visual art Old Arylettopian Comics

[Arylett Charnoa 4,919]

These are, as the name says, OLD. And for my series called Arylettopia, which is... a long story. I won't say much more about it as it could easily take several paragraphs. The first comics I've ever drawn two years ago.

 

I just thought I'd show them because I kind of liked them, and wondered whether my art was good enough to consider making another comic series someday. (I think it's improved by then.)

 

Don't mind the sketchiness and quality:

 

 

[Killian Jones 2,655]

the sketchiness makes them look very grimdark, especially that + the artstyle.

[Dizzy Ditzy Doo! 1,120]

I say no matter what, it's something you should actively pursue if you truly want to bring it back and make a series.

 

Often times, it takes a considerable amount of work before hand to gain the interest of the population. You shouldn't let the results of your first starting comic quickly determine whether or not a series should be made. I know you meant to start out with plot holes and a cliff hanger to draw questions and possible attention/interest. I say press forward with it, atleast a couple more pages before you decide to lay it aside.

 

From reading it, I definitely felt a cold, suspenseful dark atmosphere from it.

 

This is just all my opinion though, but I do feel that if it's something you truly like, why not wing a few more chapters for it?

[Arylett Charnoa 4,919]

the sketchiness makes them look very grimdark, especially that + the artstyle.

 

Grimdark? Yeah, I can see that. It's supposed to be a dank city overrun by corruption.

 

I say no matter what, it's something you should actively pursue if you truly want to bring it back and make a series.

 

Often times, it takes a considerable amount of work before hand to gain the interest of the population. You shouldn't let the results of your first starting comic quickly determine whether or not a series should be made. I know you meant to start out with plot holes and a cliff hanger to draw questions and possible attention/interest. I say press forward with it, atleast a couple more pages before you decide to lay it aside.

 

From reading it, I definitely felt a cold, suspenseful dark atmosphere from it.

 

This is just all my opinion though, but I do feel that if it's something you truly like, why not wing a few more chapters for it?

 

I don't really want to bring it back, persay. Though I might consider it, my art style might have changed to continue it. I never actually have shown it to anyone except my story partner, so it's not really me being disappointed by bad results. I just happened to come across it, felt somewhat proud, and the need to dust it off, and then to show it to people for the first time. I also wanted their opinions as to whether I'm sufficient enough to make other future comic series, and generally on the artwork itself even if it's a bit sketchy.

 

I guess I was successful though. It's supposed to be dark and suspenseful.

[Flow 1,628]

Ah, I remember creating my first comic, but it had no plot whatsoever, cool comic BTW

[Dizzy Ditzy Doo! 1,120]

Grimdark? Yeah, I can see that. It's supposed to be a dank city overrun by corruption.

 

 

I don't really want to bring it back, persay. Though I might consider it, my art style might have changed to continue it. I never actually have shown it to anyone except my story partner, so it's not really me being disappointed by bad results. I just happened to come across it, felt somewhat proud, and the need to dust it off, and then to show it to people for the first time. I also wanted their opinions as to whether I'm sufficient enough to make other future comic series, and generally on the artwork itself even if it's a bit sketchy.

 

I guess I was successful though. It's supposed to be dark and suspenseful.

 

Grimdark? Yeah, I can see that. It's supposed to be a dank city overrun by corruption.

 

 

I don't really want to bring it back, persay. Though I might consider it, my art style might have changed to continue it. I never actually have shown it to anyone except my story partner, so it's not really me being disappointed by bad results. I just happened to come across it, felt somewhat proud, and the need to dust it off, and then to show it to people for the first time. I also wanted their opinions as to whether I'm sufficient enough to make other future comic series, and generally on the artwork itself even if it's a bit sketchy.

 

I guess I was successful though. It's supposed to be dark and suspenseful.

 

I wouldn't have been disappointed, and I don't think you'd be disappointed either, this is after all, a fresh breath you once took long ago on a beginning comic series, just the start of it all as you would say. I feel you have gotten better since then, and if you ultimately consider bringing it back, I have no worries it'll garner favor in a form that might even impress yourself. It's not like anyone here is pressuring you, but perhaps, explore where your newly improved skills can take this piece, and you don't have to even show it to us. We like you for what you've done thus far, and there is so many endless opportunities for this comic series. If it's something you're proud of, I think it'll be interesting. You must have realized it by now, whether or not I know for sure, you do have fans here that are interested in your sense of imagination. Even if it does flop in a bad way, I'm pretty sure your friends and fans wouldn't consider you any less for just trying.

 

It doesn't sound like you have much to lose whether this piece be made or not. No pressure, and no worries, it's something that'll never leave your side. Either way, you have my sincerest support all the way.

[MVC NVMXD JVRXD 2,406]

The darkness of the comic... Is so... creepy... yet awesome!

[Arylett Charnoa 4,919]

I wouldn't have been disappointed, and I don't think you'd be disappointed either, this is after all, a fresh breath you once took long ago on a beginning comic series, just the start of it all as you would say. I feel you have gotten better since then, and if you ultimately consider bringing it back, I have no worries it'll garner favor in a form that might even impress yourself. It's not like anyone here is pressuring you, but perhaps, explore where your newly improved skills can take this piece, and you don't have to even show it to us. We like you for what you've done thus far, and there is so many endless opportunities for this comic series. If it's something you're proud of, I think it'll be interesting. You must have realized it by now, whether or not I know for sure, you do have fans here that are interested in your sense of imagination. Even if it does flop in a bad way, I'm pretty sure your friends and fans wouldn't consider you any less for just trying. It doesn't sound like you have much to lose whether this piece be made or not. No pressure, and no worries, it's something that'll never leave your side. Either way, you have my sincerest support all the way.

Thank you. Those are some very kind words.

 

It seems my partner whom I write Arylettopia with has returned, so bringing back the comic might actually happen. It's all planned out already. Based on an RP we had together. But the RP's not finished, so I didn't want to continue until we got to the end of it because then I'd have to abruptly stop.

 

 

The darkness of the comic... Is so... creepy... yet awesome!

Exactly my intention! So glad to know I got that on the nail. I'll try to replicate it if I ever continue.