request Searching for a pre-reader with good english-skills

[Dracu98 139]

I am not quite sure if this request belongs into this thread, therefore I want to apology if it doesn't.

 

Anyhow, I need help of someone who speaks fluent english or is, even better, a native speaker. I'm currently (slowly) working on a new fanfiction, and even though my english-skills are quite bearable, I still make a lot of grammatical mistakes, which is why I'd need someone to point them out for me.

 

I'll attach the file here so anyone who wants to can take a look at it. It's a sequel, so don't wonder if you're a liiittle confused by the story. And no, I don't know why I talked like some Canterlot-snob at first.

 

So yeah, if you're bored enough to do so, I'd be very thankful if you could pre-read and correct everything I wrote so far. Until then!

 

Edit: Apparently, I am not allowed to upload text-files here. Therefore, please PM me on my FF.de-account if you're interested: http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Dracu98