Revolution in Equestria

[MultipleTentacles 6]

Please read my story! If you're interested in the backstory, here it is:

 

I was an active member in the Occupy movement, and was very disturbed at the state of the United States. After months and months of off-and-on activism, my feelings finally culminated in this story, which I intended to be inspirational. And fun. (Being too serious about MLP is a mistake, I think.) It's loosely related to Lunar Republic ideas.

 

Anyway, enjoy!

 

EveryponyDance.html

[Acoustic Cloud 2,202]

Hey just read your story, that was pretty good... Not a fan of the occupy sorry but none the less...

This was a good story on the hierarchy and the change in politics.

 

If i only asked for one change...

It was more dialogue than it was describing what was going on. But keeping that in mind, it was a solid tale! 7.9/10 good job!

[MultipleTentacles 6]

Hey, thanks for reading Writing isn't usually my thing, as I prefer to make films, but I felt inspired for this one... I guess I thought the actions were more powerful than descriptions... but I'm happy you liked it!

Edited August 13, 2012 by MultipleTentacles