critique wanted Pony Art

[Script Chime 184]

I lost track of me previous thread so here is a new one of my new art 

So start the piece that I made once I got my computer back

Yeah I designed Script Chime a bit

Next is this comic I made based on how interactions with me and my friend usually go

Another simple piece I did of my precious Elusive Shadows

These three are all request I took a while back the second one is my favorite

I did fan are of Parlay which turned out really great the entire thing could have been crap due to the clothing

This actually happened to me...I'm not even joking I love the chick who did that by the way 

My friends can be so evil sometimes

I joined a redesign contest and made this

I did this simple piece. I mean Script is still edgy right?

I did this collab with one of my friends and after doing the outline I let her have a blast with coloring the oc before I gave it to her

I did this ponysona meme I wanted to do for a while

This is where Script found her bracelets if you want the full story look here https://www.deviantart.com/dovepetal41/art/How-Script-Found-Her-Bracelets-799187378

Did another piece with Ocean Mist and Dove Petal

Please reference the Audition Room comic

and finally in honor of Pride Month!

I can now have Script Chime spreading gayness like a bisexual chem trail. Anyway I love how this turned out since this also means that this is the first planned and well done piece of Script's new design. I actually love this and this will probably be up there as one of my favorite pieces I've made. 

Happy Pride Month to everyone!

[Script Chime 184]

So more art! I got commissioned to make an edgy phoenix and made this

Also three filly colts decided to taunt an Ursa Minor into chasing them well the pegasus did the other two seem to have just been force into coming along. Let's hope they get out of this alive.

[Sherem 4,807]

the creativity around the drawings is good, no doubt about that...but to have some more "solid" constructive criticism, I would need to know what where you looking to accomplish with your art? or what you want to get out of it? 

[Script Chime 184]

On 6/8/2019 at 12:37 PM, Sherem said:

the creativity around the drawings is good, no doubt about that...but to have some more "solid" constructive criticism, I would need to know what where you looking to accomplish with your art? or what you want to get out of it? 

I'm nto exactly sure what you mean could you maybe clarify a bit

[Sherem 4,807]

2 hours ago, Script Chime said:

I'm nto exactly sure what you mean could you maybe clarify a bit

in more hmmm...simpler terms...why do you draw these pictures? what did you want to accomplish with them? 

[Script Chime 184]

1 hour ago, Sherem said:

in more hmmm...simpler terms...why do you draw these pictures? what did you want to accomplish with them? 

I want to make art into a legitimate career for myself

[Sherem 4,807]

very well, we will have to work with that:

In what Constructive criticism goes here are my thoughts, perhaps you might wanna go into adjusting the ponies limbs and bodies, maybe your style is that they look chubby, but if not you might wanna practice the proportions of chests, legs and snouts with some basing. You'll also need to learn more "efficient" techniques of Shadowing and finally you will need to work on the palette colors, you´re gonna have to go into other tones whether be less dark or less exposure, like natural or neutral grounds and finally small strokes really don´t cut it in to the mlp style...at least that's what my experience has taught me.

these are my commentaries, not the definitive truth take it, take it with a pinch of salt or leave it. Finally all of this is up to you

[Script Chime 184]

9 hours ago, Sherem said:

very well, we will have to work with that:

In what Constructive criticism goes here are my thoughts, perhaps you might wanna go into adjusting the ponies limbs and bodies, maybe your style is that they look chubby, but if not you might wanna practice the proportions of chests, legs and snouts with some basing. You'll also need to learn more "efficient" techniques of Shadowing and finally you will need to work on the palette colors, you´re gonna have to go into other tones whether be less dark or less exposure, like natural or neutral grounds and finally small strokes really don´t cut it in to the mlp style...at least that's what my experience has taught me.

these are my commentaries, not the definitive truth take it, take it with a pinch of salt or leave it. Finally all of this is up to you

Thank you so much I really do want to improve and I'm going to try and use your criticism to improve my art for the better

[Sherem 4,807]

1 hour ago, Script Chime said:

Thank you so much I really do want to improve and I'm going to try and use your criticism to improve my art for the better

good, I really recomend you to go basing as practice so you can work with the proportions of your drawings

[Script Chime 184]

So I did some pieces 

First fan art of Silver Lunar on DeviantArt

And I did Script Chime's room 

If you want more info on it click here

[Script Chime 184]

Lol I think I improved a bit, no? Obviously this is super tongue in cheek. I have developed my art so much lately and I am just so happy!

 

[Dabmanz 2,136]

I like your style it is awesome.