visual art Attempt Anime

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I know its pretty bad but when i drew this i was inspired about anime and i wanted to create something, I was planning on second character to go along with her but i wasnt inspired enough and now im not quite sure what to do about it  i mean i would like to continue but im not really satisfied of how she looks  mostly my issue is  in her face since i dont really know how to draw eyes or other facial featured and it irritates  me t o a point where i dont really have much inspiration

so if anyone have any suggestions how to improve the face feel free to say them 

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This is actually pretty damn good @ooBrony, great job!

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The only problem I can see is that the eyes are almost entirely glossy, most animes, there is still the white of the eyes to round the glossy parts