Ponysona

[Mango 21]

Here's just a quick ponysona drawing I did. It`s not really good, and I know I probably could of done better on the lineart, and the shading. It only took me an hour or two to draw and colour, so it looks really sloppy. Please give me lots of critique so I can fix my pony drawings ^^~

[Sepia-chan 495]

You should work on the eye position and the pose of the mouth. Other than that, it seems like a decent drawing.

[One 498]

eye seems a little out of place and to small, I feel that the ear is off by a little bit, the horn seems unusualy small and fat, and thats about all.

[Motion Spark 7,807]

it has a baby butt!!!

[FortyShadows 217]

Yay for ponysonas!

You want a critique? You got one!

-eye should be larger

-lines should be less sloppy (take your time)

-ear could be pointier, and the line on the ear should be lower and not touch the edge of the ear

-front legs could be skinnier at top

-horn should be at a 45 degree angle and be pointer

tip: keep drawing! Maybe you could draw her in another pose. ^^

[Mango 21]

Thanks for the critique everyone! This time I changed the colour scheme for it, since it was way off my original design of her. I also jsut used paintpad for it. So if you have some time, please give me more critique!

[Pencil Hoof 169]

Thanks for the critique everyone! This time I changed the colour scheme for it, since it was way off my original design of her. I also jsut used paintpad for it. So if you have some time, please give me more critique!

 

I like this one a lot more than your other one Though I think your cutie mark should be more... mango like (I'm assuming it's a mango )

[Mango 21]

I like this one a lot more than your other one Though I think your cutie mark should be more... mango like (I'm assuming it's a mango )

 

Awh I was afraid the mango didn't look like a mango. I'm having a hard time shaping it, any advice? C: