll use Redwood, and there's a link to her in my signature.

[Silver W. Valensnow 196]

Just one question, is this to be done first-person or second-person?

 

​You will be posting in second pony (hehe) perspective, referring to your characters with the names and hes and shes as the story continues to unfold.

 

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@@crispy fries,

 

​Will you be using the regular or the FoE-version of this character?

 

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 ​Now checking both of your sheets

Edited June 6, 2016 by Silver Snow

[crispy fries 433]

@@Silver Snow,

 

I'm using the regular version. I'm not sure if you know, but FoE means Fallout Equestria, and I'm pretty sure this isn't Fallout Equestria.

[Silver W. Valensnow 196]

@, 

l have examined both sheets you handed over and cannot say that l would approve Damien Bolt in this RP, even though his concept is really awesome! Acrylic is another story on the other hoof. He could pass, but his sheet is a little bit short. l could let him in on one condition. One heavy condition and that is that you can only go by whatever is written your sheet for personality. in this goes that.. The smaller the sheet, the bigger the task. You are ofcourse allowed to alter the sheet as much as you like before the RP starts, but you have to keep true to the personality you have already put down.
 

@@crispy fries, 

okidoki, l went ​over your sheet and there are a few things l wanna get down:

​1. l don't have much BGS to go by, so most l have to go by is her personality. This seems fine to me and suits the need of the RP well, but it's still a tad bit generic. l would allow her if you could describe a deeper attribute or trait she has that really defines her as an individual being, since(no offense) it lacks in the BGS.

​2. Going by cannon; 31 is a pretty old age in pony-years, please see if that is what you want and change your sheet accordingly if you do not, but know that this will be held into account in the RP.

3. Let me get this out of the way, for it is very important; l do not expect Oxfordian english, but please try to keep spelling as good as possible. Grammar is not really that big of an issue as long as it is understandable english. 

Edited June 6, 2016 by Silver Snow

[4HFan 476]

@, 

l have examined both sheets you handed over and cannot say that l would approve Damien Bolt in this RP, even though his concept is really awesome! Acrylic is another story on the other hoof. He could pass, but his sheet is a little bit short. l could let him in on one condition. One heavy condition and that is that you can only go by whatever is written your sheet for personality. in this goes that.. The smaller the sheet, the bigger the task. You are ofcourse allowed to alter the sheet as much as you like before the RP starts, but you have to keep true to the personality you have already put down.

 

@@crispy fries, 

okidoki, l went ​over your sheet and there are a few things l wanna get down:

​1. l don't have much BGS to go by, so most l have to go by is her personality. This seems fine to me and suits the need of the RP well, but it's still a tad bit generic. l would allow her if you could describe a deeper attribute or trait she has that really defines her as an individual being, since(no offense) it lacks in the BGS.

​2. Going by cannon; 31 is a pretty old age in pony-years, please see if that is what you want and change your sheet accordingly if you do not, but know that this will be held into account in the RP.

3. Let me get this out of the way, for it is very important; l do not expect Oxfordian english, but please try to keep spelling as good as possible. Grammar is not really that big of an issue as long as it is understandable english.

 

I think I'll re-visit his character sheet before we begin if that's okay with you.

[Hypn0ticD 1,214]

Hey, everyone!

 

While this roleplay idea does indeed look interesting, I have to remind you all of the site's Global Rules - specifically the NSFW portion.

 

To quote:

 

Keep in mind that heavy amounts of gore and violence contribute to NSFW just as much as sexual content, and that links to fanfictions, art or other media containing those themes is prohibited.

Just keep things PG-13, and we'll be square!

[Silver W. Valensnow 196]

 

 

I think I'll re-visit his character sheet before we begin if that's okay with you.

 

​Ofcourse, you have a great concept, just needs a bit more 's all.

[crispy fries 433]

@@Silver Snow,

 

Okay, I edited Redwood's backstory.

[Silver W. Valensnow 196]

Hey, everyone!

 

While this roleplay idea does indeed look interesting, I have to remind you all of the site's Global Rules - specifically the NSFW portion.

 

To quote:

 

 

Just keep things PG-13, and we'll be square!

 

Gotcha, fighting will surely be a part of this roleplay when it is in it's further stages. This will be no-gore, adventure-driven fighting, more in bounds of honor than in bounds of destroying and will have no depiction that will be considdered overgraphical when it comes to my posts. l cannot vouch for how other peoples will post in this roleplay, but since it is a guided roleplay l am not too worried. Could you please send a message to me if one or more persons are being removed from the roleplay, so that l can think on what to do next?

@@Silver Snow,

 

Okay, I edited Redwood's backstory.

 

checking it now...

@@crispy fries, 

 

 Okidoki, please stand-by as l wait for some more possible applicants to compare. You are approved, but not yet in.

[4HFan 476]

​Ofcourse, you have a great concept, just needs a bit more 's all.

I added a bit more to his profile story wise. Let me know if I should work on his personality more.

[Silver W. Valensnow 196]

I added a bit more to his profile story wise. Let me know if I should work on his personality more.

 

Acrylic is an interesting character for sure, but l still have my doubts as to wether you would be able to handle Grimdark. Convince me of that by writing a little Grimdark scene with Acrylic with a maximum of 1,000 characters and sending it to me via PM to read and judge. This is not necessary to do, but know that l will fail Acrylis if you don't. If l find the scene satisfactory you will be in, if not, you can always try another character or wait for one of my next dungeons to come out that features another theme.

[Silver W. Valensnow 196]

 

 

How about I just use a different OC that I have already written a GrimDark story for. I already got in trouble for attaching a link to it so I'll just have to give you the name of my Fimfiction account, It's DamienandFlash. I don't want to mention the title for fear of getting busted yet again, sorry.

 
​l told you to PM me, so l am not responsible. l spoke with the moderator in question and we agreed that you get one more chance, spoil it and l will personally report you. As for your fimfiction, l asked a story about Acrylic specificly and since you have not provided this l am going to stick to my word and not accept himfeel free to try a different character and submit him/her normally this time. If it is a good charcter then l MIGHT considder taking you in.

[4HFan 476]

​l told you to PM me, so l am not responsible. l spoke with the moderator in question and we agreed that you get one more chance, spoil it and l will personally report you. As for your fimfiction, l asked a story about Acrylic specificly and since you have not provided this l am going to stick to my word and not accept himfeel free to try a different character and submit him/her normally this time. If it is a good charcter then l MIGHT considder taking you in.

I am very sorry for all of this, I never intended for this to become so convoluted. I've already PMed you the link to a new story, so here is the link to my OC, Flash Lightning: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/flash-lightning-r9449

[Silver W. Valensnow 196]

@, 

​Scratch what l said in the last post, l do not think you are serious and hereby ask that you do not make any further posts in this thread. Doing so will be seen as harrassment in my eyes, something l will have to report.
!!! Please do not sign up for a Grimdark if you do not want to put your character through it, that is a pure waist of my time !!!