Understanding Confusion

[cord 0]

It's a fic about an OC of mine that tends to over-think things. I thought I should post it here since nobody gave me constructive criticism...actually none at all. Please tell me what you think of it and I will appreciate it dearly.

 

Prologue : http://www.fimfictio...t/story/34373/1

Chapter 1: http://www.fimfictio...t/story/34373/2

Chapter 2: http://www.fimfictio...t/story/34373/3

Chapter 3: http://www.fimfictio...t/story/34373/4

Chapter 4: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/34373/5

Edited June 30, 2012 by cord

[Skye Starlight 223]

Not bad... I actually really like it!