The Unicorn and the Blight: A Dragon age Origins crossover

[Coal 26]

I have recently been working on a story insired by several hours of playing Dragon Age: Origins and then going back to my computer to watch ponies.

 

I have up until this point been uploading it to fimfiction.net but I thought it might be a good idea to share it here as well. Here is the premise.

 

The Unicorn and The Blight

 

"The world of Thedas is on the brink of the fifth Blight and the Grey Wardens are once again needed. Their warnings have been ignored for too long and the world may truly face disaster. One Unicorn Stallion, alone in the world, finds himself pulled into the turmoil and learns that the Wardens may be few in number, but even a single Warden can hold the fate of Thedas in his hooves. "

 

I would be happy if you read it and if you do I would be gratefull to any comments or critique. This is my first time atempting to write something like this so any feedback would be welcome.